Hi guys, here I'm back again with a rant.
It's about my favourite subject!
Comments!
Guys, I don't know how clear I can make it to your readers.
YOU GUYS AND YOUR COMMENTS KEEP US GOING!
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COME ON PEOPLE, COMMENT!
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Anyway, it needed to be said and I hope I can reach some of you.
Because really, I'm starting to get annoyed again about not getting the amount of comments in contrast to all the clicks I get.
Bye, for now!
Time to answer your comments!
Chapter 1:
Some1call4MR-E: What makes a crossover exactly?
Firstly:
When named character's and location's from two separate series, get mixed together.
Secondly:
when the behavior's and mannerism's of named character's are identical in nature.
Long and short of it,
The only way this is considered a true crossover, is if the storyline's themselves get mixed together.
Well from the side of Kill la Kill, it was about girl searching for her fathers' killer,
at a very, expensively exaggerated, Highschool where the very CLOTHING they wear,
is utilized as a weapon, and the antagonist of the story,
sought to conquer and enslave the human race, as some sort of food source, in no uncertain terms.
So then, from the side of hero academia, it's about a boy whom aspires to be a hero,
a protector of the weak, like any other shonen protagonist, while in a highschool setting.
This story is no crossover, unless both these background's mingle with each other.
A LIVING piece of clothing can be considered as a support weapon/item,
just as if it was a part of the user.
Tokoyami Fumikage of Class-1A is the most obvious example,
as he literally has a living being, as part of his own, shadow in the sunlight.
So long as the cloth, can be explained as an experimental item,
it is in no way a crossover...
(They've been doing it with spider-man/Izuku stories countless times nowadays, which is so boring)
This is something ENTIRELY new, so I'm honestly hoping this goes well, you know?
-Thanks for explaining to all what a crossover is.
I hope the people read it.
Mmh, maybe I should write inspired by Kill La Kill?
Maybe that would fit better.
Chapter 2
Some1call4MR-E: Unfortunately for F.F.N there are very, 'unimportant' reader's 'strutting' there piss-ass idiocy,
all around here, with their "reporting" ANY 'lemony' 'goodness' on this website.
The only alternative to that is deny, deny-deny-deny, in order for even the,
so-called LIME scene's to be available, like at all, ya'know?
Meh, whatever, just a response of your response.
Now the chapter,
Whose to say, that the SOME of teacher/faculty WANTED Katsuki to brutalize Michi horrifically so?
Quirk superior, Quirkless inferior is the mindset for MOST, of the Hero academia populace which,
leads into WHY, Katsuki could get away with his bullying for so long.
I'm sure at least a HANDFUL of teacher's in the world are not like that but,
if it JUST so happens that the, head management for school's are,
Quirk supremacist's in, any capacity then, it's their job on the line.
Some teacher's would've WANTED to help Izuku but,
whosoever was in control of the school's Midoriya went to,
had told them that, Quirkless CAN be bullied so let it go, or your fired, end discussion.
Some of the fanon, believe that the M.L.A is whom, had the authority to allow all that,
for what Midoriya had gone through with Katsuki back then.
Whose to say Izuku couldn't have gotten burn marks or worse, ya'know?
-If I got reported here, at least I have other sites where my story is published.
You guys would have just to move Wattpad, Ao3 or Tumblr to continue reading. ^^
I kind of agree with you, people must be really Quirk supremacist to allow the abuse Izuku had to endure, only because he was quirkless.
Human are really terrible when someone is different, it's sad but true.
Chapter 3
Some1call4MR-E: Ahem, nothing hurts more, than a 'hit' to a mans PRIDE, ya'know, then again,
Ares could've cut him up JUST a little, before Izuku got at him thereafter.
-I rewrote the chapter a bit, the Rapist was sitting also on Michi's legs, so she couldn't kick him away.
Ares is very confused if he gets ripped away from Michi, turns normal ribbon and then it takes him time to get his bearings back when he is on her head again.
Or he would have strangled the Rapist, don't worry. ^^
Chapter 4
Some1call4MR-E: Let me see now,
So then, just off-text, the incident with sludge villain happened without Michi then huh?
Because that incident is the only general way to get All-For-One, ya'know?
You MAY have forgotten to include that at some point.
-You are right, I didn't wrote it down. I corrected it now. ^^
Chapter 5
Some1call4MR-E: Ah~ Ilda Tenya, at least he mellows out a bit, eventually!
-Naw, I like Iida he is kinda funny because he is so serious XD
Chapter 6
Some1call4MR-E: Michi, Michi, Michi, everyone in class-1A takes a backseat to Michi,
which I suppose means she will be the class-rep instead of Ilda, or is that wrong?
Mezo Shoji gets 2nd place in grip strength, right after Michi.
Tsuyu Asui gets 2nd place in long jump, right after Michi.
The weird little perv, Minoru Mineta, surprisingly gets 2nd place in the side-step, right after Michi.
Do not focus the story entirely on Michi alone,
because EVERYONE has a part, not just your protagonist and Izuku, everyone has part not just them!
-I think you read something wrong, but I wrote it now clearly.
It was never my intention that Michi made all the records.
In the 50-meter Dash Iida is the best with 3.04 seconds, not Tsuyu with her 5.58 seconds.
But I changed Michi's time a bit, now she was fast 5,01 seconds.
In the Grip Strength I intended to make Michi break the record to show what raw power Ares gives her, so nothing to say here.
In Standing Long Jump she is just as good as Bakugo and Aoyama.
In Repeated Side Steps I never said that she beat the little perv Mineta, but I made it clearer now.
In Ball Throw we all now Michi made a good result with 999 meters, but Uraraka broke the record with infinity.
NO ONE can beat this.
The Three Remaining Tests never showed how the kids fared, but Michi was in the top ten for sure, but no other records broke.
So yeah all in all Michi broke one record but was always in the higher ranks in the other test, so it was sure she would be number 1.
If you remember Senkutsu and Ryuuko they both were unbelievably strong, only another Kamui, Satsuki's Juukutsu gave them a challenge.
Since Michi and Ares are inspired by them I don't know what to tell you.
She IS overpowered.
But take away Ares from her or make it impossible for her to use him and you can beat her easily.
Michi is without Ares practically quirkless.
Sure she can do Kung Fu, but against strong Quirks like Shoto's Ice and Fire, what could she do with her Kung Fu?
Nothing she would lose spectacularly.
So nothing more to say, I hope I could explain myself.
Chapter 7
Some1call4MR-E: Firstly, I mis-stepped and it's One-For-All, not A.F.O whoops, my bad there!
Next up, as you write more, here are some background thing's to consider.
Firstly, it's a bad thing on the fact that most of the class name themselves after their Quirk,
as competent villain's like THE A.F.O himself, can trace a heroes family through said name.
It's very dangerous to use your literal quirk as a name, in the event it can be used,
to track you down, and attack your family without your notice...
(Shiguraki Tomura is the Grandson of All-Mights' former teacher Nana Shimura, indeed it's villainous)
Some of the name's are also far too generic, like Yaoyarozu Momo,
the Everything hero, Creati...everything what, exactly?
There must also be a title, to explain the hero, like the, Rainy-season hero/heroine Froppy.
Now then, what is a Class-representative, does ANY ONE,
in the class honestly know what that means, aside from Ilda?
There are not much, if any, extra details put into these particular scene's and other's too,
so if you want, you as the fanfic writer,
can add even more, unique-ness to these scene's on you own terms.
The sports-fest is the most difficult piece of hero academia, as ANY other student,
can be written into, the final one-versus-one battle round, besides the original choice's from canon.
Anyway, for select handful of, stories so far, the fanfic writer's use the excuse of the sports-fest,
grand-prize, to add in the hero academia movie, Two-Heroes, involving I-Island...
The sports-fest winner, would get two ticket's to I-Island,
as the winner and their plus-1 to take with them, to the Island event.
There many other moment's in the series, that can set up the other movies as well,
although I've only gotten the Two-Heroes movie,
so I'm not entirely sure about the rest of them myself.
-You said a lot of things that I can agree on.
Creati is really lame, but I like most of the hero names like Uravety and Froppy.
I don't know if I'm creative enough to give them new names or if others would accept them.
We know the guys under this hero's name already, so I think I will let them be.
I was a class rep once, and I know what to do, so I could give Michi my experience.
Believe me and Michi don't want to do it again.
It's a stressful and unthankful job and all hope you can solve their problems and then get pissy when you can't or have a different opinion. :/
I decide to only write for the series/manga.
Maybe I will do a separate fic where I would tackle the movies but for now, I don't have any interest in them.
Also the Sports Festival…I'm currently rewatching it and thinking about how to add Michi.
I'm getting a headache XD
Jokes aside, I want to thank you for yor long and thoughtful comments, they made me correct and explain things better.
So thank you very much and I hope I don't disappoint you. :D
Now on with the story!
Chapter 8: Villainous Michi
In the end, the hero team out of Izuku and Uraraka…won!
But what a battle it had been!
More often than not Michi wanted to run out of the Monitor Room to help Izuku and Uraraka, thankful Ares stopped her.
He reminded her that Izuku and also Uraraka needed this.
They would never grow as heroes if someone came to their rescue.
Also if she interfered in the battle exercise she would probably be disqualified for her own.
However, seeing Izuku being knocked out from his last manoeuvre and brought to Recovery Girl, Michi felt bad that she didn't help.
Even poor Uraraka had fainted.
The hero team had won, yet how Fumikage said they won the battle but not the war.
All Might picked up the three left standing because now it was time for a review of how anyone feared in the exercise.
"Well, even if I say that the MVP for this battle was young Iida!", told them All Might.
This surprised nearly everyone.
"It's not either of the winners, Ochako or Midoriya?", asked Tsuyu a loud.
"Hmm, well...Why is that? Does anyone know?!"
It was Momo who raised her hand.
"Yes, Mr. All Might. That is because Iida adapted the most to the context of the training. From watching the match, it appears Bakugou acted on his own because of an obviously personal grudge. And as Mr. All Might said earlier it is foolish to launch a large-scale attack indoors. In the same way, taking into consideration the damage he received Midoriya's plan was also rash. As for Uraraka, she let her guard down mid-battle and her final attack was too reckless. If she treated the papier-mache as a real weapon she would not have been able to do something so dangerous. Iida had prepared for his opponent's arrival and assumed it would be a fight over the weapon which made him late in responding to the final attack. The hero team only won because they took advantage of the fact that this was training. They were practically breaking the rules."
Everyone, even All Might, where astonished by Momo's precise and well-thought explanation.
"W-Well, young Iida also has parts of him that could be more relaxed but well that was correct!", confirmed All Might with a thumbs up.
"We should always start with the basics to develop depth of learning. We must strive to devote ourselves wholeheartedly.", lectured Momo everyone. "Otherwise, we cannot become top heroes."
Ares whispers to Michi: "If we have to fight her, we need to be smart. Smarter than we are."
"Yeah, you are-?! Hey! Are you saying we, me is stupid?!"
Time to start a fight Ares and Michi didn't have since All Might continued with the next fight.
Well, Michi and Are were fascinated by all the cool Quirks their classmates had.
Like Todoroki Shoto, who got the win for his team by freezing the whole villain hideout and the villains with it.
Also, Fumikage Tokoyami with his Quirk Dark Shadow, was interesting. It was a bit similar to Michi's own Quirk, the Dark Shadow was also an entity like Ares, just bonded on the birdheaded boy and worked perfectly as an attack and shield in one.
Cool was also Momo with her creation Quirk.
What an incredible power!
To create anything from your body!
Then it was time.
All Might draws Michi and Koji as the villains and Aoyama, the Frenchie and Mina, the alien-looking girl, as heroes.
Okay, this was nothing they couldn't handle.
So Michi explained to Koji her plan.
Everyone knows she is strong, so logically she should protect the bomb.
This is what everyone would expect, however, Michi had another idea.
Koji looked surprised at how she ripped the ruffle on one of her long boots, to get a long thread.
She walked around the room the thread creating a trap for the heroes.
Then she asked Koji to please ask his animal friends to scare Aoyama and Mina.
To make them freak out.
They heard Aoyama's scream because of the hairy spiders that crawled all over him without problem.
Even Mina loud out shouts because of the bats and centipede, who crawled all over her.
The heroes felt like they were in a horror house.
And still no sight of the villains.
After they shook off the creepy crawlers…they found the room with the bomb.
Empty.
"I don't like it.", shudder Mina. "Where are Michi and Koji?"
"Maybe they are searching for us mon ami, that's why they send these disgusting insects after us, so they could both hunt us down.", suspected Aoyama, walking towards the bomb. "Let's grab it before they return."
Unsure Mina followed him.
Something wasn't right.
And she was proven right, as she noted how threads, dark red threads like the ruffles on Michi Ares's supersuit, fall all over her and Aoyama.
Before they could react the threads captured them and Michi and Koji sprung down from the rafters, holding the threads.
"I would say you lose, heroes.", told them Michi smug.
"Oh yeah, don't think so girl!", shouted Mina and tried with her acid to melt the threads, but nothing. "What the?! How is this possible?!"
"Let me try!", said Aoyama, however even his naval laser did nothing to the threads.
Michi made a perfect villain laugh, which made Koji and Ares sweatdrop as she explained: "Ares isn't made out of normal threads. He was born from my DNA, from my blood and bones. When we fuse he becomes indestructible. No one ever managed to cut or melt him!"
"Team Villain, wins!", proclaimed All Might.
After they freed the heroes from the threads and Ares sucks them back into him, they return to the Monitor Room.
All Might complimented the Villain Team for their psychological warfare with the creepy crawlers and for thinking outside the box.
All had expected that Michi would attack and protect the bomb since she was so strong, and tricking the heroes like this was amazing.
Since they had been the last teams the hour was over.
They all left the Monitor Room.
On the ingress of Ground Beta All Might told them: "Good work everyone! We didn't have any major injuries other than young Midoriya, either! You guys took this on seriously! You all did a good job for your first training!"
"To have such a proper class after Mr. Aizawa's class…", began Tsuyu "...it's kind of anticlimactic…"
Nearly every one of the students nodded in agreement.
"We're free to have proper classes, as well! Well then, I must review the results with young Midoriya! Change and return...to the classroom!"
And with that, All Might run away.
While her classmates wonder why All Might left them so fast, Michi knows why.
He is probably out of time…
Nothing more wanted Michi to follow after All Might to look how Izuku was fearing, but she needed to go to the afternoon classes.
She would take notes for her best friend/crush too.
With a sign, she followed after the other girls to the changing room.
As Michi packed her school bag, the door to their classroom opened.
It was Izuku!
"Izu-Chan!", she shouted happily. Oh God, he had broken arms?! She ran over to him and hugged him softly. "I was so worried!"
"Michi-Kun.", he answered back and rubbed his cheek against hers since he couldn't hug.
"You were incredible against Bakugo-Bastard but I had like 10000000 heart attacks because of you?!"
"I'm sorry!"
"Oh, Midoriya's here!", shouted Kirishima Eijiro, as Michi let go of Izuku. "Good work!"
Both turned to their classmates.
Mina, Kirishima and Sero stepped to them.
"Man, I don't know what you were saying during the match, but you were fired up!", told him Kirishima.
"I can't believe you fought evenly with Bakugou, who was second in the entrance exam!", added Hanta Sero.
"You did a good job dodging!", praised him, Mina.
Aoyama joined them saying: "You were far from elegant, but—"
Only to get interrupted by Mina, who praised Izuku again.
Izuku looked nervous from one student to another, before he looked at Michi.
His best friend smiled and gave him a thumbs up.
"You deserve some hero worship."
This made Izuku blush.
"I'm Kirishima Eijirou!", gave the red-haired boy his name. "We're all going over the training together right now."
"I'm Sero Hanta."
"I'm Aoyama Yu—"
"I'm Ashido Mina! You did a good job dodging!"
"I'm Asui Tsuyu. Call me Tsu."
Then the little perv jumped in front of them.
"I'm Mineta!"
"Okay, okay, guys let him breathe!", said Michi making a shu-shu move.
Then they heard how Iida was chesting Tokoyami by sitting on a desk, only for Ojiro and Jiro to tell him to calm down.
Iida never wavers, does he? thought Michi and Izuku together.
Then Denki with Uraraka enter the classroom.
Of course, she asked her teammate why Recory Girl didn't heal him fully, but then he saw how Bakugo was missing.
And off was Izuku to catch Bakugo.
Michi groaned made a facepalm and grabbed her and Izuku's stuff.
"We see us tomorrow guys! Bye!"
And she ran after her best friend aka. crush.
The other teens thought only one thing: Whipped…
Michi stayed silent listener as Izuku tried to explain Bakugo-Bastard why he now had a Quirk, how he didn't trick him.
She was surprised when Bakugo cried, never thought the asshole had such emotions before he declared he would become number one, he was just getting started.
Before Michi could say to Izuku that he should just let it go with Bakugo, All MIght ran past them to talk with the blond.
Just he didn't want to listen and left.
After this, All Might wanted to know from Izuku what he had told Bakugo.
Uh-Oh!
Yeah kinda short chapter, but I didn't want to begin one another Episode in it.
I hope its all right or all might XD
Tell me what you think ^^
Hi guys, here I'm back again with a rant.
It's about my favourite subject!
Comments!
Guys, I don't know how clear I can make it to your readers.
YOU GUYS AND YOUR COMMENTS KEEP US GOING!
FAV AND FOLLOW AND KUDOS ARE NICE BUT COMMENTS GIVE THE AUTHOR LIFE!
EVEN IF YOU JUST SAY GOOD JOB WE GOT SUCH A SERATONIN BOOST THAT WE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTERS OF YOUR FAV STORIES IN NO TIME!
WHY IS THIS SO HARD TO UNDERSTAND?
IT'S A WIN-WIN SITUATION FOR EVERYONE.
YOU CAN EVEN JUST SEND A THUMBS-UP EMOTICON AND WE CELEBRATE HARD!
POSTING AN EMOTICON IS FAST.
YOU AVAOID THE AUTHOR GIVING UP.
DO YOU WANT THAT YOUR FAV AUTHOR GIVES UP ON YOUR FAV STORIES? NEVER FINISHING THEM?
THEN KEEP GOING WITHOUT COMMENTING!
COME ON PEOPLE, COMMENT!
ITS! NOT! HARD!
Anyway, it needed to be said and I hope I can reach some of you.
Because really, I'm starting to get annoyed again about not getting the amount of comments in contrast to all the clicks I get.
Bye, for now!
