Original Posted On Aug. 19, 2024
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Ernestogierbolini07: Read the end to receive your answer.
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BlitzTamer: Read the end to receive your answer.
Calderoneric758: I think that is a good course of action.
Ragnrock Kyubi: Why? You think he's hot?
Kaiser Umbra: No worries. Crying is short hand for Crying for the Moon, another story I wrote. It is a NarutoXHelluvaXHazbin story.
Nisshoku: Interesting.
DecksofArcana: Cool name. Yeah, I got inspired by Shrek 2, when Shrek is trying to use the correct fork… when there is TOO DAMN MANY!
Kat1017: Kaguya isn't related to Naruto. Why would she care?
Gamelover41592: All we know about Lilith is that she thrived in Hell after it's creation, and at one point she separated herself from her family 7 years before Hazbin canon. So, I am basically taking some liberties. BUT, to give a comparison, it is like a child bringing home a stray cat/dog, asking their parents to keep it, and the parents saying no.
DaftMerc39: You are close, but which one makes sense for THIS story? Walter's using 'Dog' as an insult. Yes, this Walter is a vampire, and I will make him do some weird shit, like… crawl on walls like the original Dracula by Bram Stoker. Naruto is gonna be fine, it's just the threat if he fails to impress Lilith that is terrifying. I could have done Naruto being a butler to Marchosias, but if people who are fans from CftM, then they would begin predicting things. It is the liberty I took with Lilith, making her more cold toward people outside her family. Walter FUCKED Kaguya to get the information he needed.
SirTaco: Here's more.
MichaelTheFox: Sorry, time is up. Results are in.
ShadowBloodedge9396: Didn't care for Black Butler, especially season 2. Lucifer is actually all for Naruto being a servant to Charlie, its Lilith who has the big problem with it.
Alucard9635: Well, I didn't write the story for you, so I don't mind if you don't like it.
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Guest: I know, Walter's bad ass.
Guest: That is pretty much how I envision Naruto. On duty, he is Butler. Off duty, he's a playful guy.
Exia Zero: That would be funny.
MEATBICYCLE: I initially didn't plan on bringing Walter in, but after the first chapter, I was rewatching Hellsing Abridged, and I thought it would be a good idea to have him being Lucifer's right hand, and train Naruto to be Charlie's right hand. Oh, I have an idea you'll probably like. Not interested, since you said the movie is Meh.
NaruLemon Stories: I sacrifice my left Sharingan to activate… Izunami!
Guest: no… what?
ZekeDavis: Hm…
Marshman101: Kaguya got fucked, not the other way around.
A boy with Ideas: Hm…
MonsterCritic96: Thank you.
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Fox Boss: Hm…
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DireWolf1412: I plan on showing it. No worries.
Shin: Thank you. This was helpful.
Scheffinator: It does?
OKAY, LETS READ THIS SHIT! I DON'T OWN NARUTO OR HAZBIN HOTEL!
"Hey" = Speaking
'Hey' = Thinking
'Hey' = Memory
"Hey" = To be Determined
Chapter 3: Proper Motivation
Pride Ring, Morningstar Home…
Charlie pulled back, wiping her forehead as Razzle and Dazzle slept peacefully on her bed.
'That should be everything…' She thought, turning to her bedside table and double checking the list she had.
She had packed a bag to send to Walter's Vacation home, all of the things within were for Naruto.
Clothing, mostly, but there were some things Charlie wanted him to have to occupy his time during his breaks.
After double checking, Charlie was about to grab the bag and leave, planning on taking the bag herself, but she stopped.
Glancing at the corner of her room, propped against the wall, was Naruto's sword.
She walked over to it and grabbed it, struggling due to its immense weight.
'Maybe I should get some help.' Charlie thought.
But this thought was shaken out pretty quickly.
'If I ask, then mom will find out what I am doing.' Charlie deadpanned.
Ever since lunch, Charlie has not been particularly happy toward Lilith.
So, to distract herself, Charlie decided to grab clothing and items for Naruto.
Carefully waking up Razzle and Dazzle, Charlie and the two tiny demons brought the sword and bag to the window.
Opening her window, Charlie and Razzle held the sword out the window.
"Okay, I'm letting go." Charlie whispered, Razzle nodding.
The idea was for Razzle to slowly bring the sword to the bottom… but when Charlie let go, Razzle was pulled as it dropped like dead weight.
Charlie and Dazzle winced when it clanged onto the ground, having hit a rock, the blade tip chipping as Razzle was splayed out, tiny swirls in its eyes as the handle had hit him.
'Please don't be heard, please don't be heard, please…' Charlie chanted as she put the bag on her back, grabbed Dazzle and glided down to the ground.
After making sure Razzle was fine, Charlie looked around before she, Razzle, and Dazzle grabbed the sword and dragged it to the garage, getting into her car.
She discretely left her home.
Meanwhile…
Naruto wasn't happy.
After Walter scrutinized him during their cooking lesson, Walter spent three hours teaching Naruto basic education material until he was dragged outside for physical training.
Currently, Naruto had a pair of fingerless gloves himself, and was trying to mimic Walter's wire technique.
"Incorrect."
"I KNOW, YOU DON'T NEED TO REPEAT THAT!" Naruto yelled as he once again failed to correctly use the wires.
"If you're going to lose your cool like that, then we may as well skip this for today so I can drown you in the nearby stream?" Walter asked in a cold tone, not joking in that statement.
Naruto felt a chill as he went quiet.
Refocusing on his gloves, Naruto tried to use the wires.
'Walter said to channel magic through them, don't let the magic overflow, keep it thin and sharp.' He thought as he channeled his magic into his wires.
Walter's eyes narrowed as he watched Naruto's magic enter the wires.
It was unrefined, bloated, and lacked control.
Unlike himself, where he could make the wires cut anything, these were like blunt objects that caused concussive damage.
"FUCK!" Naruto screamed as the magic dispersed. "Why am I even learning how to use these?"
"Your weapon of choice is a hunk of metal on a stick." Walter bluntly told the fox. "Effective in outdoor settings, but within the halls of Lucifer's castle, it is restricted by the size of the room. Learning this will give you more versatility in situations your… 'weapon'… allows you."
"As if you know anything about my sword."
"The Executioner's Blade," Walter said as if he was reading from a manual. "Is a butcher knife looking sword that can't be chipped, broken, or rusted. For when it cleaves an enemy, it soaks in the blood, restoring itself with the iron. It's previous owner…" Walters eyes slanted as Naruto's fur bristled, unable to make eye contact with him. "Was an Arena Champion named Zabuza."
Naruto returned his focus on his training.
Walter let out a small sigh, pulling out a cigarette.
The night before, after returning from Wrath, Walter had read both files, now knowing what kind of child he was working with.
"Alright, this training will end for now." Walter said as he approached the fox child, who was all to happy to remove the gloves off of his hands, tossing them aside. "We'll go to good old fashion hand to hand combat training."
Naruto quirked an eyebrow before smiling.
'Finally, something I can understand…'
Two Hours Later…
Naruto convulsed on the ground, his body bruised and bleeding.
Walter looked at his watch, not a scratch or injury on him.
"Okay, take five…" he said before his attention was pulled toward the driveway of his vacation home.
"HELLO~" Charlie called from the car with the window down, turning it off Razzle and Dazzle flying out to greet Walter.
He smiled, petting them before he looked at Charlie.
"Princess." Walter said as he put his watch away and approached Charlie, bowing. "What are you doing here, of all places?"
"I came to drop some things off for Naruto, and to check up on him… where is he?" Charlie asked as she got out of her car, looking around.
Walter pointed behind him.
"Oh, Lord, Naruto!"
Charlie ran to Naruto's side as Walter unpacked the car, which was just Naruto's sword and the bag as Razzle and Dazzle looked at the injured boy with concern.
Meanwhile…
"Darling, have you seen Charlie?" Lilith asked her husband.
Lilith wanted to talk to Charlie about something important, and for the life of her, she couldn't find her daughter anywhere.
"No… I haven't seen her all day." Lucifer said as he looked up from his desk.
Lilith's lips pursed, cupping her cheek as she thought about any place that she may have over looked.
'I could call Seviathan's parents to see if she is over at his house again… or…' Lilith's lips tightened into an irritated face, which Lucifer recognized.
'Oh, dear.' The King thought as Lilith walked up to his desk, grabbing his landline phone, dialing a number.
Walter's Vacation Home…
Walter and Naruto (Who was heavily bandaged) were preparing lunch with Razzle and Dazzle handing them utensils or ingredients when the phone rang.
Charlie looked at the phone, worried that she knew who was on the other side.
Charlie desperately shook her head, signaling to Walter not to answer it… but he did.
"Hello, Dornez…"
"Give Charlie the phone, Walter."
Walter handed it to Charlie.
"It's for you." He said, his stoic mask crumbling slightly from the tone Lilith had used.
Charlie looked at the phone as if it would bite her.
Naruto watched as his master took the phone.
"Mother."
"Charlie, why are you at Walter'?"
"I wanted to check up on…"
"It has only been one day." Lilith interrupted. "You need to come home."
"I just got…"
"I do not care, Charlie."
Charlie grit her teeth, her brow furled in frustration.
She wanted to just hang up.
She wanted to tell her mother off.
She WANTED to rebel…
"I'm…"
Naruto took the phone out of Charlie's hand.
"Oi, leave Charlie alone, she is an adult, so where she goes is none of your fucking business."
Naruto hung up the phone, much to Charlie's surprise and Walter face palming.
Meanwhile…
Lucifer was hollering as Lilith was fuming.
"Oh, I like this kid." Lucifer wheezed as he tried to stop laughing, but failed.
"I am going to wring his scrawny neck if he fails, let him come back, then wring it again!" Lilith declared, slamming the old phone back onto its receiver.
"Now, now, dear." Lucifer said in a soothing tone. "Let's let Charlie spend time with him. After all, if he doesn't like her, how is he supposed to do his duties?"
Lilith didn't stop being angry, but she agreed with Lucifer's statement.
It would be beneficial for Charlie if she and Naruto got along.
After Lunch…
"My Executioner's Blade!" Naruto said in excitement, happy to see his precious weapon.
"I thought you'd want this on your person since Walter basically abducted you yesterday." Charlie said as she handed the bag to Naruto. "Here, all the clothing I was able to get for you, plus a few other things I feel you might like."
Walter put his hand on Naruto back, making him bow.
"Say thank you."
"Oh… uh… Thank you, Master."
Charlie's cheeks puffed out.
"Just call me Charlie. You did earlier!"
"Oh, uhm… slip of the tongue." Naruto said as he looked away.
"Anyway, Naruto, go put your belongings away, I need to talk to Charlie." Walter said as he let Naruto go, looking at the fox, Razzle and Dazzle. "Alone."
Naruto did as told, taking his sword and new clothing upstairs with Razzle and Dazzle accompanying him, much to his delight.
"What do you need to talk to me about, Walter?" Charlie asked, recognizing the serious tone and expression Walter was using.
"Last night, I went to the Combat Arena you bought Naruto from." Walter said producing the two portfolios, with Naruto and Zabuza's names on them. "I got information on Naruto… and his mentor, Zabuza. I recommend you read them when you get home. The arena's owner, Kaguya, kept these on her workers. So, I believe they will be informative."
Charlie agreed, as she HAD asked Naruto who Zabuza was after he blurted the name out, but didn't get an answer.
"But isn't this an invasion of privacy and trust?" Charlie asked in concern.
She wanted Naruto's trust, and she would give him her trust.
This felt like a cheat and breach of privacy.
"I do believe with this," He handed the files to Charlie. "You'll be the master he needs, not the masters he has known. Especially that Arlong fellow."
Concern entered Charlie's body.
With a nod, Charlie put the files away in her car before returning to the house.
She spent the rest of the day with Walter and Naruto before she, Razzle, and Dazzle prepared their return home just as the sun began to set.
"Later, Master."
"Charlie."
"Master."
Charlie sighed and gave Naruto a hug.
She felt Naruto flinch in confusion.
"Train hard, Naruto. I believe in you completely." She said to give him resolve and support.
Naruto was confused.
'So warm…' He thought as he hugged Charlie back.
"I will, Charlie."
A bright and happy smile appeared on her face.
"I'll be back in a month to check up on you." Charlie promised as she let him go, allowing Razzle and Dazzle to hug Naruto, who smiled.
"Okay, I can't wait." Naruto said with a bright smile.
With a final wave goodbye, Charlie, Razzle, and Dazzle drove away.
"Well, I hope you enjoyed today, Naruto." Walter told him. "Because I won't be so lenient from here on out."
"Bring it, Vamp-Fuck!"
Walter sneered at Naruto's statement, but then smirked at the challenge.
Late in the Evening…
Charlie arrived back home, small… no, heavy amounts of dread in her body.
Razzle and Dazzle were in her arms as she entered her home.
"Charlie…"
'Here we go.' Charlie thought as she gave her attention to her mother. "Yes, Mom?"
Lilith wasn't happy, that much was clear.
"We need to talk…"
"Actually, I am tired, so can we pick this up tomorrow?"
Before Lilith could reply, Charlie walked past her, heading to her room.
Lilith was shocked.
'She's never acted like this, even when she was going through her Emo phase.' Lilith thought, mild panic beginning to set in as Charlie, Razzle and Dazzle entered her room.
As the tiny demons prepared a bath for Charlie, said Princess pulled out the files on Naruto and Zabuza.
'Naruto, please forgive me, but I need to know.' Charlie thought as she opened the one on Zabuza, beginning to read it.
Skip, Four and a Half Months, Walter's Vacation Home…
Walter was on his balcony, enjoying the moonlight as he smoked a cigarette, read a book, and sipped from a glass of wine.
However, a faint sound of a window opening caught his attention.
Putting out his cigarette, Walter jumped onto the wall, crawling on it like a lizard.
'Hm?'
Walter, having crawled in a way to not be seen, watched as Naruto jumped out of his bedroom window.
On his back was the Executioner's Blade.
Looking around, Naruto ran from the house.
'Now where does he think that he is going?' Walter thought as his body sank into what could be considered shadow, slinking along the ground, keeping pace with Naruto.
Chapter 3, DONE!
Alright, over 1/3 of Naruto's time has been used, and I wonder where he is heading to so late in the night.
I wonder what Charlie has learned from reading these files, and how will it affect her relationship with Naruto.
Poll results: The majority is Skip the training, use flashbacks. So, I guess this is the will of the people, I shall skip the training. BUT… what should I skip too? Hm? Who knows? I might pull a good original story out my ass and get people hooked.
Or I might fumble and fuck everything up, who knows.
If you want to see more of my NarutoXHelluvaXHazbin content, I recommend Crying for the Moon and all of the one-shots connected to it.
If you enjoyed the chapter, leave a review, even if you hated it because it helps me become a better author.