Disclaimer: I do not in any way own DBZ or any of its characters, Any ways,
here are the ages:
Gohan: 17
Goku: Other World
Goten: 11 1/2
1 Trunks: 12
1.1 Female Saiyijin: 17
(I know, I know, I made Goten and Trunks older but hey, It will make the story better.)
Key:
"…."= Talking
'…'= Thinking
^…^= Telepathy
~*~= Different seen
(…)= Author's Note
ON WITH THE STORY!
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SPECIAL THANKS TO:
Android 71
Otepoti
Kyro
Maria S.
FOR REVIEWING!!
NO THANKS TO:
David- who totally put me down……well not really, the good always out weigh the bad. I don't even think you read my story…you're probably a person who hates to read if you didn't give a reason as to why all my stories stink. (The nerve of the guy. Kyro, if your reading this I hope you can track him down and torment him like you do with Vivian.)
~*~
Last Time: "Well I do believe that I'm pure…let's see." She said once her blushed faded away. She hovered above the Nimbus and landed, finding that she was indeed one of a pure heart. (Hooray!)
"I told you Nimbus liked you!" Goten announced happily, already floating in the air beside her.
"Ok, let's go home." Gohan said, as a white aura bursts around him as he flew towards his home in the mountains, the other's in tow.
'Such a beautiful planet.' The girl thoughts as she gazed lovingly at the sky that was bathed in an orange hue from the setting sun, tiny points of light starting to enter the sea of pink and orange.
"It's pretty, isn't it?" Goten commented, noticing how she admired the seen of the sunset.
"Pretty is an understatement, its breathtakingly beautiful. You must be proud to live on such a planet which contains such life giving sights and wonders." The Saiyijin girl replied, sighing in awe.
~*GOHAN'S POINT OF VEIW*~
I was all the while was staring at her, I can't keep my eyes off of her…I just can't believe what I'm was seeing or hearing. Here she is, a pure blooded Saiyijin…one of the most powerful and ruthless creatures of the universe…known for annihilating whole planets in a few seconds, …known for mass massacres and the defiling of bodies, dead or alive. She is here, admiring a sunset…and describing it like…poetry? Something is wrong here, a pure blooded Saiyijin would not give a care about what something looked like…they would find true happiness in fighting and destroying.……Nope, there is something definitely wrong, or my name is Gowan…and its not.
~*Back to original point of view*~
The rest of the flight was pretty much quiet, no audible voice was heard but the thoughts of everyone where running wild, they varied from hunger, to unbelief, to the things that needed to be done at the house. (You can guess which thoughts belong to who.) It was a few minutes later that the group landed in front of the Son residence.
"I like this place, its so cozy looking." The tail barring girl stated as she hopped off Nimbus.
"Well, it is pretty much peaceful around here, except when my sons decide to spar." Chichi said, as she too hopped off the fluffy cloud named Nimbus. "Let's get you situated, then we'll go from there." She finished, walking into the house.
"Alright." The tail barring girl answered, following the mother figure into the small but cozy home.
~*~About 30 minutes and one suitcase later~*~
"What's this?" Chichi asked as she held up something that looked like a Greek goddess gown, only a lot more reviling.
"That is what my mother gave me for my wedding night." The spiky hared girl answered, pain laced in her words.
"Oh…I didn't know you knew your mother." Chichi said, realization of the situation hitting her like a ton of bricks. Would she confide in her?
"Yeah." The girl said quietly, sadness radiating from every part of herself.
'I got to cheer her up…I know!' Chichi thought, getting an idea to make her forget her past for a while. "You know, you haven't bathed yet…and your all sticky from the liquid you were in before you were born…I suggest we clean you up. What do you say?" Chichi asked with a smile.
"Well you do have a point…alright." The tail barring girl answered, and replaced her sad look with a smile.
"Ok, here take off you're clothes and put this on, then I'll come and get you." Chichi stated as she gave her a bath rob, she then left the guest room and proceeded to get Gohan who was sparring with his brother. "Gohan go get some fire wood." Chichi ordered, as she got the bathing barrel ready.
"Ok mom, is this enough? Gohan asked about 2 minutes later, bringing with him about 30 log splits.
"Yup, now go get the hose and fill the barrel up, then start the fire." His ravin hared mother commanded. "Meanwhile I'll go get the girl…oh and Gohan, make sure you and your brother are inside by the time I get her in the barrel." She finished, heading inside the house and towards the guest room. "Ok, it's almost ready, all it needs now is you." Chichi announced when she got in the room.
"I'm ready." The girl stated, having to wrap her tail around her leg because there was not a hole to put her tail through.
"Follow me." Chichi ordered, leading the way to the endless back yard of the house.
~*~Outside~*~
"Both of my son's are inside so-…" Chichi informed once they were outside, but was cut off by the act of the Saiyijin girl sliding off the bath rob and standing in all her naked glory, waiting by the water filled barrel, for her to give the "Ok".
"You can go in now." Chichi said when she saw that the girl was ready to go in.
"Eak!" The sky clad girl squealed when she got in to find the water cold, therefore causing her to jump out of the barrel. "It's cold!" She informed Chichi, who was now by the fire adding more logs to it.
"There, that should do it." Chichi announced, getting up and facing the girl, signaling her go get in again. The naked Saiyijin girl checked the water this time, with her finger before going in. Once she approved of the temperature she went in.
"Oh, that's a lot better." The tail barring girl said, as she dunked her head under the water, getting her butt-length spiky hair wet, causing it to go flat and strait. Chichi then poured some shampoo onto her long mane, and helped the girl wash it.
'I guess this is what it's like to have a daughter…thank you Dende for this opportunity to experience to be a mother to a girl.' Chichi thought happily, and started to hum a happy tune.
"Can you give me the soap?" The shampoo lathered-headed girl asked, causing Chichi to comply. The girl then washed herself, and left her tail for last, she washed it with shampoo since it was covered in fur.
(^-^)*
~*~After the rinsing~*~
The wet Saiyijin climbed out of the barrel, only to come face to face with an unsuspecting visitor. Trunks.
Trunks had just landed by the barrel, thinking that Goten was the one in it, he came to give him the news that his mom did after all let him spend the night…only to find her…in all her nakedness and dripping wet.
~*~At the Look-Out~*~
"Pop, you evil purple pus sack!" Dende threatened the pimple, as he squeezed it, causing it to pop, sending all its contains on the mirror in front of him. "MUAHAHA! Who's the man now you evil pus bag form hell? Who? ME! MUAHAHA!" Dende rejoiced, acting like a jock that had just one a football game. "What are you going to do about it now huh? I won you loser!" Dende taunted the busted pimple on his face. "Well its time for bed now, I'll go to sleep better knowing I defeated the zit from hell." Dende proclaimed, as he climbed into his comfy bed.
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Well you can't say that that chapter was short cause it was a page and a half longer than the last one.
Next time:
How will Trunks react to…er…his situation…how will she act? Find out tomorrow! (May 9,02)
Did Dende really defeat the zit from hell? Or will wake up to find out that the pimple took revenge upon the teenage Namickian. Find out next tomorrow!!
I will up date tomorrow folk so look for it!!
::Goten enters::
Goten: You've been avoiding me.
Me: No I haven't.
Goten: Yes you have, what's wrong…do I smell funny? Dose my breath stink? What is it?
Me: Well, the truth is…
Goten: What? Tell me!
Me: Remember Mr. Pookie?
Goten: My teddy bear?
Me: Yeah.
Goten: What about him…IS HE ALRIGHT!?
Me: ………………er………
Goten: NOOOO!! MR. POOKIE WHERE ARE YOU!?
Me: Well………see…………remember how yesterday you ate Vegetas' food?
Goten: I WAS HUNGRY!!
Me: Well………Vegeta swore revenge on you, and since there's no fighting in the house……………………
Goten: WHAT DID HE DO??
Me:……………he……decapitated Mr. Pookie.
Goten: NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! ::Begins to sob on my shoulder, so I try to comfort him::
Me: My grandma could always sew on his head.
Goten: ::Stands up with murder in his eyes as he goes SS2:: What Vegeta did is unforgivable, he will pay with his life.
Me: RUN FOR COVER EVERYBODY!!
Over and out,
Kioko
Gohan: 17
Goku: Other World
Goten: 11 1/2
1 Trunks: 12
1.1 Female Saiyijin: 17
(I know, I know, I made Goten and Trunks older but hey, It will make the story better.)
Key:
"…."= Talking
'…'= Thinking
^…^= Telepathy
~*~= Different seen
(…)= Author's Note
ON WITH THE STORY!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
SPECIAL THANKS TO:
Android 71
Otepoti
Kyro
Maria S.
FOR REVIEWING!!
NO THANKS TO:
David- who totally put me down……well not really, the good always out weigh the bad. I don't even think you read my story…you're probably a person who hates to read if you didn't give a reason as to why all my stories stink. (The nerve of the guy. Kyro, if your reading this I hope you can track him down and torment him like you do with Vivian.)
~*~
Last Time: "Well I do believe that I'm pure…let's see." She said once her blushed faded away. She hovered above the Nimbus and landed, finding that she was indeed one of a pure heart. (Hooray!)
"I told you Nimbus liked you!" Goten announced happily, already floating in the air beside her.
"Ok, let's go home." Gohan said, as a white aura bursts around him as he flew towards his home in the mountains, the other's in tow.
'Such a beautiful planet.' The girl thoughts as she gazed lovingly at the sky that was bathed in an orange hue from the setting sun, tiny points of light starting to enter the sea of pink and orange.
"It's pretty, isn't it?" Goten commented, noticing how she admired the seen of the sunset.
"Pretty is an understatement, its breathtakingly beautiful. You must be proud to live on such a planet which contains such life giving sights and wonders." The Saiyijin girl replied, sighing in awe.
~*GOHAN'S POINT OF VEIW*~
I was all the while was staring at her, I can't keep my eyes off of her…I just can't believe what I'm was seeing or hearing. Here she is, a pure blooded Saiyijin…one of the most powerful and ruthless creatures of the universe…known for annihilating whole planets in a few seconds, …known for mass massacres and the defiling of bodies, dead or alive. She is here, admiring a sunset…and describing it like…poetry? Something is wrong here, a pure blooded Saiyijin would not give a care about what something looked like…they would find true happiness in fighting and destroying.……Nope, there is something definitely wrong, or my name is Gowan…and its not.
~*Back to original point of view*~
The rest of the flight was pretty much quiet, no audible voice was heard but the thoughts of everyone where running wild, they varied from hunger, to unbelief, to the things that needed to be done at the house. (You can guess which thoughts belong to who.) It was a few minutes later that the group landed in front of the Son residence.
"I like this place, its so cozy looking." The tail barring girl stated as she hopped off Nimbus.
"Well, it is pretty much peaceful around here, except when my sons decide to spar." Chichi said, as she too hopped off the fluffy cloud named Nimbus. "Let's get you situated, then we'll go from there." She finished, walking into the house.
"Alright." The tail barring girl answered, following the mother figure into the small but cozy home.
~*~About 30 minutes and one suitcase later~*~
"What's this?" Chichi asked as she held up something that looked like a Greek goddess gown, only a lot more reviling.
"That is what my mother gave me for my wedding night." The spiky hared girl answered, pain laced in her words.
"Oh…I didn't know you knew your mother." Chichi said, realization of the situation hitting her like a ton of bricks. Would she confide in her?
"Yeah." The girl said quietly, sadness radiating from every part of herself.
'I got to cheer her up…I know!' Chichi thought, getting an idea to make her forget her past for a while. "You know, you haven't bathed yet…and your all sticky from the liquid you were in before you were born…I suggest we clean you up. What do you say?" Chichi asked with a smile.
"Well you do have a point…alright." The tail barring girl answered, and replaced her sad look with a smile.
"Ok, here take off you're clothes and put this on, then I'll come and get you." Chichi stated as she gave her a bath rob, she then left the guest room and proceeded to get Gohan who was sparring with his brother. "Gohan go get some fire wood." Chichi ordered, as she got the bathing barrel ready.
"Ok mom, is this enough? Gohan asked about 2 minutes later, bringing with him about 30 log splits.
"Yup, now go get the hose and fill the barrel up, then start the fire." His ravin hared mother commanded. "Meanwhile I'll go get the girl…oh and Gohan, make sure you and your brother are inside by the time I get her in the barrel." She finished, heading inside the house and towards the guest room. "Ok, it's almost ready, all it needs now is you." Chichi announced when she got in the room.
"I'm ready." The girl stated, having to wrap her tail around her leg because there was not a hole to put her tail through.
"Follow me." Chichi ordered, leading the way to the endless back yard of the house.
~*~Outside~*~
"Both of my son's are inside so-…" Chichi informed once they were outside, but was cut off by the act of the Saiyijin girl sliding off the bath rob and standing in all her naked glory, waiting by the water filled barrel, for her to give the "Ok".
"You can go in now." Chichi said when she saw that the girl was ready to go in.
"Eak!" The sky clad girl squealed when she got in to find the water cold, therefore causing her to jump out of the barrel. "It's cold!" She informed Chichi, who was now by the fire adding more logs to it.
"There, that should do it." Chichi announced, getting up and facing the girl, signaling her go get in again. The naked Saiyijin girl checked the water this time, with her finger before going in. Once she approved of the temperature she went in.
"Oh, that's a lot better." The tail barring girl said, as she dunked her head under the water, getting her butt-length spiky hair wet, causing it to go flat and strait. Chichi then poured some shampoo onto her long mane, and helped the girl wash it.
'I guess this is what it's like to have a daughter…thank you Dende for this opportunity to experience to be a mother to a girl.' Chichi thought happily, and started to hum a happy tune.
"Can you give me the soap?" The shampoo lathered-headed girl asked, causing Chichi to comply. The girl then washed herself, and left her tail for last, she washed it with shampoo since it was covered in fur.
(^-^)*
~*~After the rinsing~*~
The wet Saiyijin climbed out of the barrel, only to come face to face with an unsuspecting visitor. Trunks.
Trunks had just landed by the barrel, thinking that Goten was the one in it, he came to give him the news that his mom did after all let him spend the night…only to find her…in all her nakedness and dripping wet.
~*~At the Look-Out~*~
"Pop, you evil purple pus sack!" Dende threatened the pimple, as he squeezed it, causing it to pop, sending all its contains on the mirror in front of him. "MUAHAHA! Who's the man now you evil pus bag form hell? Who? ME! MUAHAHA!" Dende rejoiced, acting like a jock that had just one a football game. "What are you going to do about it now huh? I won you loser!" Dende taunted the busted pimple on his face. "Well its time for bed now, I'll go to sleep better knowing I defeated the zit from hell." Dende proclaimed, as he climbed into his comfy bed.
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Well you can't say that that chapter was short cause it was a page and a half longer than the last one.
Next time:
How will Trunks react to…er…his situation…how will she act? Find out tomorrow! (May 9,02)
Did Dende really defeat the zit from hell? Or will wake up to find out that the pimple took revenge upon the teenage Namickian. Find out next tomorrow!!
I will up date tomorrow folk so look for it!!
::Goten enters::
Goten: You've been avoiding me.
Me: No I haven't.
Goten: Yes you have, what's wrong…do I smell funny? Dose my breath stink? What is it?
Me: Well, the truth is…
Goten: What? Tell me!
Me: Remember Mr. Pookie?
Goten: My teddy bear?
Me: Yeah.
Goten: What about him…IS HE ALRIGHT!?
Me: ………………er………
Goten: NOOOO!! MR. POOKIE WHERE ARE YOU!?
Me: Well………see…………remember how yesterday you ate Vegetas' food?
Goten: I WAS HUNGRY!!
Me: Well………Vegeta swore revenge on you, and since there's no fighting in the house……………………
Goten: WHAT DID HE DO??
Me:……………he……decapitated Mr. Pookie.
Goten: NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! ::Begins to sob on my shoulder, so I try to comfort him::
Me: My grandma could always sew on his head.
Goten: ::Stands up with murder in his eyes as he goes SS2:: What Vegeta did is unforgivable, he will pay with his life.
Me: RUN FOR COVER EVERYBODY!!
Over and out,
Kioko