Disclaimer: I do not in any way own DBZ or any of its characters, I also do
not own Mary Kay. Any ways, here are the ages:
Gohan: 17
Goku: Other World
Goten: 11 1/2
1 Trunks: 12
1.1 Female Saiyijin: 17
(I know, I know, I made Goten and Trunks older but hey, It will make the story better.)
Key:
"…."= Talking
'…'= Thinking
^…^= Telepathy
~*~= Different seen
(…)= Author's Note
***= song lyrics
ON WITH THE STORY!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
SPECIAL THANKS TO:
FOR REVIEWING!!
~*~
"Ok, Now stand up." Gohan commanded nicely, once he was already standing, he took her hand and helped her up…causing them to be very close…about 8 inches away from each other's faces. (She is one head shorter than Gohan.)
***
I'm yours
take me as I am
I'm yours
So take this space between us and fill it up again
I'm yours
***
~*~*~The Saiyijin Girls' Point Of Veiw~*~*~
What in the world is happening to me? What are you doing to me Gohan? What are these butterflies doing in my tummy…your not suppose to awaken these feelings in me…I…I…I have to be alone, and wait for the Prince to give me freedom…. Ugh! Why can't I just look away from you? I feel like I'm drowning in your endless ebony pools, the windows of your soul…unable to swim out, because their so deep and full of purity. Why must you gaze into my soul, weaving your hypnotic web…your only making it harder for the both of us…oh, Gohan…
***
So won't you take this space between
us and fill it up
***
~*~*~Gohan's Point Of Veiw~*~*~
Whoa, I never thought it would come down to this… Geez why can't I just look away from her? What is it about her that is making me feel this way? I barely met her today and already, theirs something about her that breaks me apart, and then puts me back together in a totally different way. …She has such beautiful eyes, from here I can see the speaks of yellow in them…there so pretty, I can't help but smile inwardly. She looks so innocent, just gazing at the innermost part of me, my soul. Could it be that you're the one? The one I've been waiting for, all my life?
***
I'm gonna shout it from the roof tops
Give it all I got
Shout it from the roof tops
So you can take your best shot
Shout it from the roof tops
Give it all I got
***
~*~*~Regular Point Of Veiw~*~*~
^Look at them, they look like their in a trace or something right?^ Trunks asked his ravin hared friend telepathically, from his position above him. They were both spying on Gohan and the girl from the outside of the door…which the boys had opened earlier to hear and see what was going on to determine whether or not they could use the information to blackmail either of them. (you know just incase.)
^Yeah, maybe they'll kiss or something.^ Goten answered from his position under Trunks, also spying on the two just for fun.
^Should we rain in on their parade?^ Trunks thought to Goten.
^What parade?^ Goten inquired telepathically, with eagerness in his imaginary voice.
^No Goten, not an actual parade! Geez, sometimes I worry about you. What I meant is if we should bust in and interrupt them.^ Trunks responded, looking at Goten expectantly.
^Oh…well, I don't know, they look so peaceful that if we were to interrupt them they would hunt us down and kill us.^
^I'll take that as a yes, besides, I could use a good fight.^ Trunks answered, moving away to let Goten stand up. ^On the count of three we go in and tease Gohan, got it?^ Trunks thought to Goten.
^Yeah.^ Goten answered, getting anise from all the excitement.
^One…two…THREE.^ Trunks announced mentally, throwing the door open and busting inside the room with Goten right behind him.
***
Simple minded little punk
Thought I was the junk
Nobody ever told me that my doo-doo stunk
***
"So what is this…Oh, I see…Gohan finally found himself a girlfriend!" Trunks teased suggestively when both of the entranced teenagers snapped their heads over to him to see what had made the noise. Gohan glared daggers at the lilac hared boy, and proceeded to burn an imaginary hole in his head.
"What are you talking about?" Gohan asked in an I-don't-know-what-you're- talking-about tone of voice.
***
Was I out of my mind
Or was I just trippin' on an ego
***
"You know exactly what I mean Gohan…you sly dog." Trunks continued to tease, this time pointing out the obvious…Gohan was still holding the Saiyijin girls' hand! Gohan immediately let go of her hand, and tried to banish the blush that had crept on his cheeks.
When Trunks saw this, he got an evil idea…and let his thoughts control the actions of his facial expression, which had turn into an evil suggestive smirk. "Well, when were you planing to tell us that you had a girlfriend? I mean, why keep such an important detail of your life hidden…what else have you done with her that we don't know about?" Trunks asked in a tone that suggested that Gohan was doing…a lot more things…than just staring at girls in their eyes.
This made Gohan extremely angry, but before he could do anything the girl beside him had caught on to Trunks' little plan, and decided to counter it with the best weapon possible, confusion.
"Well, if you put it that way…yes Gohan did keep me a secret, but he's coming out of hiding, right Gohan?" The tail barring girl stated in a kind of seductive tone, walking over to Gohan's left side, winking at him, signaling for him to play along.
***
But you filled up the space and you never let me go
Bullseye to the center of my soul
One shot but it rocked like a fatal blow
***
She then clung on his neck, (like Ryoko does to Tenchi. ^-^!) causing him to blush a bit, but he quickly banished it and played along by holding her arms in place with one of his hands. He then smirked and evil smirk, ignoring all the naughty thoughts that were running at 100 miles an hour in his mind because of feeling her pressed against him, and looked at Trunks in the eye, as if to say, I-win-this-time-heheh.
***
This love was your gun, mercy your shells
Now I'm a dead man
Walkin' down a skinny trail
***
All Trunks and Goten could do was look on in total and utter thunderstruck bafflement. This was not what was supposed to happen! The plan was to embarrass Gohan and the girl, not for them to end up all confused! What was the world coming to if a person could not embarrass Gohan!? And it was all that furry tailed girls' fault.
"DINNER IS READY!!" Chichi shouted from the kitchen, interrupting the strange moment of defeat.
"Come on Trunks!! The Food!! Its Calling Me!!" Goten broke the strange silence.
"Fine. You win this time." Trunks accepting his defeat, not being able to come up with something at the moment to counter this strange act. The hazel eyed girl broke the embrace when Trunks left the room, and fell to the floor in laughter.
"HAHAHAHA!! Did you…see…the look on their…faces!?!" She asked in between laughs. Gohan chuckled at the realization.
"You're a great actor, I couldn't have pulled that off without you."
"Thanks." She said, 'But who said I was acting?' She added mentally.
***
I'm yours
Take me as I am
I'm yours
So won't you take this space between
Us and fill it up
***
"Come on, let's go before the others finish all the food." Gohan added, opening the door for her to go through. (Just like a true gentleman should.)
~*~At the Look-Out~*~
"Oh that was a great night sleep, I don't think I've slept like that since I got that zit…good riddance!" The teenage guardian of earth said happily as he made his way to his personal bathroom to wash his face free of sleep. He opened the mirror and got out the Mary Kay soap wash (HAHA!) and began to lather it up in his hands before putting it on his face. When he finally finished washing his face he rinsed and dried, and took a look at his pimple free green face, only to find something else.
"NOOOOOOOO!! I THOUGHT I BANISHED YOU!! BUT NOW YOU HAD CHILDREN ON MY PRECIOUS FACE?!?! HOW DARE YOU!!!" Dende screeched, shattering the mirror in the process. The Zit from the fourteenth hell had reaped revenge on poor Dende, it had multiplied and the children of it looked like mutant pimples cause they were purple, and the size of lemons!! Poor Dende.
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Well, do you approve of this chapter? I hope so… this was the first time I ever put in song lyrics, …did I do it right?
Next Time:
YUP, THE MOMENT YOU'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR, THE NAMING OF THE SAIYIJIN GIRL!!!
Vote for one of the following:
Kitsuni = sounds like Keet-zooknee (as in knee…well you know.)
Eve = you know what that sounds like. (~_^)
NOTE TO ANDROID 71:
You are my 100th reviewer!! That means that YOU are invited to the *100th Review Special* I'm writing!!
What I'm saying is this: I am writing about the party I'm throwing to celebrate my 100 REVIEWS and I want you to be there. As in you write what you would do in my party like for example, I don't know who is your favorite character but lets just make it Vegeta.
Exhibit A:
::Vegeta enters living room::
Vegeta: Ugh, this is absurd!! Why did you throw a party and invite…OMG! ITS YOU!!
Android 71: (Insert what you would say or do.)
Bla…bla, bla.
Now I'm thinking to write the story in a chat room that way we could both write it, and you put in what you would do, ECT. I was thinking we could do it at http://chat.wwcol.com/cframe2.html I know, I know, it is a Christian chat room, but it's the only place the "blocker" will let me go to chat. (My screen name would be Kioko, and I hope Yours will be Android 71) I think we should do it on Saturday at like 1:30…that's the only time I can go on the Internet…unless you want to do it on a weekday…if you don't have school…or on a lunch break? I homeshcool, and I finish my work around 10:00 or 11:00 and that will give me time to write this story, and write the special after I upload the chapter. Tell me what you say in a review, cause my e-mail is all jacked up. I'll check my reviews on May 13,01 for sure…but I'll try to do it this Saturday. Unless you want to wait until summer vacation to do it.
Just tell me when it's the best time for you, and I'll try to adjust to that.
Over and out,
Kioko
Gohan: 17
Goku: Other World
Goten: 11 1/2
1 Trunks: 12
1.1 Female Saiyijin: 17
(I know, I know, I made Goten and Trunks older but hey, It will make the story better.)
Key:
"…."= Talking
'…'= Thinking
^…^= Telepathy
~*~= Different seen
(…)= Author's Note
***= song lyrics
ON WITH THE STORY!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
SPECIAL THANKS TO:
FOR REVIEWING!!
~*~
"Ok, Now stand up." Gohan commanded nicely, once he was already standing, he took her hand and helped her up…causing them to be very close…about 8 inches away from each other's faces. (She is one head shorter than Gohan.)
***
I'm yours
take me as I am
I'm yours
So take this space between us and fill it up again
I'm yours
***
~*~*~The Saiyijin Girls' Point Of Veiw~*~*~
What in the world is happening to me? What are you doing to me Gohan? What are these butterflies doing in my tummy…your not suppose to awaken these feelings in me…I…I…I have to be alone, and wait for the Prince to give me freedom…. Ugh! Why can't I just look away from you? I feel like I'm drowning in your endless ebony pools, the windows of your soul…unable to swim out, because their so deep and full of purity. Why must you gaze into my soul, weaving your hypnotic web…your only making it harder for the both of us…oh, Gohan…
***
So won't you take this space between
us and fill it up
***
~*~*~Gohan's Point Of Veiw~*~*~
Whoa, I never thought it would come down to this… Geez why can't I just look away from her? What is it about her that is making me feel this way? I barely met her today and already, theirs something about her that breaks me apart, and then puts me back together in a totally different way. …She has such beautiful eyes, from here I can see the speaks of yellow in them…there so pretty, I can't help but smile inwardly. She looks so innocent, just gazing at the innermost part of me, my soul. Could it be that you're the one? The one I've been waiting for, all my life?
***
I'm gonna shout it from the roof tops
Give it all I got
Shout it from the roof tops
So you can take your best shot
Shout it from the roof tops
Give it all I got
***
~*~*~Regular Point Of Veiw~*~*~
^Look at them, they look like their in a trace or something right?^ Trunks asked his ravin hared friend telepathically, from his position above him. They were both spying on Gohan and the girl from the outside of the door…which the boys had opened earlier to hear and see what was going on to determine whether or not they could use the information to blackmail either of them. (you know just incase.)
^Yeah, maybe they'll kiss or something.^ Goten answered from his position under Trunks, also spying on the two just for fun.
^Should we rain in on their parade?^ Trunks thought to Goten.
^What parade?^ Goten inquired telepathically, with eagerness in his imaginary voice.
^No Goten, not an actual parade! Geez, sometimes I worry about you. What I meant is if we should bust in and interrupt them.^ Trunks responded, looking at Goten expectantly.
^Oh…well, I don't know, they look so peaceful that if we were to interrupt them they would hunt us down and kill us.^
^I'll take that as a yes, besides, I could use a good fight.^ Trunks answered, moving away to let Goten stand up. ^On the count of three we go in and tease Gohan, got it?^ Trunks thought to Goten.
^Yeah.^ Goten answered, getting anise from all the excitement.
^One…two…THREE.^ Trunks announced mentally, throwing the door open and busting inside the room with Goten right behind him.
***
Simple minded little punk
Thought I was the junk
Nobody ever told me that my doo-doo stunk
***
"So what is this…Oh, I see…Gohan finally found himself a girlfriend!" Trunks teased suggestively when both of the entranced teenagers snapped their heads over to him to see what had made the noise. Gohan glared daggers at the lilac hared boy, and proceeded to burn an imaginary hole in his head.
"What are you talking about?" Gohan asked in an I-don't-know-what-you're- talking-about tone of voice.
***
Was I out of my mind
Or was I just trippin' on an ego
***
"You know exactly what I mean Gohan…you sly dog." Trunks continued to tease, this time pointing out the obvious…Gohan was still holding the Saiyijin girls' hand! Gohan immediately let go of her hand, and tried to banish the blush that had crept on his cheeks.
When Trunks saw this, he got an evil idea…and let his thoughts control the actions of his facial expression, which had turn into an evil suggestive smirk. "Well, when were you planing to tell us that you had a girlfriend? I mean, why keep such an important detail of your life hidden…what else have you done with her that we don't know about?" Trunks asked in a tone that suggested that Gohan was doing…a lot more things…than just staring at girls in their eyes.
This made Gohan extremely angry, but before he could do anything the girl beside him had caught on to Trunks' little plan, and decided to counter it with the best weapon possible, confusion.
"Well, if you put it that way…yes Gohan did keep me a secret, but he's coming out of hiding, right Gohan?" The tail barring girl stated in a kind of seductive tone, walking over to Gohan's left side, winking at him, signaling for him to play along.
***
But you filled up the space and you never let me go
Bullseye to the center of my soul
One shot but it rocked like a fatal blow
***
She then clung on his neck, (like Ryoko does to Tenchi. ^-^!) causing him to blush a bit, but he quickly banished it and played along by holding her arms in place with one of his hands. He then smirked and evil smirk, ignoring all the naughty thoughts that were running at 100 miles an hour in his mind because of feeling her pressed against him, and looked at Trunks in the eye, as if to say, I-win-this-time-heheh.
***
This love was your gun, mercy your shells
Now I'm a dead man
Walkin' down a skinny trail
***
All Trunks and Goten could do was look on in total and utter thunderstruck bafflement. This was not what was supposed to happen! The plan was to embarrass Gohan and the girl, not for them to end up all confused! What was the world coming to if a person could not embarrass Gohan!? And it was all that furry tailed girls' fault.
"DINNER IS READY!!" Chichi shouted from the kitchen, interrupting the strange moment of defeat.
"Come on Trunks!! The Food!! Its Calling Me!!" Goten broke the strange silence.
"Fine. You win this time." Trunks accepting his defeat, not being able to come up with something at the moment to counter this strange act. The hazel eyed girl broke the embrace when Trunks left the room, and fell to the floor in laughter.
"HAHAHAHA!! Did you…see…the look on their…faces!?!" She asked in between laughs. Gohan chuckled at the realization.
"You're a great actor, I couldn't have pulled that off without you."
"Thanks." She said, 'But who said I was acting?' She added mentally.
***
I'm yours
Take me as I am
I'm yours
So won't you take this space between
Us and fill it up
***
"Come on, let's go before the others finish all the food." Gohan added, opening the door for her to go through. (Just like a true gentleman should.)
~*~At the Look-Out~*~
"Oh that was a great night sleep, I don't think I've slept like that since I got that zit…good riddance!" The teenage guardian of earth said happily as he made his way to his personal bathroom to wash his face free of sleep. He opened the mirror and got out the Mary Kay soap wash (HAHA!) and began to lather it up in his hands before putting it on his face. When he finally finished washing his face he rinsed and dried, and took a look at his pimple free green face, only to find something else.
"NOOOOOOOO!! I THOUGHT I BANISHED YOU!! BUT NOW YOU HAD CHILDREN ON MY PRECIOUS FACE?!?! HOW DARE YOU!!!" Dende screeched, shattering the mirror in the process. The Zit from the fourteenth hell had reaped revenge on poor Dende, it had multiplied and the children of it looked like mutant pimples cause they were purple, and the size of lemons!! Poor Dende.
::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Well, do you approve of this chapter? I hope so… this was the first time I ever put in song lyrics, …did I do it right?
Next Time:
YUP, THE MOMENT YOU'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR, THE NAMING OF THE SAIYIJIN GIRL!!!
Vote for one of the following:
Kitsuni = sounds like Keet-zooknee (as in knee…well you know.)
Eve = you know what that sounds like. (~_^)
NOTE TO ANDROID 71:
You are my 100th reviewer!! That means that YOU are invited to the *100th Review Special* I'm writing!!
What I'm saying is this: I am writing about the party I'm throwing to celebrate my 100 REVIEWS and I want you to be there. As in you write what you would do in my party like for example, I don't know who is your favorite character but lets just make it Vegeta.
Exhibit A:
::Vegeta enters living room::
Vegeta: Ugh, this is absurd!! Why did you throw a party and invite…OMG! ITS YOU!!
Android 71: (Insert what you would say or do.)
Bla…bla, bla.
Now I'm thinking to write the story in a chat room that way we could both write it, and you put in what you would do, ECT. I was thinking we could do it at http://chat.wwcol.com/cframe2.html I know, I know, it is a Christian chat room, but it's the only place the "blocker" will let me go to chat. (My screen name would be Kioko, and I hope Yours will be Android 71) I think we should do it on Saturday at like 1:30…that's the only time I can go on the Internet…unless you want to do it on a weekday…if you don't have school…or on a lunch break? I homeshcool, and I finish my work around 10:00 or 11:00 and that will give me time to write this story, and write the special after I upload the chapter. Tell me what you say in a review, cause my e-mail is all jacked up. I'll check my reviews on May 13,01 for sure…but I'll try to do it this Saturday. Unless you want to wait until summer vacation to do it.
Just tell me when it's the best time for you, and I'll try to adjust to that.
Over and out,
Kioko