Disclaimer: I do not in any way own DBZ or any of its characters, I also do
not own Mary Kay. Any ways, here are the ages:
Gohan: 17
Goku: Other World
Goten: 11 1/2
1 Trunks: 12
1.1 Female Saiyijin: 17
(I know, I know, I made Goten and Trunks older but hey, It will make the story better.)
Key:
"…."= Talking
'…'= Thinking
^…^= Telepathy
~*~= Different seen
(…)= Author's Note
***= song lyrics
ON WITH THE STORY!
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SPECIAL THANKS TO:
FOR REVIEWING!!
~*~
"Come on, let's go before the others finish all the food." Gohan added, opening the door for her to go through. (Just like a true gentleman should.)
~*~After everyone finished eating~*~
"That was really good Chichi." Trunks said, as he got up and put his plate in the sink.
"Thank you Trunks." Chichi responded, as she finished taking her last sips of her soup. It was then that she remembered that the tailed girl still didn't have a name. "You know, we still have to come up with a name for you." She stated.
"I know, how about Jade?" Trunks suggested, once he reached his seat at the table.
"No. I don't think that suits her." Chichi said, quickly putting that name aside.
"What about Eve?" Goten offered, but was met with a look of I-don't-think- so from the Saiyijin girl.
'………Does Goten know what happened earlier?…oh my gosh…but I didn't tell him yet.' Trunks thought, getting a bit nervous.
"No. I don't like that name." The fuzzy tailed girl said, to accompany the look she had on her face.
Suddenly Gohan's eyebrows burrowed downward, making him look fierce. His eyes darted from one spot to another, making him look like he was expecting a surprise attack from an unknown direction. The boys immediately caught on to what was happening and jumped out of their chairs and dropped into their fighting stance, following Gohan's example. Chichi knew that when Gohan got that look in his eyes that it meant trouble, so she did the first thing that popped into her head. She grabbed the Saiyijin girl by the wrist and yanked her under the table with her, for protection. (more like, "for the bit of protection that the table had to offer." ^-^)
"You two, stay here and take care of mom and the girl." Gohan commanded, as he made his way to the back door that lead to the backyard, and walked out.
~*~Outside~*~
It was a clear and starry night, the moon was already out, a half moon to be exact. Gohan kept his crouched fighting position as he walked further away from the house, just incase this unknown enemy wanted to start a fight. And he just waited,… waited to see what or who was causing this uncalled for disturbance.
~*~Meanwhile inside~*~
The Saiyijin girl was contemplating whether or not she should go help Gohan, just incase he couldn't handle it. 'I can take care of myself, and its not that I don't know how to follow orders…its just that…I am a Saiyijin, a Super Saiyijin to be correct, and I want to fight. And besides, he told Goten and Trunks to stay here…he never told me to stay.' She thought, deciding to teleport outside and see if Gohan needed help. 'I guess I should tell Chichi where I'm going so that she can let go of my wrist.' The monkey tailed girl thought. "Chichi, I'm going to teleport outside and see what's going on, but I need you to let go of me…unless you want to go with me." The teenage girl informed, causing Chichi to nod in agreement, and let go of her. "Don't worry Chichi, I'll be back." The girl said as she disappeared in front of her very eyes.
~*~Back outside~*~
About a minute had passed, and Gohan was getting edgy. He couldn't feel his enemy's Ki, which meant that this person must be either an android or an expert at hiding their life force. "Show yourself coward!" Gohan shouted, getting nothing in response. A shadowed figure appeared behind him and came closer, without him noticing.
"Gohan."
Gohan almost jumped out of his pants he got so startled, he played it off though, and did a back flip…which made him face the person who owned the voice. Gohan released a breath he didn't know that he had been holding when he noticed it was just the girl. "Go back inside." Gohan ordered, but was met with disobedience.
"No. I think I'm going to stay here and see you fight." She said as she flew off and sat on a tree branch that was out of sight.
Gohan then got edgy again, sensing that a presence other than the girl was watching him closely…he closed his eyes and searched with all his might to try and see where the person was.
"I'm over here fool." The man said, planting a well placed punch on Gohan's abdomen. Gohan knew who it was by the voice, it was Vegeta. He was dressed in nothing but black and he had a mask on, making him invisible against the night setting. "You need to train a lot more brat, you couldn't even pin point where I was…pathetic." Vegeta said gruffly, as he kept on beating up Gohan.
'Vegeta is right…I need this, I deserve what I get……and it's all because I've been slacking off in my training.' Gohan thought, as he winced in pain every time he couldn't block the Princes' onslaught.
~*~After the fight~*~
"Humph. You need to train a lot more brat. You were stronger when you defeated cell, one must train even in times of peace." Vegeta spat, although that was the only way he would give advice…the mean and hard way. Vegeta threw Gohan a senzu bean when he saw that he was so beaten that he couldn't get up.
From a distance the Saiyijin girl saw everything, and she was looking for the perfect opportunity to attack that strange man that had beaten Gohan into a bloody pulp so easily. She was not about to let him get away with beating her friend…or whatever she was to Gohan. She finally saw an opening and went in.
"Now its my turn." The Saiyijin girl announced, as she plummeted her fist into the back of Vegeta's head, causing him to almost fall into unconsciousness, but he fought the blackness with his will power and stood to meet his offender. She delivered many punches, but he just blocked them all with ease. When she realized that she was getting nowhere with the approach she backed off about 30 feet to contemplate what would be her next move.
'Well I guess I'll just have to go Super to beat him.' She thought, putting it into action. A pure blue flame engulfed her body as she powered up for the transformation, causing a small shock wave around her. Her hands clenched shut into a tight fist because of the shear ferocity of the power that was coursing threw her veins, which caused her to shout, not of pain but of the feeling of not being able to contain so much power. Her hair flashed from a coppery brown to a glowing gold, back to a coppery brown, then to a glowing gold again, at the same time getting fuller and spikier, which caused her hair to fall from her high ponytail. Her eyes sparkled from a beautiful hazel to a cold looking aqua green. Her tail flickered from a light peaceful looking brow to a bold and bright yellow, making the transformation compleat.
The two males just looked on in shock and awe. Never had either of them heard of a female going super!? Not to mention that she still had her tail and she was able to accomplish the legendary! Maybe it was that they had the blood of the warrior race flowing in their veins, or that they were the last of an almost extinct race, or maybe even that she was the last female of the planet Vegeta-sei. Whatever it was, she was at that moment very desirable, but Vegeta knew how to control his emotions…no problem. But Gohan on the other hand wore his feelings on his sleave which got her attention very quickly.
'Why is Gohan looking at me like that? Did my shirt go up or something…sheesh! How am I suppose to fight this guy with him looking at me with arousal glazed in his eyes!?' The glowing golden girl thought frantically, with a blush clearly creeping on her cheeks.
~*~Back inside the house~*~
"Hey Trunks, I think that's your dad out there." Goten informed the lilac hared boy, which sent his mother into a screeching fit.
"You'd think that Vegeta would learn to knock on the door like a normal person after living on earth for almost 20 years!! But NO!! He has to come over and disturb the peace by sneaking around like some criminal or something!! Chichi said in disbelief as she walked out the back door and out into the soon to be fighting seen.
~*~Back outside~*~
"YOU TWO STOP THIS NOW! AND YOU, GET DOWN HERE!" Chichi shouted, addressing Vegeta and the now Super Saiyijin girl who was hovering above the ground. "VEGETA! IF YOU KEEP ON DISTURBING THE PEACE LIKE THIS I'LL SUE!!" Chichi screeched at the top of her lungs, seething in anger, which assaulted all the ears within a ½ mile from the Son residence. "Now back to important matters…go inside so that we can come up with a name for you hon." Chichi commanded nicely but with authority in her voice, addressing the Saiyijin girl that had dropped out of the legendary form when she touched the ground.
"That is unnecessary, I have already come up with a name for her." Vegeta announced, which made everyone stop dead in their tracks.
"And who says that you get to name her?" Chichi asked not wanting him to name her because he would probably name her Death Lilly, or Death Rose…anything to do with death, fighting, and/or killing.
"I said so." Vegeta answered, a bit thrown off at such an obvious and stupid question. 'Baka onna.' Vegeta thought, smirking to show what he was thinking. (Baka onna means 'stupid woman' in Japanese.) ^-^
Chichi didn't say anything, because this was Vegeta's ego talking…and no one could come against his ego, nope, it would just push you off the edge of the earth. (I think I go that saying from Android 71…hope you don't mind…you know I love you…er…well not like that…Aargh! You know what I mean right?)
"Her name will be Kitsuni. Which means fighting spirit in the Saiyijin language." Vegeta announced, getting a look of approval from everyone but Chichi. With that said, he left and headed to the Capsule main compound, which was the house/mansion.
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Well there you go! Well did you like it? This is like the longest chapter I've ever written in one day so I expect good results. I still can't believe all the reviews I have for this story, to tell you the truth, I thought my other story "If Your Not There" would have been the one with like 100 review's before the 20th chapter. I think that story is like way better than this one…well…not way better…more like a lot.
Hey, if you guys really want to help me you can, by telling your online buddies about this story and/or my other ones. I also would appreciate your review, they are what keep me going, even if it is a flame…I really don't mind…but please, if your going to flame me don't be a coward, sign in first so that I know who you are.
I know I said that I would put out two chapters today but…::looks around:: my mom is on my back for spending way too much time on the computer, thus she is making me to overtime in chores…can you believe that!?
Gohan: 17
Goku: Other World
Goten: 11 1/2
1 Trunks: 12
1.1 Female Saiyijin: 17
(I know, I know, I made Goten and Trunks older but hey, It will make the story better.)
Key:
"…."= Talking
'…'= Thinking
^…^= Telepathy
~*~= Different seen
(…)= Author's Note
***= song lyrics
ON WITH THE STORY!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
SPECIAL THANKS TO:
FOR REVIEWING!!
~*~
"Come on, let's go before the others finish all the food." Gohan added, opening the door for her to go through. (Just like a true gentleman should.)
~*~After everyone finished eating~*~
"That was really good Chichi." Trunks said, as he got up and put his plate in the sink.
"Thank you Trunks." Chichi responded, as she finished taking her last sips of her soup. It was then that she remembered that the tailed girl still didn't have a name. "You know, we still have to come up with a name for you." She stated.
"I know, how about Jade?" Trunks suggested, once he reached his seat at the table.
"No. I don't think that suits her." Chichi said, quickly putting that name aside.
"What about Eve?" Goten offered, but was met with a look of I-don't-think- so from the Saiyijin girl.
'………Does Goten know what happened earlier?…oh my gosh…but I didn't tell him yet.' Trunks thought, getting a bit nervous.
"No. I don't like that name." The fuzzy tailed girl said, to accompany the look she had on her face.
Suddenly Gohan's eyebrows burrowed downward, making him look fierce. His eyes darted from one spot to another, making him look like he was expecting a surprise attack from an unknown direction. The boys immediately caught on to what was happening and jumped out of their chairs and dropped into their fighting stance, following Gohan's example. Chichi knew that when Gohan got that look in his eyes that it meant trouble, so she did the first thing that popped into her head. She grabbed the Saiyijin girl by the wrist and yanked her under the table with her, for protection. (more like, "for the bit of protection that the table had to offer." ^-^)
"You two, stay here and take care of mom and the girl." Gohan commanded, as he made his way to the back door that lead to the backyard, and walked out.
~*~Outside~*~
It was a clear and starry night, the moon was already out, a half moon to be exact. Gohan kept his crouched fighting position as he walked further away from the house, just incase this unknown enemy wanted to start a fight. And he just waited,… waited to see what or who was causing this uncalled for disturbance.
~*~Meanwhile inside~*~
The Saiyijin girl was contemplating whether or not she should go help Gohan, just incase he couldn't handle it. 'I can take care of myself, and its not that I don't know how to follow orders…its just that…I am a Saiyijin, a Super Saiyijin to be correct, and I want to fight. And besides, he told Goten and Trunks to stay here…he never told me to stay.' She thought, deciding to teleport outside and see if Gohan needed help. 'I guess I should tell Chichi where I'm going so that she can let go of my wrist.' The monkey tailed girl thought. "Chichi, I'm going to teleport outside and see what's going on, but I need you to let go of me…unless you want to go with me." The teenage girl informed, causing Chichi to nod in agreement, and let go of her. "Don't worry Chichi, I'll be back." The girl said as she disappeared in front of her very eyes.
~*~Back outside~*~
About a minute had passed, and Gohan was getting edgy. He couldn't feel his enemy's Ki, which meant that this person must be either an android or an expert at hiding their life force. "Show yourself coward!" Gohan shouted, getting nothing in response. A shadowed figure appeared behind him and came closer, without him noticing.
"Gohan."
Gohan almost jumped out of his pants he got so startled, he played it off though, and did a back flip…which made him face the person who owned the voice. Gohan released a breath he didn't know that he had been holding when he noticed it was just the girl. "Go back inside." Gohan ordered, but was met with disobedience.
"No. I think I'm going to stay here and see you fight." She said as she flew off and sat on a tree branch that was out of sight.
Gohan then got edgy again, sensing that a presence other than the girl was watching him closely…he closed his eyes and searched with all his might to try and see where the person was.
"I'm over here fool." The man said, planting a well placed punch on Gohan's abdomen. Gohan knew who it was by the voice, it was Vegeta. He was dressed in nothing but black and he had a mask on, making him invisible against the night setting. "You need to train a lot more brat, you couldn't even pin point where I was…pathetic." Vegeta said gruffly, as he kept on beating up Gohan.
'Vegeta is right…I need this, I deserve what I get……and it's all because I've been slacking off in my training.' Gohan thought, as he winced in pain every time he couldn't block the Princes' onslaught.
~*~After the fight~*~
"Humph. You need to train a lot more brat. You were stronger when you defeated cell, one must train even in times of peace." Vegeta spat, although that was the only way he would give advice…the mean and hard way. Vegeta threw Gohan a senzu bean when he saw that he was so beaten that he couldn't get up.
From a distance the Saiyijin girl saw everything, and she was looking for the perfect opportunity to attack that strange man that had beaten Gohan into a bloody pulp so easily. She was not about to let him get away with beating her friend…or whatever she was to Gohan. She finally saw an opening and went in.
"Now its my turn." The Saiyijin girl announced, as she plummeted her fist into the back of Vegeta's head, causing him to almost fall into unconsciousness, but he fought the blackness with his will power and stood to meet his offender. She delivered many punches, but he just blocked them all with ease. When she realized that she was getting nowhere with the approach she backed off about 30 feet to contemplate what would be her next move.
'Well I guess I'll just have to go Super to beat him.' She thought, putting it into action. A pure blue flame engulfed her body as she powered up for the transformation, causing a small shock wave around her. Her hands clenched shut into a tight fist because of the shear ferocity of the power that was coursing threw her veins, which caused her to shout, not of pain but of the feeling of not being able to contain so much power. Her hair flashed from a coppery brown to a glowing gold, back to a coppery brown, then to a glowing gold again, at the same time getting fuller and spikier, which caused her hair to fall from her high ponytail. Her eyes sparkled from a beautiful hazel to a cold looking aqua green. Her tail flickered from a light peaceful looking brow to a bold and bright yellow, making the transformation compleat.
The two males just looked on in shock and awe. Never had either of them heard of a female going super!? Not to mention that she still had her tail and she was able to accomplish the legendary! Maybe it was that they had the blood of the warrior race flowing in their veins, or that they were the last of an almost extinct race, or maybe even that she was the last female of the planet Vegeta-sei. Whatever it was, she was at that moment very desirable, but Vegeta knew how to control his emotions…no problem. But Gohan on the other hand wore his feelings on his sleave which got her attention very quickly.
'Why is Gohan looking at me like that? Did my shirt go up or something…sheesh! How am I suppose to fight this guy with him looking at me with arousal glazed in his eyes!?' The glowing golden girl thought frantically, with a blush clearly creeping on her cheeks.
~*~Back inside the house~*~
"Hey Trunks, I think that's your dad out there." Goten informed the lilac hared boy, which sent his mother into a screeching fit.
"You'd think that Vegeta would learn to knock on the door like a normal person after living on earth for almost 20 years!! But NO!! He has to come over and disturb the peace by sneaking around like some criminal or something!! Chichi said in disbelief as she walked out the back door and out into the soon to be fighting seen.
~*~Back outside~*~
"YOU TWO STOP THIS NOW! AND YOU, GET DOWN HERE!" Chichi shouted, addressing Vegeta and the now Super Saiyijin girl who was hovering above the ground. "VEGETA! IF YOU KEEP ON DISTURBING THE PEACE LIKE THIS I'LL SUE!!" Chichi screeched at the top of her lungs, seething in anger, which assaulted all the ears within a ½ mile from the Son residence. "Now back to important matters…go inside so that we can come up with a name for you hon." Chichi commanded nicely but with authority in her voice, addressing the Saiyijin girl that had dropped out of the legendary form when she touched the ground.
"That is unnecessary, I have already come up with a name for her." Vegeta announced, which made everyone stop dead in their tracks.
"And who says that you get to name her?" Chichi asked not wanting him to name her because he would probably name her Death Lilly, or Death Rose…anything to do with death, fighting, and/or killing.
"I said so." Vegeta answered, a bit thrown off at such an obvious and stupid question. 'Baka onna.' Vegeta thought, smirking to show what he was thinking. (Baka onna means 'stupid woman' in Japanese.) ^-^
Chichi didn't say anything, because this was Vegeta's ego talking…and no one could come against his ego, nope, it would just push you off the edge of the earth. (I think I go that saying from Android 71…hope you don't mind…you know I love you…er…well not like that…Aargh! You know what I mean right?)
"Her name will be Kitsuni. Which means fighting spirit in the Saiyijin language." Vegeta announced, getting a look of approval from everyone but Chichi. With that said, he left and headed to the Capsule main compound, which was the house/mansion.
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Well there you go! Well did you like it? This is like the longest chapter I've ever written in one day so I expect good results. I still can't believe all the reviews I have for this story, to tell you the truth, I thought my other story "If Your Not There" would have been the one with like 100 review's before the 20th chapter. I think that story is like way better than this one…well…not way better…more like a lot.
Hey, if you guys really want to help me you can, by telling your online buddies about this story and/or my other ones. I also would appreciate your review, they are what keep me going, even if it is a flame…I really don't mind…but please, if your going to flame me don't be a coward, sign in first so that I know who you are.
I know I said that I would put out two chapters today but…::looks around:: my mom is on my back for spending way too much time on the computer, thus she is making me to overtime in chores…can you believe that!?