hii guys this is my first story. I hope you like it. sorry for my mistakes which I will do. I hope you will cooperate
now story begins
a case was reported in cid bureau. they have to go to a house for investigation along with a forensic expert.
Daya, purvi and freddie along with tarika reach to a apartment.
then they went to a home which was in that apartment.
freedie rings the door bell 5-6 times but there was no response.
freddie -sir I think there is no one in home.
daya - try one more time.
freddie - yes sir
then he again rang the doorbell and after some time a girl opens the door. her face was looking pale. it seems that she is ill.
girl -who are you
purvi - we are from cid and I am purvi
girl - oh how can I help you
freddy - ms. sonalika right
sonalika - yes
purvi - we want to check your dog
sonalika - what but why do want you to check my dog
is everything okay
daya -actually we have to check your dog regarding to a case.
sonalika -can I ask which case
daya - ya sure do u know mr. ajay
sonalika -yes i met him once
Freddy - he is no more. someone has kill him
sana(sonalika)- what
purvi - yes so we will like it if you will cooperate with us
sana- ya sure come in
then they all come in
sana- alvin come baby
alvin - bhow bhow
come baby
(alvin jumped to sana)
sana - you can check him but pls be careful
tarika - ya sure don't worry
(sana is feeling weak)
tarika checked Alvin's collar and found that he is not the one who has killed mr. ajay
sana feels dizzy and she takes the support of the table to stand straight and this is seen by tarika
tarika - ms. sonalika are you feeling right
sana (in a low voice) - ya i am fine
tarika - are u sure
sana - yes
then her phone ringed ans she picked it
caller - hii sana are you alright. abhi bhi fever hai kya .have you visited doctor what
sana - calm down I am completely fine
caller - have you visited doctor
sana yes I have
caller - you can't lie to me
sana - I am not lying
she is not feeling well at all but didn't show to him
sana - i will talk to you later bye you have to go to attend the meeting
caller - ya bye i will call you soon tc
sana- you too
she cut the call and as soon as she cut the call she fall down and tarika and purvi hold them and take her to her room
After they came to her room they lay her to the bed
and then daya look at a photo frame which is kept at side table. he was shocked
why was daya shocked?
aisa usne kya dekha?
guys really sorry i know it is not that much good but I have tried my best as this was my first story which I have write . there are many mistakes sorry for that. I will work hard
pls review it and tell me should I continue or not.
i should write the stories or not.
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