Nexus HWR 13.4 Professor Chaos:
Southern Wastes, Aebrith
On a trek across a barren, empty landscape, fourteen people and a two-tailed cat marched south towards their destination. They had been on foot for only fifteen minutes, but already the reality of their situation was setting in. "I can't believe you destroyed everything," Gray mumbled under his breath.
The pink haired mage walking next to him snapped his head to the side in annoyance. When Natsu turned though, he saw not only Gray, but every person behind him all glaring at him as well. "I took care of them didn't I?" He asked, folding his arms and turning back forward. The Dragon Slayer grumbled under his breath then added, "You were right, the Flood were powerful, but it's not like it would have been any better if I had run away too. Then we would have been on foot and on the run from the Flood."
"All my clothes," Nami snarled from the far opposite side of the group, as she knew if she was any closer to Natsu she would be trying to strangle him. "Not to mention," her teeth ground together and her fists clenched in fury. "My money," she snarled and her red eyes darted to Natsu who picked up his pace a little.
"Natsu's right though," Kirito admitted, making Natsu turn left and see the black haired teen speeding up. "If it's between being on foot and being chased, or just being on foot, this is the better option." Kirito had on a black sweatshirt, but even with it on he shivered and glanced up at the sky. There was a layer of gray clouds above him that got darker the farther south he looked. "Timmy is still south of us, but we don't know how much danger we'll come across between here and him. I'll scout ahead." A thin white veil surrounded Kirito and he floated off the ground slowly. He took a deep breath to steady himself, then shot a hundred feet up in the air.
"Going a little slow there," Sanji mentioned as he looked up towards the teen. "Wonder why he didn't take out his wings."
Gray grimaced on the left side of the chef, and Franky shook his head as he thought about what Kirito told him. The ice mage looked up as he continued to walk, and he said, "Kirito's wings were ripped off by Ra's al Ghul." The others looked his way, more specifically at his left arm, or lack thereof.
"Sounds like that Ra's was one tough baddie," Usopp mentioned as Gray grabbed his left shoulder with his free hand.
"He was," Juvia whispered from behind him. Sanji turned his head and saw the blue haired girl behind him looking down at the floor. Juvia rose a hand to her neck and she trembled as she touched her skin where his blade cut through. Sanji's eyes opened huge and he opened his mouth to say something, but Robin darted him a look that said, 'Drop it.'
"Ugh!" Nami exclaimed, throwing her arms up in the air, and getting everyone's minds off of Ra's al Ghul. "I just realized we don't have any food now too!"
"And I was just about finished with lunch," Sanji added. He glared over at Natsu who destroyed the kitchen he spent the morning slaving away in, and the Dragon Slayer looked away and started whistling. After the pirates mentioned it though, Natsu's mind wandered and his stomach let out an involuntary, and very loud growl. He went a shade paler in the face and whistled louder to mask the sound of the growl.
Their entire group had gathered together right after Natsu destroyed the Flood and their ship, and they discussed what they wanted to do from there. It was a unanimous decision to keep heading south to search for the Wizard King and their friend who they believed was being held captive by him. They did not realize at first what they were signing up for by agreeing to keep moving on foot, but now they were starting to get a rough idea. Everything for dozens of miles around them was black. The ground, the hills, even the bleak sky that seemed to be getting darker and darker. There was no vegetation anywhere, and without any walls around them, the nice cool breezes they felt after getting out of the truck were feeling more like painfully frigid winds every minute.
Nami crossed her arms and shivered, wishing she had prepared for something like this and grabbed her coat on her way off the truck earlier. An idea hit the pirate woman though and she turned to the taller man walking on her right side. Before she asked him her question, she examined his face and saw him looking so far-away. He was not just looking into the distance, or at the horizon, he was somewhere completely different at the moment. Sora, what happened? I know you were at the source of all that shaking. That battle looked intense, but I know you must have survived it. Now get back here soon, because we need to find her. I, I let you get taken. Kairi, Riku's face shadowed over. "Hey Riku," a voice said on his left, snapping him out of his dark state and making him turn to the woman next to him who was pretending she did not notice anything and had a hopeful look on her face.
"What is it Nami?" He questioned her.
"Couldn't you, you know?" She began, and he lifted his eyebrows as he did not get where she was going with this. She cupped a hand to her mouth and whispered, "You know, make a portal?"
Riku looked around at everyone walking with them. He turned back to the woman on his side and began softly, "Normally, I need to be able to visualize where I'm going. I knew what Metropolis looked like so I could get us all there. And other times when I used the darkness to get us out of a tight spot, I was never too sure on where I was going to come out. So," he continued while looking south, "I don't want to risk making a portal and jumping straight into an area full of monsters. I could probably avoid them if I can feel their darkness, but those Flood Natsu destroyed, I didn't feel a thing coming from them. They weren't dark, or evil, they were just… parasites."
Nami shivered thinking about those monsters. She nodded at Riku's explanation, though she really wished they would not have to walk all the way to Timmy. Half because she did not like walking, but also half because she wanted to reach Timmy as soon as possible, and walking was not cutting it.
"Yo Gray," Natsu began, turning to his friend who was thinking about where they were right now. The ice mage frowned but turned to Natsu who continued, "Were those things really the worst monsters down here?" The others looked in towards them, and though some thought that the Flood looked plenty scary, a few others agreed with Natsu that they did not seem so bad.
The top half of Gray's face shadowed over and he looked straight ahead again. "Over a year ago, I first heard about the Flood. It was after I joined the Resistance, so when we heard about them, I joined up with a few thousand others heading south to help evacuations." Gray turned his head right, then left, looking all around the bleak, black landscape. "All of this land used to be so rich. Grassy fields covered in Pokemon, towns and cities everywhere, it was beautiful." Gray could imagine it all. He could see how the place looked when he first headed this far south, and then how it currently looked filled his vision again and his small smile faded. "The Flood were unstoppable. We would crush them in one area, just to learn that they appeared in a city farther north that we had been evacuating people to. They were less monsters, and more a disease. And there was no cure. Millions of people died, and then, the Wizard King showed up."
His friends already looking at him all gained looks of confusion on their faces. Rin tilted his head to the side and spoke up, "I thought this Wizard King was a bad guy."
"He is," Nami added quickly. "He's forcing Timmy to do his bidding. I know it." She thought about what Timmy said, how he did not even react when they shouted his name back at the Resistance base, how he stared at her.
"I never said he wasn't," Gray said. "He stopped the Flood, but because he did, he felt like he deserved to rule over everyone. He constantly threatened to release the Flood on the world if we didn't do what he said. At first, the Resistance thought they could work together with the Wizard King. But his demands were unreasonable, his actions were not those of someone trustworthy, and though I have never met him myself." Gray's eyebrows narrowed in and he finished, "I've heard he's a total prick."
"Yeah, he is," Stan mentioned, making Gray turn to the kid walking behind him. The young boy in a brown cloak saw everyone look his way, and he grimaced before mentioning, "I'll be able to get Timmy Turner back for you all though. I promise." The twelve year old glared into the southern distance and his thoughts were dark. Are you treating this like a fucking game? Where do you think we are?
In the distant sky, two bolts of lightning dropped out of the black clouds. "Well," Rin began with a bead of sweat rolling down the side of his face. "This doesn't look fun."
They were stuck outside without any shelter and a thunderstorm on its way. Riku frowned and reconsidered using the darkness to get them somewhere else, though to where he did not know. Kuro turned its head towards Rin and the half-demon bent down and scooped his familiar up. Rin put the cat up in the hood of his sweatshirt and apologized that he forgot his bag inside the truck. Nami frowned deeply as she considered trying to change the weather, but with the clouds stretching as far as they were in every direction, she knew it would be futile.
"Let's keep going!" Luffy shouted, as he noticed all of his friends slowing down. "Timmy's just up ahead!"
The pirate captain started running forward and with that reminder on all their minds, his friends found it in them to speed up straight into the oncoming storm. "We're coming Timmy!" Nami shouted over a huge gust of wind that suddenly slammed into them.
"We're on our way little bro!" Franky exclaimed.
Usopp opened his mouth to yell out something encouraging too, but froze as five bolts of lightning dropped out of the sky only fifty meters in front of Luffy. The pirate captain himself skid to a stop at how close those bolts were, and he lifted his head to the sky to stare at the strangely moving black clouds. When he looked up, Luffy's jaw dropped and his eyes grew as wide as saucers. Something was falling from the clouds, a trail of smoke coming off his body while he spun around and around, his black sweatshirt torn to tatters and falling off him as he dropped.
"Kirito?" Juvia whispered through a gasp.
Ben's eyes opened huge, There's no way he just got struck by lightning. It had to be something else. "Something's up there!" Ben yelled, his chest clenching up. Fear started to well inside him and he balled his fists hard to try and soothe himself. Clenching his fists only made it worse though, as he imagined spikes being nailed through those very same hands only days before.
Usopp lowered his goggles over his eyes and peered carefully through them at the clouds. His jaw started lowering, getting lower, lower, until he stood there slack-jawed and unable to make out words. It was not long after he saw them that the rest of the group could however, and they stared up together in various levels of shock and fear. Floating out of the clouds was a muscular man ten feet tall who was surrounded by lightning bolts in a sphere that kept pulsing with electricity.
The man in the sky was terrifying, as lightning came off his body and flew up into the clouds, only to drop back down again even stronger as real lightning bolts crashing into the ground just ahead of the group. What was just as bad however, were the dozen robots that descended from the sky with him. Each one was a different color: silver, red, green, light blue, navy, purple, orange, brown, black, yellow, white, and gold. They were each close to ten feet tall, each had two arms and two legs, but there was variation in each robot, like how the yellow one only had a single glowing red eye on its round face, while most of the others had two. The black one had eight eyes all around its head, not just on the front where its face was. The purple one had a long smooth tail sticking out behind it, and the brown one was four feet taller than the second tallest robot.
The thirteen figures in the sky descended, while Riku sprinted towards where Kirito crashed down. He swung a Keyblade that appeared in his hand and a wave of green light fell over him, making the black burns all over Kirito's skin fade. The teenager lying on his back taking ragged, staggered breaths, calmed himself down and opened his closed eyes. "Thanks," he muttered, grabbing Riku's outstretched hand and letting the older teen help him up.
"Puny humans!" The muscular figure surrounded in lightning boomed. He rose his arms at his sides and spheres of electricity sparked to life over his palms. The spheres grew the size of bowling balls, then twice that, and then the man slammed his hands together in the air above him. "I am Professor Chaos!" Both spheres of electricity combined and he held one massive ball of lightning over his head.
"No way," Stan mumbled under his breath, lifting his gaze and focusing it on the man in the sky. There is no fucking way.
"Whoever you are," Natsu growled, his fists clenching at his sides. "You don't expect us to let you get away with that, do you?"
Luffy cracked his knuckles in front of his chest and glared straight up into the Professor's eyes. "What are you doing, attacking my nakama?" He snarled, his eyes focusing on the man and then darting around to look at the robots with him. Kirito glanced over towards Luffy and lifted his eyebrows up, but Luffy was staring up at the man in the sky and after a second Kirito looked back as well.
Riku turned after picking up Kirito, then the older teenager with long spiky silver hair held up his Keyblade. He rose up his other hand and a bright light shone around it, before revealing another Keyblade in his grasp that had a light blue hilt and long white shaft. He glared at the figure in the sky who was looking right back at him, then to Luffy, then to Natsu.
Professor Chaos got a bead of sweat on the side of his face at all the angry, scary gazes directed at him. The man pointed his right hand down and yelled out, "You people are trespassing in the Wizard King's domain! Umm," he backed up a little more in the sky as five people stepped towards him. One of them took a sword off his back and unsheathed it, wrapping himself in blue flames. The next one, who he sent flying out of the air a minute ago, drew a pair of swords himself and turned both of them black with Haki. Rin and Kirito were joined by Riku, Natsu, and Luffy, all of them looking angry and ready to fight.
"You destroyed the Flood!" Professor Chaos called down. He gulped and continued, "Which is against the Wizard King's rules, 'cause, um, he's keeping them away from the Resistance with the magic he enchanted the wall with!"
"Where is Timmy?!" Luffy shouted, throwing his arms up and snapping his head forward as he did.
"T-Timmy?" Chaos questioned, his voice losing its deep tone and sounding confused and nervous for a moment. He shook his head around and then looked back down and yelled, "As the General of the Wizard King's armies, I demand that-"
"Raaa!" Natsu leapt up in the air. He shot towards the annoying guy shouting at them, and he whipped his arms out to the sides as he did. Flames rose like wings on either side of him, but Natsu grimaced as his stomach rumbled. I used a lot of power to destroy all those Flood. Gotta make this count. "Fire Dragon's-" he whipped his arms forward to send the wings of flames he made at the evil professor.
The red robot flew forward, stopping only once it was between Professor Chaos and the Dragon Slayer. "Wing Attack!" Natsu finished with a roar, slamming his flames at his enemy. The red robot stood there on the air in his way, then it flew straight forward while Natsu's attack was still coming. The flames hit the ten foot tall robot, and then all the flames dispersed at once in every direction. The man who made the attack only had a second to go wide-eyed, before a steel fist covered in fire slammed him in the right cheek and sent him plummeting back to the ground.
"Not good," Sanji muttered, his eyes darting to his left and then back to the sky where there were a lot of those robots waiting.
"Gear Second," Luffy punched a fist out to the side and surrounded himself in steam.
The pirate disappeared and reappeared up in the air near the red robot. He punched his right fist out, yelling, "Jet Pistol!" As his fist was about to collide, the silver robot flew in the way and took Luffy's attack straight to its face. Luffy pushed in hard, only to clench his teeth in pain and pull back his arm while wincing. But I'm rubber, he thought in confusion, before refocusing as the silver robot flew after him, and the red one shot his way right behind it.
"Luffy!" Rin called up. He was about to jump up to help, but the white, yellow, and green robots all chose that second to drop out of the air behind Professor Chaos. They descended and pointed their arms at the three fighters still at the front of the human pack. Rin growled at the yellow robot and he slashed his sword down, sending a slash of blue flames at the machine. Right before his flames collided though, the yellow robot vanished, leaving a small trail of yellow lightning behind that Rin followed straight above his head, to where he could see a yellow leg swinging down at him.
"Rin!" Kirito yelled, but he was too slow to stop the steel leg from slamming into his friend's head and smashing him into the floor. Kirito leapt at the yellow robot and slashed his swords, but the green one flew right over the yellow one's back and brought its hands together in front of Kirito's chest. They glowed green for a second, and Kirito slammed his hands forward as fast as he could to throw himself back and away from the poison gas that shot out of the holes in the robot's hands an instant later.
As Kirito backflipped in the air, he thought, Alright, so green really was poison. That makes sense considering red and yellow. As he thought about red, he saw a pillar of flames shoot through the sky and he could still feel Natsu down on the ground to his left. The teen grew nervous and lifted his head to see if Luffy was fine, but the pirate seemed to have avoided the fire attack and was dropping down to the ground now. Luffy was about to touch down, when the silver robot shot out of the sky after him and brought a fist back far.
Luffy's feet touched the ground, and he pulled a steaming fist back, covering it in Armament Haki as he did. "HaaaAAA!" Luffy slammed his fist up right as the silver one was directly overhead bringing its own down. Their fists collided and a shockwave rippled through the air between their fists. Luffy continued to scream as he pushed harder and harder into his punch, but his arm was moving down, and the ground beneath his feet was breaking. Luffy knew he had to move, and he pushed down hard on the front of his feet to leap backwards out from under the punch. He just barely made it, and the silver fist slammed into the ground below where his feet just were.
As soon as the silver robot's fist hit the ground that was already lowered beneath Luffy's feet, the entire landscape around them shattered. It was a testament to Luffy's strength that he managed to hold it off for a few seconds, because everyone else still on the ground felt their feet rise as huge sections of the ground shattered. Cubes of earth flew in every direction out from the collision and debris slammed into almost everyone.
Riku found himself lifting up with the rubble, but he did not scream or panic like most everyone else. He stood still and looked through the debris at a robot flying straight towards him. The robot was white from head to toe, and Riku's eyes narrowed as he wondered what it could do. He saw its hands start glowing white, and Riku bent his knees down far as it got within fifteen feet of him. He shot off the lifting section of ground he was on and his Keyblades glowed right before he hit the robot. He slammed his weapons into it, while it punched its fists at him. Riku parried one fist with his Keyblade, then did a three-sixty spin and sent flying slashes off his blades so powerful that the front of the white robot in front of him ripped open, its sparking insides showing from the gash.
The silver haired young man did not stop after one slash though, giving chase after the robot through the sky. Below him, three Kiritos charged at the yellow and green robots, only for a half dozen other Kiritos to leap out of the ground behind the distracted robots and trap them. The yellow one was too fast even when trapped though, and lightning shot out of its hands and destroyed two shadow clones in under a second. Luffy faced off against the silver robot and he had his right forearm turned completely black, deciding that he needed to step it up a notch to fight this robot. Another robot descended towards Luffy from the sky, but the captain never looked up, instead letting the blond chef behind him to fly up and kick the purple robot right in its glowing face. Gray came running forward, but the light blue robot shot down as soon as Gray made a single Ice Make, and when it touched his ice hammer, the entire weapon shattered like glass.
Professor Chaos looked down from in between several of his robots still in the sky with him. His eyes were wide and he whispered, "Oooh," as he saw Kirito create a stone golem to take one of his robot's punches. Despite the cool powers of his opponents though, the robots were putting a number on them. Sanji got knocked out of the sky, and a recently-recovered Natsu charged back in, only for the red robot to focus on him and knock him right back down into the dirt.
"What are we going to do?" Ben asked, looking around at the others with him in a small circle. "How are we going to get to Timmy if we can't even get past these robots?"
Robin was thinking along the same lines, feeling very doubtful about their chances here.
"Butters!" The group turned all at once to a boy in the middle, one who had been staring straight up at their adversary the whole time with a look of confusion and awe. Professor Chaos lifted his gaze from the men fighting his robots, back to the others who were with them in the group behind. One figure in that group had on a brown cloak, a cloak that had a raised hood because of the cold that he only now removed. He lowered his hood and his gaze met with the man's in the sky. The man looking down dropped his jaw, and Stan took a step forward before yelling out again, "Is that, really you? Butters?!"
"Stan?!" Professor Chaos shouted, his voice sounding high-pitched and nothing like the menacing tone he used before. He rose up his right hand, and all of the robots down below stopped what they were doing. They shot back up in the air, all except for the white one which was now a pile of scrap at Riku's feet. The muscular man in the sky flew down without hesitation, flying straight down to the group of people he was just attacking, but he did not look at any of them while he did. He stared straight at the boy in the brown cloak, the boy in a blue hat with half of a red poof-ball on top of it. "It really is you!" Professor Chaos exclaimed, his voice not matching his body at all anymore.
"Butters, you look so, old," Stan said, looking Butters up and down once. Stan had so many questions, but he narrowed his eyes and said first, "Where is Timmy?"
"Timmy?" a voice asked, echoing in the minds of all those present. Many of the group were marching towards Professor Chaos, ready to kick his ass even if he did seem to know Stan. This voice made all of them freeze however. They stopped what they were doing and looked around, their eyes growing wide, their stomachs hurting and their visions getting blurry. "It's been so long Stan, I would have thought you would be coming to see me!"
"What's happening?!" Nami shouted, covering her eyes with one hand and grabbing her stomach with the other. She hunched over as it felt like her stomach turned upside-down.
"Ughh, I think I'm gonna be sick," Natsu moaned, his cheeks puffing out.
Luffy stumbled to his right side and grabbed his head in pain. Everyone was in pain, and then all at once, the pain was gone. The group opened up their eyes, and every one of them lowered their jaws in shock. They were no longer on a black, destroyed landscape. There were no longer any robots around them, and even Professor Chaos was gone. They now stood at the base of a staircase forty steps high, leading to a massive entryway over a hundred feet tall. On either side of the marble steps were pillars, and above the giant entryway with two closed wooden doors, the group could see a castle that stretched miles to the sides, and so far back that they could not see the end to it. Behind them was a giant courtyard with pillars on either side of a golden pathway that widened out a hundred feet back for a tall fountain covered in gorgeous statues. Around the sides of the courtyard and the castle was a grassy landscape that was so serene and tranquil, a huge reversal from the landscape they had been walking on.
While everyone took in the amazing stone castle in front of them, Stan heard a voice in his head, "Sorry Stan." Butters? What's going on?!
"Intruders!" A voice boomed, sounding like it was coming from inside the castle yet they could all hear it directly in their minds. It was the same voice as the person who spoke before and apparently teleported them all to this place. "I have read your minds, and I know why you are here!"
"Cartman!" Stan yelled, stepping towards the steps and bellowing it at the closed doors ahead of him. "What the Hell are you doing?!"
"Whatever I want, Stan," the voice snapped back, sounding a little peeved, and like it was a twelve year old speaking. The Wizard King continued, "And in my domain, whatever I say goes, so you better start listening to me!" Eric Cartman calmed himself down then smirked again from inside the tower at the top of his castle. He was looking at the open window in front of him, but instead of looking outside, the window showed a real-time video of the front of the castle and the people gathered there. "If you want to find Timmy, you'll have to make it through my castle. I warn you though, I have set up a bunch of traps."
Butters turned to the boy next to him who he was now also the same size as. The blond kid wearing aluminum foil around his head and on his back as a cape looked excited and he started, "This is going to be awesome! We finally get to use all those cool mazes and traps that you wished for!" Butters started giggling like mad.
"Shut up Butters," Cartman snapped.
Butters did, for a few seconds. The kid looked at the image again and focused on a boy in the middle of the group. "Hey, we're not really going to hurt Stan, are we?" He asked, looking a tad nervous as he faced the fat boy next to him.
Cartman scoffed smugly and said, "That depends on if Stan and his friends can survive the mazes." He froze when he finished his sentence. Cartman looked to his right where a purple pitbull was glaring at him, and the boy waved his hand at it, "Alright alright, I'll try not to kill them. Fine."
The purple pitbull vanished in a puff of white smoke, and in the air next to Eric Cartman, a tiny person with wings appeared. The fairy had tan skin, purple irises, and jet black hair that was slicked back and tied into a ponytail. He wore a white shirt that his large muscles pushed into and made them more defined, and when he appeared in fairy form he flexed and his shirt ripped off, only to reappear an instant later. Juandissimo Magnifico looked down at his Godchild and said, "Don't make me regret wishing up those mazes full of walking great-white-sharks with lasers on their heads, or the pitfalls into spiky spiders traps."
"Landsharks and spikers!" Cartman exclaimed a correction at the fairy, then he took a deep breath to calm himself down. "Don't worry, don't worry," he waved off Juandissimo's concerns with his hand. "It's all in good fun. Now come!" He lifted his right hand, and Juandissimo sighed before snapping his fingers. The fairy vanished in another puff of white smoke, and in Eric Cartman's hand appeared a wooden purple staff with eyes on it.
Alright, come on Stan, Cartman looked into the magical image showing the front steps of his castle, and he focused on the boy in a brown cloak at the bottom who wore his same-old red and blue poof-ball hat, only with the top half of the poof-ball missing like it was sliced horizontally. I can't believe you're still alive, Eric Cartman, or the infamous Wizard King, thought.
A/N Cartman is the Wizard King?! XD alright pretty sure most of you who know the show had already figured that one out, so not a huge surprise. But Juandissimo is Cartman's fairy? What do Cartman, Butters, and Juandissimo have in store for our heroes? Hope you all enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for reading! I don't have much of the next few chapters written out so it may be a while before I post them, just a heads up. Anyway, review responses:
Limit-Breaking chapter 91 . 20h ago
WHAT, There is no hint what are you talking about i read those scenes of tien very carefully what kind of hint was there. Great now im going to be paranoid, i mean i remember goku cutting of the strings that were attach to tien body and that was the last of tien. But before that happen he was still being kept alived by pitou in a certain way by having his organs still work as well as his breathing so he could still use his ki. But there was no hint of him being conscious, but than again you can't be dead and having your organs working and can't possibly allow you to use your powers unless he was alive. If you catch my drift there, uhhhhh i need more explanations on how it works to get a better understanding about tien so that i can tell if he is alive or not.
But i swear if goku goes to look for his body and it's not even there than i am going to go insane, like seriously give tien a break he has done nothing wrong. But if he is alive i will feel really bad for him since he would be very dissapointed with himself, And that would just be depressing.
But if he is dead than that is a really sad way to die , especially since he was getting to a really strong level. Besides even zoro wants to fight tien and i really wanted to see that fight to be honest.
ehhhh if the hint isn't anything that i mentioned so far than i am at for a loss of words at this point, Please give one more hint i don't want to wait in suspense, while you are in tokyo having the time of your life, and im here trying to find out the truth about tien, hell i like his character a bit more than bardock if im being honest.
Show some compassion and look deep into your heart there has to be a shred of kindness in there, DON"T BE A FRIEZA.
Besides all that the chaper was really good and the scene where juvia was starting to cry was nicely done. Sorry for not discussing more about the chapter, it's just the last thing you said is bugging me and want to see tien alive and well.
Either way great job and i look forward to the next
Oh and if you can answer my pm question that would be appeciated and how long will you be in tokyo for the summer or less cause we need more awesome chapters like these, well until the next
Final hint: the hint was in 10.9 . Guess you'll have to live with the suspense for now if you can't recall it XD! Tokyo is admittedly a blast, having the time of my life for sure. Surprised you like Tien more than Bardock here, since I have only shown him in a few flashbacks, though I actually really like Tien too. I feel like he's gotten the short straw in DB series since early DBZ, so to make him cooler I did the same thing with Zoro who I also really like and saved them to have their own full stories in Aebrith. The more I workshopped his plot though, the more I knew what had to happen, since if he was still around and fighting on Aebrith all this time, things wouldn't be so bad. Being a Frieza seems a little more like a compliment after how epic he was in the final episode of DBS ;) but we'll see if I can manage a little more kindness than him. Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Won't be back in the States until August :/, but I'll keep trying to write while I'm here! Hope you enjoyed the new chapter!
joebob323 chapter 91 . 5h ago
Ugh... Flood are a freaking pain to deal with... I want to know though, is the party traveling to the Wizard King's place the entirety of them? Not including Kairi, Goku, Timmy, or Dash though...
The Flood wiped out the Southern Wastes, though they probably weren't called that before the Flood... Almost everyone! You almost had the whole missing group, only leaving out Killua back at that Resistance base (comatose). Thanks for reviewing!
Espada-001 chapter 91 . 1h ago
Well I figured out who the wizard king was a while ago so I'm looking forward to seeing his old friend call him a fat ass as soon as the heroes get to his base. And dammit, why did you have to kill Kuina off! As for the tablet used in the last chapter I thought that it could only be used at night? I know that I saw this in somebody else's review asking about what happened to all the revive items and where did they go but I can't remember what you said about that. As for seeing Professor Chaos, I'm looking forward to Stan meeting him. Also after seeing Sephiroth arrive I'm wondering if he's trying to fuse with this planets life force because if he does that he'd be way stronger than ever before given just the size of the planet alone, not to mention the numerous forms of energy that is used on it. Well that's about all I have for now so until next time have a good day and I look forward to the next chapter!
Cartman it was! Didn't think I'd surprise many people after all the hints, so it wasn't really meant to be though I think it's funny most of you never mentioned him in reviews, like you were helping me prevent spoilers XD So thanks! I never really thought about the Tablet thing only being able to be used at night while I was writing it, so I went back- and like I thought it was night time during that flashback anyway as the setting. I didn't mention it in relation to the Tablet because I had forgot, but it matched up well so fwew. Stan couldn't believe what he was seeing at the sight of Butters (in the episode Good Times with Weapons there're parts where the kids all turn into action-anime forms in their heads, and that's what Butters actually looked like here, Let's Fighting Love XD). Sephiroth's appearance as a Guardian labels him as a major bad guy for this story, but not much else is known about him so far. Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoyed the new chapter! Thanks again to everyone for reading, and 'till next time!