(The story starts at Echo Creek Academy. Marco, Star and Janna surprise Jackie for her birthday with confetti and balloons.)
Marco:Alright, here she comes.
Marco, Star and Janna :Happy birthday, Jackie!
Jackie: Haha! Thanks guys!
Marco:(Hands her the balloons)These are for you.
Jackie:(Takes them)Nice balloons.
(The camera focuses on the balloons; none of which say 'Happy Birthday')
Star:They were on sale.
Janna: It stink we have to go to school on your birthday.
Jackie: Ugh. Seriously.
Janna:Did you tell them?
Jackie:Oh! Hey, do you guys wanna come to my party tonight?
Marco:Party?
Jackie:Yeah. It's kind of last minute, but I'm celebrating at this cool club called "Box".
Star: Club?
Janna:I'm bringing the cake.
Star:I'll be there.
Jackie:(Looking at Marco)So, you in? I know you're not much of a dancer.
Marco: Are you kidding? I dance all the time.
Jackie: You'll have to show me some moves, then.
Marco: You got it.
Jackie: Great! The party ends at midnight, so don't be late.
(She and Janna walk away)
Marco: Don't worry, we won't.
Star: Man, why is Jackie having her party at a club? Why can we take her to the bounce lounge.
Marco: Yeah, but you know what's better than the bounce lounge? Dancing with Jackie!
(Makes techno music noise)
Star: Ugh. It is when you dance like that.
Marco: I'm gonna show her my moves and then make my move, know what I'm sayin'?
(Makes techno music noise)
(The scene transitions to Marco and Star all dressed up and walking to the club, while Marco is still making techno music)
Marco (continued):(Singing)Time to dance with Jackie, let's get this party started!
Star:(Singing)With cake we'll be rewarded!
Marco: Yeahyuh!
(They come up to the club, which has a huge line of people outside)
Star:Is this it?
Marco: Ugh! Why don't they just use signs at these places?(Low voice)Oh, yeah, would be really cool to not have a sign so people can't find us.
Star:(High voice)Yeah, pretty cool.(Normal voice) We should just take her to The Bounce Lounge.
Marco: Ugh!Seriously though, how are we supposed to know if this is the place?
Star:(Walks away)I know how to find out.(Talks to a guy spray painting a wall)
Star: Excuse me, what are all those losers waiting in line for?
Graffiti guy: Just a dumb club. "The Box" is some junk.
Star: Thanks.
(Walks away)
Star (continued):Yeah, this is "The Box".
Marco: Aw, sweet! Come on; let's go to the front. Jackie probably put us on the list.
(Lots of people are going to "The Box" club. The bouncer lets two people in.)
Club Bouncer:Ok, you, (point at a party girl) and... you. (points at another party girl) Hi, there. (lets both of the party girls in)
Marco:Hey. Hey, dude. We're here for a party, man.
Club Bouncer: Everyone's here to party, man. Get in line.
(Walks away)
Marco:Dude, did you just check the list?
Star:Yeah, check the list!
Girl in line: Just leave! you are not on the list!
Marco:Yes we are!
Star:Be quiet!
Club Bouncer:Whoa! Whoa! Settle down! So, you really think you're on the list?
Marco:Yeah, we're supposed to be here.
Club Bouncer: Alright.(Checks clipboard)Sorry man.
Star:Wait! You didn't even ask our names.
Marco:Yeah!
Club Bouncer:(Sigh)What are your names?
Marco: Marco Diaz and Star Butterfly
.Club Bouncer: Oh,Marco Diaz and Star Butterfly Ok, yes, yes, you're definitely not on the list.
Marco:I don't believe you.
Club Bouncer: What?
Marco: Let me see the list.
Club Bouncer: You wanna see the list?
Marco: Yeah. Let me see the list!
Club Bouncer: Ready to get your minds blown?, 'Cause here it is.
(He reveals to them that there's nothing but blank pages)
Club Bouncer (continued):Boooooooooom! That's right, nobody is on the list.
Marco: But, but-
Club Bouncer:(Walks away)Now wait in line with everyone else.
Star:Ugh! What do we do now?
Marco:I'm calling Jackie, she'll get us in.
(The scene cuts in to Jackie's phone ringing while the music is super loud inside the club called "Box" and Jackie and Janna are seen dancing.)
Jackie: Janna, have you seen Star and Marco?
Janna:Not yet.
Jackie: I wonder what's keeping them?
Janna: You think Marco knows you've planned this last minute party, just so you can dance with him?
Jackie: Ha, ha. Very funny. Maybe I should call them.
Janna: Don't worry, they'll show. Just dance! (Janna spins in a circle, and claps with her hands. Then, Jackie and Janna continue dancing in "Box".)
Jackie (on phone):Hey. This is Jackie. Leave a message.
Marco: Ugh! She's not answering.
Star:(sighs) Come on, Marco. Let's just wait in this dumb line. (later, Star and Marco are waiting in line to get into "The Box", completely bored.)
Marco:Ugh! This is taking forever. It's already 10:45!
Party Club Man: First time here for you, two?
Marco and Star: Yeah.
Party Club Man: Ha! No worry. You gettin' used to the waiting after a while.
Star: Do you come here a lot?
Party Club Man:Every night, man! I love it! Love's my dancin', I'm manglin' with the ladies. Well, I love the idea who'd that stuff. I've never actually been inside. But it sounds like a lot of fun, right? Can you imagine what it's like in there? Are you imagining?
Marco:Wait, how long have you've been waiting to get in?
Party Club Man: About 11 years.
Marco and Star: Uhh... (More club members get into The Box, and Marco, Star, and the Party Club Man finally get to the front of the line.)
Marco: Alright!
Star: It about time!
Club Bouncer:(stops Marco, Star, and the Party Club Man.) Whoa, whoa, whoa, hold up guys, (points at the Party Club Man.) you. Come on. (lets the Party Club Man go in.)
Marco and Star: What?!
Party Club Man: Really?
Club Bouncer: Yeah. Come on.
Party Club Man:Oh, yes! HA-HA-HA! ELEVEN YEARS! HA-HA-HA! SEE YA ON THE OTHER SIDE, SUCKAS! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! (goes into "The Box".)
Marco: Dude, what the heck?! We we're next! We waited in line! What's the problem?!
Club Bouncer:The problem is what you're wearing. There's no way I'm letin' you in looking like that.
Star:What? This dress cost $30. I bought it online.
Club Bouncer: Sorry guys, but in this club, fashion rules. And all I'm seeing is drool.
(Then, a limousine drives by "The Box", and then a club woman steps out of the limo, wearing super hot fashion clothes, glasses, and an extremely funky hairdo. Then, the club woman enters "The Box".)
Star:Aw, what?!
Marco: What the heck?! You let her in?! But her clothes are ridiculous!
Club Bouncer: That's fashion, fellas. (Marco gets out of the line.)
Star: Wait, where you goin'?
Marco: You heard him. We gotta get some fashion. (Star follows Marco)
[Marco and Star start getting garbage bags, old socks, cups, goggles, and spray paint to make them as wearable fashion clothes. Then, one of the many people waiting in line to enter "The Box" sees something beyond his own eyes.]
Male Club Member:Whoa! (points at something) Look, everybody! (All the other club members in line look and saw that Marco and Star used garbage to look just like the club woman who entered "The Box".)
Multiple Club Members:Wow! Who are they? Yeah! I like it! Wooo! Yay! Yeah! They're awesome! Now hoo-tha-barb! Look at that! See, now that's putting on clothes! (They all cheer as Marco and Star go to the front of the line.)
Club Bouncer:(gasps as he sees Marco and Star in fashion clothes) Uhh.. (finally lets them go in) right this way. (Marco finally enters "The Box", Star slaps the list out of the Club Bouncer's left hand, and then goes in as the Club Bouncer picks it up off the floor.) Thank you!
Star: Marco, I can't believe that worked!
Marco: Psht. Fashion? More like "Tra-shion"!
Marco and Star: (both laughing) Whoa... (Marco and Star look around the inside of "The Box", and saw a lot of club members dancing to party music.)
Star: Marco, this place is CRAZY NUTS! It's look better than the bounce lounge, I wish Pony Head was here to see this. (Star used her phone and takes a picture of her at the box.)
Marco: Alright! Stay together! We gotta find-.
Ringtone: Space unicorn, soaring through the stars.
(phone ringing noise)
Marco:Oh. (Marco pulls out his phone, noticing that he has an incoming phone call from Jackie.) It's Jackie! (Marco accepts the phone call.) Jackies? Hey! We just got in! Where are you guys?
Jackie (on phone):Mar- Dancing!
Marco:What?
Jackie (on phone):In the back!
Marco:What?! In the back?
Jackie (on phone):Mar-
Marco:Hello? Hello? Hello?
(Marco hangs up and puts his phone away.)
Marco:Okay, Star. I think they're in the ba -
(Marco notices Star is gone)
Marco: Star?! Star?!
(Cut to Star walking through the club, amazed by his surroundings)
Star:Whoa!
(Star starts dancing on the dance floor.)
Star:Uh! Uh! Uh! Uh! Whoo!
(Cut to Marco, still looking for Star)
Marco: Star? Star! St - ugh!
(Marco bumps into Ladonna)
Ladonna: Yes?
Marco: Sorry, I'm just looking for a friend.
Ladonna: Well, here I am.
Marco: No, uhh -
Ladonna: Dance with me.
(Ladonna starts dancing while Marco watches)
Ladonna:I like your style. Come with me.
(Ladonna walks off)
Marco: Actually, I've gotta meet my friend - Jacki-
(Marco is dragged away. Cut to Star dancing, there is a massive crowd of people surrounding her cheering her on)
Star: Yeah! Yeah, yeah, yeah! This place is awesome!
(Star rips off her clothes and she wearing her Edgar dress outfit, causing everybody to gasp. Star keeps dancing)
Star: Ah, ah, ah, ah!
(Cut to Marco and Ladonna, go into a lounge area. Marco is thrown onto a sofa, and Ladonna sits down.)
Ladonna:Agh, that's better. So what did you say your name was?
Marco: Uh, Marco. But look -
Ladonna: Marco...I like that. I'm Ladonna.
(Ladonna puts her hand out for Marco to shake)
Marco: Uh, hi. But seriously, I'm just here to dance with my friend, Jackie, so -
Ladonna: Ugh! I'm parched! Waters please!
(Ladonna claps twice to get attention, while Marco anxiously looks at his phone - to realize he only has fifteen minutes until the party ends. The waiter brings Ladonna two glasses of water)
Ladonna:Have you ever had Vandana local water, Marco? It's infused with the laughter of babies, you have to try it.
Marco: I'm good. Thanks.
(Ladonna angrily pushes the glass of water towards Marco)
Ladonna: Try it!
(Marco drinks the water)
Marco: Mmm, mhm.
Ladonna: Your look - it screams high fashion. Where did you get your ensemble?
Marco: Uh, out back?
Ladonna:Australia?! Wonderva!
(Ladonna gasps and puts her hand on Marco's hand)
Ladonna:We must go tonight. I have a jet. Can you imagine the fun we'll have?
Marco: Uh.
Ladonna:Are you imagining?
(Marco swipes his hand away)
Marco: No, look! My friend Jackie is waiting for me and-
(Marco notices Star getting pulled away by security in the distance)
Star: Get off me! Come on, I was just having fun! What, you aren't allowed to have fun in this place?
(Marco gasps and runs after Star)
Marco: Star!
Star: Let go!
Marco: Star! Did you find Jackie?
Star: No, I was just dancing and now the boneheads are kicking me out!
Marco: What?
Lafayette: This fashion reject is an embarrassment to our club! She's gotta go!
Star: You're the reject!
(Ladonna walks over)
Ladonna: What is going on here?
Marco: Agh! This is why clubs stink! You think you're better than everybody else! There's that dumb list that no-one can get on, that weird baby water, this annoying music?
Star: Actually, I like the music!
Marco: And now you're kicking my friend out because she's not wearing the right clothes?! Well I'm not wearing the right clothes.
(Marco takes the trash suit off)
Marco: I got this stuff out of the trash. Are you gonna kick me out too?
(Everybody, including Ladonna, gasps)
Marco: Star is not an embarrassment. This stuck-up club is an embarrassment.
Star: Marco right, you all an embarrassment.
Ladonna: Well, I am the owner of this "stuck up club", and I want you two gone.
Marco: What?
Ladonna: Harvey! Lafayette!
(Marco gets grabbed by security)
Marco: Huh - wait!
Ladonna: Throw these losers out.
Marco: No! Please! Jackie's waiting for me! I promised I'd dance with her!
Lafayette: Not tonight, kid.
Star: Let go of me!
Marco: No!
(Marco gasps as he sees the back of what seems to be Jackie's head)
Marco: Jackie! Ugh!
(Marco elbows and karate Lafayette and runs towards Jackie. Ladonna notices)
Ladonna: Get him!
(Star gasps and steps on Harvey's foot, then runs after Marco. Both security guards chase them)
Star: Do you see her?
Marco: Yeah! She's up ahead!
(Marco gasps as he sees Lafayette appear in front of him)
Star: I got this! Narwhal blast! (Star shoot her narwhal at Lafayette)
Marco: Thanks, Star!
(Ladonna gets angry and lights up)
Marco: Jackie!
(Ladonna growls as forms a ray of energy that starts chasing Marco)
Marco:Jackie! Aghhh!
(Marco passes the Party Club Man)
Party Club Man:This is the best night ever!
(Marco slides under the man's feet. The man laughs and then gets hit by Ladonna's energy ray. He lights up and light rays are projected across the entire club. Marco finally approaches who appears to be Jackie)
Marco: Jackie! I made it! So how about that-?
(Marco touches her on the shoulder, she turns around and is revealed to be a random girl with a similar haircut to Jackie's. Marco gasps, and is then tackled by security. Cut to black, then Marco and Star are seen being thrown out of the club into an alleyway)
Marco and Star:Agh!
(Star runs into the door to try and break it down, but is unsuccessful)
Marco:Ugh. Forget it, Star. It's after midnight. Jackie probably went home by now.
Star:Sorry Marco, there's always next year.
(Jackie and Janna are suddenly seen leaving the club opposite)
Jackie:Marco! Star!
Marco:Jackie?
Jackie:We were just coming to look for you guys!
Janna:What happened?
Star:We just got kicked out of The Box.
Jackie:The Box? Why were you guys in there?
Marco:That's where you said the party was.
Jackie:I said "Box". Not "The Box". They're totally different.
Jackie:Yeah, that place is way stuck up.
Star:It was amazing.I got pictures on my phone! (Star show Janna her phone.)
Janna: Sweet.
Marco:Sorry we missed your party, Jackie.
Jackie:Oh, it's alright.
Janna:We still have some cake inside.
Star:Then what are we standing around here for? It better be chocolate.
(Star and Janna run in, while Star giggles. Jackie begins to walk inside)
Marco:Hey. Jackie. Hold up.
(Marco reveals a present to her)
Marco:Happy birthday.
Jackie:Oh, Marco. You didn't have to!
Star:It's just a mixtape!
(Jackie looks up at him annoyed that he spoiled the surprise)
Marco:Uh - I mean, haha! Who knows what it is? Open it.
Jackie:Pfft.
(She opens the present)
Jackie:A mixtape!
Marco:Hey!
Jackie:Where's the song list?
Marco:It's a surprise! You gotta listen to it!
Jackie:Alright, let's listen to it!
Marco:What, now?
(Jackie approaches the graffiti guy and picks up his boombox)
Jackie:Hey dude, can we borrow this?
Graffiti Guy:Oh, sure thing.
(Jackie plays the mixtape)
Jackie:Wow, nice. So how about that dance?
Marco:Oh, okay.
(Marco and Jackie both dance with each other, and laugh)
(The End )
