Hello and welcome to chapter 4. As you no doubt saw in the last chapter, Ichigo and Rangiku managed to save Orihime from Acid Wire and Orihim moved into Ichigo's room. Now in the last chapter, I happened to notice that there were quite a lot of people who didn't like the idea of Orihime moving in with Ichigo and i can understand since it leads a lot of you to think that this is turning into a harem story. Some even said that I've mislead my readers, and yes I am. But the question is, am I misleading the ones who want an IchigoxRangiku solo story, or am I misleading the ones who want a harem story? Well there's only one way to find out. I will drip feed you as to where this fanfiction leads and you'll know what this actaully is when we reach the last chapter.
Anyway, this chapter will show who the substitute souls Ichigo and Rangiku have, though I'm sure most of you have already identified them by now.
Disclamer: I didn't decide to include Orihime to turn this into a harem. The only reason I included her was for story-telling purposes
Author's Note: Okay my readers, I know the original version of this chapter was a disaster and I apologize for that. But before any of you go in and beat up this new and improved version of the chapter, please read it from beginning to end. Only then should you review it, and when you do, be as brutally honest as you need to be. And now my readers, without further ado, I give you the new and improved chapter 4.
Chapter 4:
Early the next morning, Ichigo, Rangiku, and Orihime were sleeping in their new bunk bed with Orihime sleeping on top and Ichigo sleeping on the bottom. But this wasn't just any bunk bed, it was a twin over full bunk bed and Ichigo wasn't sleeping in the full bed by himself. He snuggled at first, but then realized something once again and woke up.
"At it again, aren't you Ichigo," Rangiku teased.
Once again, Ichigo jumped out of bed and fell to the floor upon realizing Rangiku was sleeping with him with his head in her cleavage again. Rangiku laughed at Ichigo's antics and Orihime woke up from the commotion.
"Will you stop doing that, Rangiku," Ichigo yelled frantically.
"It's not my fault you keep snuggling in my cleavage," Rangiku brushed off. "All I'm doing is sleeping in the same mattress as you."
"Are you saying I'm the one who put my head into your bosom," Ichigo questioned.
"GOOD MORNING ICHIGO…!"
Isshin flew in and kicked Ichigo in the face while he was destracted.
"You let your guard down again," Isshin told his son.
"What the hell, Dad," Ichigo accued.
"Um excuse me, Doctor Kurosaki," said Orihime, getting Isshin's attention. "Could you please not do that? I'm not used to having so much noise when I wake up."
"Oh, well since you asked so nicely Orihime, I guess I can tone it down," Isshin blushed.
"Oh yeah, you listen to her and not your own son," Ichigo muttered.
Isshin cleared his throat before telling them, "Anyway, breakfast will be ready in about an hour. So get ready you three."
"Okay," Ichigo, Rangiku, and Orihime agreed.
Isshin then left the room.
Orihime walked to the door. "I'm going to go to the lady's room."
"Good luck," Rangiku winked.
Orihime then left the room, closing the door behind her.
Suddenly, Rangiku's soul phone went off.
"Don't tell me, there's a Hollow nearby," Ichigo questioned, not looking too thrilled.
"I'm afraid so," Rangiku confirmed. "I'd better get going to stop it."
"Wait," Ichigo called out. "You're powers still haven't fully returned yet, so I'm going with you."
"Huh," Rangiku asked.
Ichigo then took out what looked like a candy pez dispenser, Rangiku followed with her own candy pez dispenser. Ichigo's had the head of a duck while Rangiku's had the head of a rabbit.
Flashback:
Ichigo and Rangiku arrived at Kurosaki clinic where they dropped off the dresses Rangiku bought from the mall. Once that was done, Rangiku took out the things she bought at Urahara's shop.
"What are those supposed to be," Ichigo questioned.
"They're Gikongans or substitute soul pills," Rangiku explained. "Tablets that force souls from the bodies. We Soul Reapers use them in order to cover for us whenever we're using a Gigai. All one has to do is swallow one and a substitute soul will enter the user's body so that the real one can roam free. I know you still haven't made up your mind on whether you wish to continue to be a substitute Soul Reaper or not, but should either of us face a Hollow while the other isn't around we could use them to transform into a Soul Reaper. We'll need these if we're going to protect Orihime from the Hollow that supposedly attacked her."
"They've got Soul Candy printed right on here," Ichigo noted.
Rangiku laughed. "Yeah, that's only because the Soul Society Women's League complained and I was one of them. We didn't like Gikongan because we thought it wasn't cute enough, so they decided to change it."
Ichigo questioned, "Alright, why is mine a duck and yours a…"
"Don't complain," Rangiku promptly buried Ichigo's face in her cleavage. "I was going to get you Chappy the Rabbit, but ended up getting Yuki the Duck."
"Okay, so you wanted one shaped like a rabbit for me then, huh," Ichigo questioned, still not understanding what she was saying.
"What was that you just said," Rangiku shoved Ichigo's face even further into her cleavage, cutting off his access to air. "Don't you dare mock me you imbecile…!"
"It's not that," Ichigo defended himself, his voice muffled by Rangiku's bosom. "I just didn't understand your explanation is all."
Rangiku then released Ichigo, enabling him to breath.
"I'll show you then," Rangiku then took her Soul Candy and popped out of her Gigai with the Substitute Soul taking control of her Gigai. "See that, Ichigo? Just one and your soul will be released from your body while the Substitute Soul takes care of your body. No one will even notice that your real soul is gone."
"Hello, I'm Rangiku Matsumoto," the Substitute Soul explained.
"Oh, I see," Ichigo nodded.
"Anyway," Rangiku then reentered her Gigai, forcing the Soul Candy out. "We better get going to Orihime's place right away."
"Right," Ichigo agreed.
The two then made their way to Orihime's place.
End of Flashback:
Ichigo looked at his Soul Candy and swallowed it, popping out of his body in Soul Reaper form while the substitute soul took control of his body. Rangiku was quick to follow in suit.
"Okay, we're off," Ichigo told the two substitutes.
"You two take care of the rest," Rangiku told them.
"Don't worry," Ichigo's substitute soul told Ichigo and Rangiku.
"Just leave it to us," Rangiku's substitute soul told them.
Ichigo and Rangiku then went off to face the Hollows, leaving their substitute souls to handle the rest. But unbeknownst to any of them, Ichigo's substitute soul was no ordinary substitute soul.
"Take your time," Ichigo's substitute soul smirked.
Back at Urahara's shop, Jinta presented Ururu with one of the boxes from the storage room, the one Kisuke noticed last night.
"Take a good look," Jinta told her. "What does it say? Go on, read it…!"
"Ah, Defective Goods," Ururu read.
"Yeah, that's right, Defective Goods," Jinta shouted. "Do you have any idea of what you've done? You sold a customer faulty merchandise, you dummy…!"
Ururu dipped her head in shame. Jinta then pulled at her hair strands and calling her names, prompting Urahara to tell them to stop fighting.
"You know, if we're not careful, those two could cause some real problems," Tessai pointed out.
"Yeah, you've got that right," Kisuke agreed. "We can't just sit on this. I'm just ashamed we didn't do this last night. We'd better take care of it right away. There's no telling what they might do if we let them run loose out there."
In Ichigo's room, Ichigo's substitute soul stretched out Ichigo's limbs as he tried to get a feel of his "new body". Rangiku's substitute soul did the same for Rangiku's Gigai.
"It's been a long time since I had a body to get around in," Ichigo's substitute soul commented. "Looks like I'm finally free."
"I feel the same way," Rangiku's substitute soul agreed. "Probably best that we don't get found out though."
Rangiku's substitute soul then went up to the door and locked it.
"Well now, what should I do while I have a body to get around in," said Ichigo's substitute soul
"Nothing at all, sweety, unless you want to get something going," Rangiku's substitute soul walked back to Ichigo's substitute soul in a suggestive manner.
Ichigo's substitute soul then looked at Rangiku's cleavage and saw just how massive it was, despite being covered by a pajama shirt. He then made a move on her.
"Hey there, beautiful lady," said Ichigo's substitute soul as he took Rangiku's hand and rubbed it. "I don't believe that we've met. Would you please do me the honor of telling me your name?"
Ichigo's substitute soul then kissed Rangiku's hand, causing Rangiku's substitute soul to blush.
"A gentleman always introduces himself first before the lady does," Rangiku's substitute soul informed Ichigo's.
"Oh, right," Ichigo's substitute soul agreed cheekily. "Well there's one problem with that, I don't have a name…"
"Oh that's a shame, but it's okay," Rangiku's substitute soul grabbed a hold of Ichigo's hands. "I don't have a name either. So how about we skip to some of the good parts."
Rangiku's substitute soul then got in close to Ichigo's substitute soul.
"Ah wait, what are you doing," Ichigo's substitute soul questioned.
"I hear physical contact is important in the World of the Living," Rangiku's substitute soul teased.
"Now that you mention it, I've heard that to," Ichigo's substitute soul agreed. "But don't you think we're moving a bit too fast?"
"Oh, I don't care," said Rangiku's substitute soul. "Besides, there's no one in the room, so what's the big deal?"
"Yeah, I guess you're right," Ichigo's substitute soul agreed. "But how about we take this to the bed?"
"Good idea," Rangiku's substitute soul agreed. "I'm willing to find out just how good you are in bed."
Meanwhile, Ichigo and Rangiku had arrived at the spot where the Hollow signal was coming from. Upon reaching the place, the two were met by two hollows. Ichigo took down one of them while Rangiku took down the other. However, Ichigo suddenly felt something.
"What's wrong, Ichigo," Rangiku asked.
"I'm getting a bad feeling," Ichigo answered.
"If you're talking about the Hollows," Rangiku assumed.
"It's not the Hollows," Ichigo interrupted. "It's about those two substitute souls. I can't help but imagine what they might be doing to Orihime alone in my room."
"Our room you mean," Rangiku reminded him.
"Whatever," Ichigo groaned. "We'd better get back just in case."
Not arguing, Ichigo and Rangiku made their way back to Ichigo's house.
In Ichigo's room, Ichigo and Rangiku's substitute souls had relocated onto the bottom bunk of the bed. Ichigo's substitute soul was lying on his back while Rangiku's substitute soul was on top of him, their eyes focused on one another.
"Hey handsome," said Rangiku's substitute soul.
"Yeah," said Ichigo's substitute soul.
"My buttons are too tight," Rangiku's substitute soul pulled at the top of Rangiku's buttoned pajama shirt. "Could you adjust them for me, please?"
Ichigo's substitute soul blushed at this, but eagerly accepted the offer. "Don't mind if I do."
Ichigo's substitute soul unbuttoned Rangiku's pajama shirt and removed it, exposing Rangiku's massive cleavage. "Oh wow…!"
Ichigo's substitute soul then reached up and groped Rangiku's breasts, causing Rangiku's substitute soul to moan and blush.
"Amazing," Ichigo's substitute soul admitted. "I knew groping a girl's breasts would be amazing, but this is better than I thought."
While Ichigo's substitute soul continued his groping, Rangiku's substitute soul moaned feverishly from the feel of Ichigo's hands groping her.
"Oh yes," Rangiku's substitute soul moaned. "You're so rough with my breasts."
Outside, Orihime was standing right at the door, having finished her time in the lady's room. She was about to open the door when she overheard the moans inside the room.
Outside, the house, Ichigo and Rangiku were running as fast as they could.
"Tell me again why we're in such a rush to get back home," Rangiku questioned.
"I'm worried," Ichigo told her. "I want to make sure they're doing okay."
"There's nothing to worry about," Rangiku objected. "They're fine."
"I'm not so sure about that," Ichigo objected back. "I'm getting kinda a bad vibe all of the sudden."
Ichigo and Rangiku soon reached their house and jumped up to their room. Ichigo went first, opened the window, and entered the room. Rangiku followed immediately afterwards. Why they didn't just phase through the wall was anyone's guess.
As soon as they reentered, they saw what was going on and had shocked expressions on their faces. There was Rangiku's substitute soul sitting atop while Ichigo's substitute soul groped her breasts. Ichigo was fuming at the sight of this, so much so that he was ready to blow his head off. Rangiku on the other hand found this amusing and laughed her ass off.
"Well, this is awkward," Ichigo's substitute soul rubbed the back of his head.
"Oh, you came just in time for the best part," said Rangiku's substitute soul.
"What the hell are you guys doing," Ichigo fumed.
"Ha, ha, that's hilarious," Rangiku laughed.
"What the hell is so funny about it," Ichigo shouted. "Those two are molesting our bodies! I mean look at where my hands are…!"
"Oh don't be so negative about it, Ichigo," Rangiku told him. "Besides, let's just be thankful that Orihime wasn't caught in the middle of this."
"Shut up," Ichigo then got back into his body, forcing his substitute soul out.
Rangiku followed in suit, forcing her substitute soul out of her Gigai.
Unfortunately in their eagerness, Ichigo forgot where his hands were and felt something soft in them. Looking up, he saw that his hands were still holding Rangiku's melons, causing him to blush like a strawberry (no pun intended). Rangiku also blushed before Ichigo removed his hands from her mounds.
"Sorry," Ichigo apologized.
But while Ichigo did apologize, there was a part of him that couldn't help but admire the feel he had in his hands just moments ago. At the same time, Rangiku couldn't help but admire the feel of Ichigo's hands on her bosom. Sure their perverted substitute souls were the ones doing the deed, but both couldn't help but secretly have one part of them want to experience it again. However, as much as they secretly admired the sensation, they remembered that the others were waiting in the dining room and quickly got dressed. As they dressed, both couldn't help but try and get a glimpse at each other while they dressed, Ichigo getting a glimpse of Rangiku's sizable assets and Rangiku getting a glimpse of Ichigo's muscular figure, causing both to blush.
Later that day, Ichigo, Rangiku, and Orihime were walking to school together. As they walked, Ichigo couldn't help but glimpse over at Rangiku's cleavage, though he did his best to hide it. At the same time, Rangiku couldn't help but glimpse at Ichigo's muscular arms and noticed him glimpsing at her bosom. Orihime noticed all of these glimpses and couldn't help but wonder what was going on. Taking into account that the two were alone together in the bedroom, she realized that there was only one explanation.
"That's it," Orihime said out loud, getting Ichigo and Rangiku's attention. "Ichigo, you were giving Rangiku a nice massage, weren't you?"
Nevermind…
Ichigo and Rangiku couldn't help but feel embarrassed that Orihime jumped to the wrong conclusion, but they went along with it.
"You're right, Orihime," Ichigo told her.
"Guess we've been caught red-handed," Rangiku giggled.
"Well, maybe you could give me a massage too," Orihime offered.
"She really is an airhead," Ichigo and Rangiku thought while sweat dropping.
Later at Karakura High School, Ichigo, Rangiku, and Orihime had joined their classmates where Orihime explained what happened the previous night, leaving out the parts about the Hollow and Ichigo and Rangiku's status as Soul Reapers.
"What, you moved in," one of the girls gasped.
"Yep," Orihime smiled. "Though I must admit Michiru, getting used to the place is not easy."
"I'll bet," Michiru nodded her head.
"But what happened to your apartment," said another girl.
"Oh, I got wrecked by a pair of sumo wrestlers," Orihime told them.
As Orihime told the girls her tall tale, Ichigo and Rangiku sat at their respective desks, taking in what they witnessed that morning.
"I can't believe that happened," Ichigo sighed. "Why did my substitute soul do that?"
"He's obviously a pervert, and so is mine," Rangiku told him. "Thought I'm not sure why you're complaining about it. You seem to enjoy sleeping in my cleavage every night."
"We've only been sleeping together for three nights," Ichigo pointed out. "And it's not like I'm doing that on purpose."
Rangiku went on teasing him, "I'll bet you wouldn't mind showering with me some time."
"Shut up," Ichigo shushed. "We're in the middle of class…!"
Rangiku was about to say something else when she suddenly got a signal on her soul phone. "Uh oh, we've got another one."
"Oh great," Ichigo sighed.
"If you want, you could stay here while I go take care of it," Rangiku offered.
Ichigo sighed before answering, "Do what you want."
Rangiku nodded before taking his soul candy. "You take care of things here."
"Just leave it to me," said her substitute soul.
"Rangiku," Ichigo got her attention. "Good luck out there."
Rangiku then left the classroom and went off the fight the Hollow, leaving Ichigo with her substitute soul.
"I guess I better keep an eye on you," Ichigo told Rangiku's substitute soul.
"I don't mind that at all, cutie," Rangiku's substitute soul made a move on Ichigo. "In fact, I wouldn't mind if you kept your eye on me all the time."
"Oh shit, I forgot that she's a pervert," Ichigo mentally gasped.
"Wait a minute," Ichigo tried to resist. "Don't even think about it."
Meanwhile, Rangiku had arrived at the spot where the Hollow signal came from and had encountered it. The Hollow attacked her by running right at her, but Rangiku quickly moved out of the way.
"GROWL, HAINEKO…!"
Rangiku tried to activate her Zanpakuto, but for some reason, it didn't respond.
"What, it's not working," Rangiku gasped.
Before Rangiku could process what happened or didn't happen, the Hollow wacked her into a wall.
"What's the matter, Soul Reaper," the Hollow taunted. "Can't activate your weapon?"
"Damn it," Rangiku thought. "It must have happened when Ichigo absorbed half of my powers. I should be thankful he didn't take all of my powers, otherwise I'd really be in trouble."
Back in the classroom, Rangiku's substitute soul was trying make a move on Ichigo. She managed to back him into a wall and was too close for comfort.
"Hey, stop it," Ichigo complained.
"What's the matter handsome," Rangiku's substitute soul questioned suggestively. "Don't you think I look hot?"
Ichigo didn't answer this, but he already knew what it would have been. Suddenly, Ichigo felt something strange, as if someone was in trouble.
"Rangiku," he gasped quietly.
"Something wrong," Rangiku's substitute soul asked.
"Sorry but I have to go," Ichigo then reluctantly took his soul candy.
Taking on his Soul Reaper form, Ichigo went for the window before ordering the two, "I'm going after Rangiku. Don't try any funny business while I'm gone…!"
"Don't worry," said his substitute soul. "We'll keep it under control."
Ichigo had a hard time believing what his substitute soul was saying, but he knew that he had no choice but to trust him and took off after Rangiku.
On the battlefield, Rangiku was struggling against the Hollow. Seeing that her Zanpakuto wouldn't activate in her weakened state, she opt for old fashion sword fighting and other tricks.
"HADO #4: BYAKURAI…!"
Rangiku pointed her index finger at the Hollow and generated a concentrated bolt of lightning. She then fired that lightning at the Hollow, but barely missed its mask, only hitting its right shoulder. The Hollow screamed in pain from the spell, but the lieutenant could see that the damage wasn't as severe as she had intended it to be.
"Damn it, I should have known," Rangiku thought. "Not only did I lose the ability to use my Shikai, but my Kido spells are only half as strong."
The Hollow came in with another attack, but the lieutenant managed to evade it by moving backwards. Sadly, she failed to notice a second Hollow come in and attack her. But just as the Hollow was about to strike her, Ichigo came in and took it down. Rangiku was shocked.
"What's wrong Rangiku," Ichigo teased. "You're not turning into a damsel in destress, are you?"
"If I am, does that make you a knight in shining armor," Rangiku teased back.
The first Hollow them came in to attack, but Rangiku, having had enough of the troublesome Hollow, leaped into the air and sliced through the Hollow's mask right down the middle, killing it in the process.
"That was too close," Ichigo acknowledged.
"Tell me about it," Rangiku agreed. "Anyway, we'd better get back to school. After what we saw back in our bedroom, I'm not sure you want to know what those two might be doing to the others."
Ichigo's face then went strawberry-red again as he realized what Rangiku was implying to him, "Oh crap, you're right…!"
At the classroom, Ichigo and Rangiku's substitute souls were at it again. Ichigo's substitute soul was making a move on Rangiku's substitute soul and vice versa and this caught everyone's attention.
"Well, hello again Handsome," Rangiku's substitute soul seduced.
"Hello yourself, Beautiful," Ichigo's substitute soul replied.
"So, care to pick up where we left off in that bedroom," Rangiku's substitute soul moved Rangiku's right hand so it was grabbing Ichigo's dick.
"I don't know about that," Ichigo's substitute soul replied. "Back there, we were alone, but here, there are people watching us."
"So, I don't mind," Rangiku's substitute soul tempted Ichigo's. "Besides, I think it'll make this more special."
"Well if you insist," Ichigo's substitute soul moved Ichigo's right hand so it was stroking Rangiku's pussy.
Everyone else in the room watched and were shocked at what they were seeing. Tatsuki in particular wasn't liking where this was going and walked up to the two to stop what they were doing.
"Ichigo, Rangiku, what the hell do you think you're doing you stupid morons," Tatsuki questioned. "You can't do things like that here…!"
Ichigo's substitute soul then looked at Tatsuki's face and couldn't help but say, "Wow, you look pretty cute yourself now that I get a good look at you."
Tatsuki was caught off guard while the other girls gasped.
Outside, Ichigo and Rangiku had arrived at the campus. But just as they were about to head for the room, they noticed a desk be flung out the window.
"Oh no," Ichigo sighed.
"It looks like we're too late," Rangiku acknowledged.
In the room, Tatsuki was throwing a temper tantrum, and a bunch of desks, at Ichigo's substitute soul, still believing it was Ichigo. "You son of a bitch…! DIE…!"
Tatsuki threw another desk as Ichigo's substitute soul evaded the attack.
"What's wrong," Ichigo's substitute soul questioned. "All I did was kiss your cheek, why is that such a big deal? I mean you're not in Grade School anymore."
But his words fell on deaf ears as Tatsuki picked up another desk and came at him shouting, "SHUT UP…!"
But before she could strike him, Rangiku's substitute soul came in and knocked Tatsuki to the wall, causing her to lose the desk she was carrying.
"Back off," Rangiku's substitute soul told her.
Tatsuki, now more hostile than before, got up and said, "You want to go one round with me, Bimbo…?"
"Bring it on," Rangiku's substitute soul got into a fighting stance and Tatsuki did the same.
Moments later, Tatsuki charged in, but Rangiku's substitute soul literally beat her to the punch and she socked her in the gut. This action caught everyone's attention and Tatsuki slumped to the floor.
"That was just a warmup," Rangiku's substitute soul warned Tatsuki. "But I warn you, if you come at him again, it won't be."
Suddenly there was a shout, "That's enough…!"
Both substitute souls looked to the door and Rangiku with her arms crossed, a serious look on her face. That was bad enough, but it got worse as Ichigo came in from the window with the same expression as Rangiku.
"Uh oh," the two substitute souls gasped.
There was a moment of silence.
Suddenly, both substitute souls came in and attacked Ichigo and Rangiku.
"Hey, you," said Ichigo while defending himself from "himself". "I mean us… Why the hell are you doing this…?"
But instead of answering, the two substitute souls continued to attack Ichigo and Rangiku, displaying superhuman strength and speed, making Rangiku realize something.
"Those movements," Rangiku thought. "These substitute souls' strength and speed… No, it can't be…!"
At the same time, the others saw this, but they couldn't see Rangiku or Ichigo's Soul Reaper forms so they only saw Ichigo and Rangiku punching and kicking thin air. The only one who could tell what was going on was Orihime as she helped Tatsuki back to her feet.
"Ichigo, Rangiku," Orihime wondered.
"Why are they attacking the air like that," said Michiru.
"Who cares," said Tatsuki.
Just then, the two substitute souls kicked Ichigo and Rangiku respectively, sending them flying through the desks, causing everyone in the room to be confused as to what was happening.
"Wha-What's going on," Michiru gasped.
"Don't know," said Chizuru. "Maybe it's a poltergeist."
But Orihime could see what was really going on as Ichigo and Rangiku got back on their feet and prepared for round 2. But just as they were about to go at it again, the two substitute souls leaped out of the window and made a mad dash away from the campus.
"What the hell do they think they're doing," Ichigo asked. "Are they crazy or what?"
But all of their actions confirmed Rangiku's suspicions. "Could this even be possible? No, they couldn't be… They must be… Mod Souls…"
The two Soul Reapers then left the classroom again to go after the Mod Souls.
"What the hell was that all about," Mizuiro asked.
"I don't know," said Keigo. "I didn't see a thing."
"Who cares about that," Tatsuki said in a fit of rage. "Those two are dead…!"
Tatsuki calm down," Orihime told her best friend. "I don't know who those two were, but they weren't Ichigo or Rangiku."
"Huh," Tatsuki gasped. "What do you mean?"
"I'm going after them," Orihime then went for the door and ran after Ichigo and Rangiku, leaving the others to ponder what she was talking about.
And that was chapter 4. So yeah, as you can see, Ichigo and Rangiku's substitute souls are both perverts and attempted to enjoy one another at the start of this chapter. Later they tried it again, but Tatsuki got in the way, got into a fight with Rangiku's substitute soul, and the rest his history. But this time, Orihime is accompying the two as they go after their Mod Souls. Now I haven't properly introduced them yet, but I'm sure you all know who they were based on their dialog and their actions, they were Kon and Momone.
Now the next chapter will have Ichigo and Rangiku try to track down their Mod Souls. Be prepared for whatever happens.
Author's Note: I hope everyone enjoyed this new and improved version of chapter 4. After the original version got burnned, I worked my hardest to fix it. Now, I know the original version left a bad taste in all of your mouths, but please give this new version a chance. I can't garanty that you'll like it better than the original, you'll all have to decide for yourselves. This is not a perfect chapter, there are plenty of things you all can nitpick about and you'll do it no matter what I do. But I just wanted to say this: Thank you everyone for crunching up the original version. It helped me realize my mistake, and I assure you, it won't happen again. I hope you can find it in your hearts to forgive me for my mistake and continue to read this story. But if you cannot, I won't stop you from leaving if you choose. I'm not a perfect author, nobody is. Sometimes we write content that could be considered a masterpiece of art, sometimes we stumble and make some pretty big mistakes, and sometimes we make content that nobody cares about either way. But no matter what, we always try, and I urge all of my fellow writers out there, no matter what happens, never ever give up. I didn't
Chapter 5: Kon and Momone