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Jaune, Summer, Yang, and Raven have one hell of a morning, and Summer learns some new things about her old friend.
Chapter 23
Pain.
Scarlet eyes snapped open, bolling air filling her lungs with fire as Raven's back arched at the sensation of her insides being cored out.
"OOOOOOOOOOOOGH!"
Pleasure.
Her skin was hot, slick with sweat, and so sticky she could feel the sheets clinging to her. Lightning danced up her spine and her cunt wept around the master's cock as he thrust in and out of her.
"Cumminnnnnnnng!"
Raven gushed, folded legs instinctively struggling against the boy's weight as he bared down on her like some predator. Her insides spasmed and clenched while her heart thundered in her chest so hard she could practically hear the thumping in her ears.
Her insides were being dragged out. She could feel it - flesh clinging so tightly around his cock that it was pulled down as he retreated. Juices flowed from her pussy like a river, coming down between her asscheeks as a waterfall of girlcum as he remade her insides to fit his shape.
She had to get out. She was dying, she was dying.
The woman thrashed, body shaking so violently it started to hurt. Muscles she didn't know she had strained in a mix of cumming and wanting to escape the pleasurable pain. But she didn't have the strength. Her legs couldn't take the boy's weight, and her arms, her arms-
Red met silver as she saw the two beside her.
Summer's face was flushed, her hair a tangled mess that fell over one of her eyes. Despite it, Raven could see how the pregnant woman panted, drool seeping down from her lips like some ravenous animal with its tongue out. She even had the audacity to send her a smug grin.
"You⦠Ahhhhhh⦠You feel so good, Raven."
Both Yang and Summer were straddling her arms, holding her in place as Jaune fucked her insides into oblivion.
And⦠And⦠They were fucking themselves on her.
Raven could feel them, feel their pussies dragging against her forearms. They were leaking so much arousal the movements felt smooth, and it churned her stomach to know she was being used like this. And it hurt. Summer had her not inconsiderable weight pressing Raven's hand unto the mattress, her pregnant belly brushing Raven's upper arm every now and then - not that it meant much with how slippery both of them were from all the sweat.
"Ahβ¦ Ahβ¦ Ahβ¦ Ahβ¦ Ahβ¦"
Yang wasn't even paying attention to her. Her daughter had her back arched so far, Raven could only see her sizable tits jiggling with each thrust as she frantically thrust herself up and down Raven's forearm. Yang's hair pooled atop Raven's palm, and she could feel the disgustingly familiar stickiness rubbing off from it. Her hands were over her womb, fingers pressing down so hard it looked like she might poke through the skin.
The light from the windows reflected off her body, glistening white coated the tops of her breasts and ran down between them with each jiggle like an ungodly river. Cum. Copious amounts of it. Yang had been glazed in the stuff, and Raven could even see just the barest hints of it rubbing against her arm as the girl moved back and forth.
In horror, she tried to yank her arm back, to throw her daughter off of it if she could. But her arm lacked the strength, her body lacked the strength.
And then Jaune thrust back into her.
He went in, in, in. All the way from her entrance, through her cervix, and all the way to the back of her womb in one terrible, body-splitting stroke. It felt like she'd been impaled on a spear, struck so hard by the sudden violence of it her voice failed her and her mouth fell open in a silent scream, only a rasp of air that faded into the frantic moaning of the other two girls a sign she still had a voice at all.
Too big. Too big. Her breaths came in shallow gasps, and it felt like there just wasn't enough room for her to take in a full gulp of air. Raven's body was just filled with so much cock. It was like he had shoved it far enough to reach her throat, that - if he decided he wanted to - he could push so far inside her it'd erupt from in between her lips like some horrific comedy.
Despite this, Raven could feel her pelvis tighten, her insides clenching around his too-big cock in her too-small pussy. Her womb wrapped snugly about the head and seemed to roll around it as she felt his in-stroke slow to a stop.
She shivered. Electricity dancing up and down her skin as hot pain radiated from her sex and sent lightning bolts of pleasure through her spine. It was good. So very good. And it had no right to be.
Raven came as Jaune plundered her for his pleasure, his pace steady as he drew almost all of his monster cock out from her before plunging back in so far Raven could see where his length was by the way her stomach bulged with cockmeat.
It was unrelenting. Each backstroke threatened to turn her inside-out, the folds of her pussy clinging to his cock as he pulled out before he mashed them back into her with a thrust that sent her squirting so hard she could feel the pool of girlcum beneath her.
And it took what little strength she had left from her.
Already, Raven could feel her legs falling limp above her, only bouncing with the force of the master's thrusts as each slap of his mass against her thighs reverberating fire and lightning to the rest of her body. Even her arms - which were already too weak to even lift two sex-obsessed animals - seemed to become completely unresponsive to even her attempts to grab hold of the sheets.
Everything, every part of Raven, was narrowing down to her bruised and battered sex and the cock that was ripping her apart.
"Wh-Why!" She wailed, breath hoarse, weak. "Why won't I stop cumming!? HNGGGGGGGG!"
She came again, back arching off the bed she was now half-buried in as the mix of pain and pleasure addled her mind and sent her heart thundering so hard she felt it might burst.
But she stayed conscious. Her mind was just clear enough to comprehend that she was being used as a living fleshlight while the rest of the world had started to devolve into a mist of pained pleasure and the sounds of the other girls bouncing around the back of her skull.
Raven was being held to the waking world, and she was even too helpless to fall unconscious.
~TtT~
Summer was thankful.
And it wasn't just because she could already feel her orgasm creeping up, the tightness in her abdomen as it tightened into a ball while her juices flowed freely from her weeping pussy as her clit dragged against the firm flesh of Raven's arm.
It felt like she was unwrapping a present.
Raven had always done her best to exude strength. It hadn't always worked, but even when she'd been standing before Taiyang during their wedding, she'd had this air of pride that held back an undercurrent of unadulterated joy because she didn't think looking happy at her own wedding was becoming of a warrior.
She'd only gotten worse after leaving, after deciding that her old tribe had been worth more than the family she'd built. Her old teammate had turned all brambles and thorns, unwilling to really put up with either Summer or anyone else from their team, much less anyone outside of that. There wasn't much kindness to be had from her, though Summer could still spot that Raven had a soft spot for all of them.
But now? Here? Raven couldn't hide. She was bare in ways she'd never been before even after more than fifteen years of knowing each other.
Dressed in little more than her collar-choker and thigh-highs, she was more honest to Summer than she'd been the entirety of their friendship.
The other woman's eyes were wide and delirious, so fogged-up with pain and pleasure that Summer doubted her former friend actually saw anything right now. No⦠Summer was only too familiar with how far the master could drive them. All Raven must see right now were stars.
And she was afraid. Folded in half with her feet above her head and most of her weight resting on her upper back, Summer could feel the fear coming off of the other woman in waves even as she saw milky liquid squirting from her gaping pussy like a fountain from the gardens.
Because that's what Raven really was at her core, wasn't she? Afraid. From as far back as the day she and Qrow had lost their parents and been forced to fend for themselves in a tribe filled with bandits and thieves.
Raven Branwen was a scared little girl at her core.
That's what she'd built her whole persona on. She wanted strength so that she wouldn't be afraid. She abandoned Ozpin's War because she was afraid it would overtake her, overtake her family. A family she fled because of reasons Summer still couldn't comprehend, but she didn't pretend to know what rationale Raven had for it. It hadn't mattered once she'd swept in to take her place, and it didn't matter anymore now that they both belonged to the same family - a different family.
Still, there was a beauty in seeing Raven like this. While it might have been the same as yesterday, there was a⦠rawness to this that hadn't been there before. Raven had resisted, yes-
"Hnnnnnnnnn! It hurts it hurts it hurts! Please!"
But she'd never seen her former teammate beg before. She sounded so small, with a lilt to her tone that sounded positively desperate.
The sheer contrast of it from the Raven she'd been on a team with stoked the building fire at the base of Summer's belly, shaking legs putting all her weight on Raven's arm as her twitchy hips thrust even more frantically than before. Summer could feel the way her tits bounced from the motion, milk-laden mammaries dripping milk from her puffy, turgid nipples.
Raven, meanwhile, continued to babble:
"Itβ¦ Ah! Ah! Ah!β¦" Her voice cracked, shuddering breaths as Jaune gave her a few particularly hard slams, "It hurts to cum! It- cumming!"
Summer let loose a groan as she felt the arm she'd been frigging herself on flex, Raven's muscles tightening in an attempt to free herself as her body once again broke down into uncontrollable spasms and the master's thrusting cock was surrounded in a tide of rushing girlcum. Scarlet eyes rolled back into her skull and her words slurred so badly she stopped making sense.
It was just enough to press and drag against Summer's clit without being anywhere close enough to pushing her off, something Raven would have been able to do under normal circumstances, especially now that Summer wasn't in as good a shape as she'd been before coming to the Chateau.
Now, she was only strong enough to put up token resistance before she was left a convulsing mess. There was so much girlcum, and the master was so violent with each piston that it was splashing up Raven's body, pooling in her belly-button and even getting a few drops in between her leg-squished tits.
From the looks of it, Raven's orgasm wasn't a release. Her face was scrunched up in a pained wince, slick with sweat that was starting to soak into her thick mane of hair. All of her was caught in some full-body flush, and even her legs were shaking in that familiar way too-tired muscles did.
"I'm dying." She gasped out, voice so soft Summer wouldn't have heard it if she wasn't listening in. "I'm dying. Too much⦠Hnnnnnnnnnn⦠Too⦠muuuuuuuu-"
Her words trailed off, turned to gibberish as she came once more. This time to the master reaching down and pinching her engorged clit as he started upping the pace of his fucking. Raven's eyes were gone now, completely white as her tongue lolled out and girlcum gushed out of her pussy in such volume that it shot up as a fountain before landing on her face in an arc, not that she seemed to respond to it.
Even her legs had gone limp, hanging from her body without even twitching despite her orgasm continuing to shatter her soul. Summer could see her pelvis clenching around Jaune's cock, how his fuckstick throbbed with each pump of molten-hot semen directly into her former friend's womb.
Idly, Summer's hand cupped her growing baby bump from below, thumb brushing against the stretched skin and sending a very pleasant thrum into her tightening core.
"I⦠Hmmmmmmm⦠can't wait till we're both stuffed with a baby, Raven."
Her other hand reached up to relieve some of the pressure from her too-full breasts, squeezing and yanking on a puffy nipple and sending a thin stream of mother's milk to join the splash of fluids landing on Raven's face and mixing with the puddle that was doubtlessly forming around the other woman's hair.
"You'll have the loveliest milkers, Ravenβ¦ Oh yessssssβ¦" He might make her even bigger than Yang who might have been just the least bit bigger than Summer was now, though she was sure that she'd grow another cup size or two as the baby grew in her womb.
"I can't wait to suck on them, to drink on them." They could drink from each other. Summer could even see them both breastfeeding the master at the same time, a nipple each from one of their tits stuffed into his mouth as he sucked on them for breakfast while they worked together to coax his first shot of the day with their hands.
Teamwork, just like back at Beacon.
She could even imagine chaining their tits together, or maybe chaining her tits to Yang's while the master played with them.
"Oh yessssssssβ¦" Her breaths were coming in half-hissed moans now, hands falling down to her thighs as Summer leaned forward and ground her clit against Raven's juice-slick skin. Whenever the arm would sink too far into the mattress, she'd just ride it down, and down, and down.
The needles. She brought the needles.
"Raveeeeeeeeeeeen!"
Summer came, her friend's name squealed from her lips while she thought of what was to follow once the master was done with her.
~TtT~
His onahole had fallen unconscious.
Under normal circumstances, Jaune would normally not let that stop him. He'd treated Summer roughly before, and certainly been rougher with Yang, too. There should have been no reason to treat Raven any differently when there was even less reason for him to care about her.
No, what made him stop was the fact that her pussy was starting to loosen its grip.
Maybe it was the fact that she was functionally without aura and actually much less durable than her sister-slaves, or maybe it was just because there hadn't been enough time for Jaune's changes to really take root in the way he'd slow-rolled them with Summer or let Yang stay at the Chateau for a few weeks before starting to fuck her.
Instead he'd gone hard and heavy on the former bandit, blasting her with lightning the first day, then fucking her into oblivion now.
Cock still hard - almost painfully so now, Jaune dragged himself out of Raven's confines, ultramarine eyes looking closely at the way her pink flesh held unto his length as he exited. It was a tantalizing sight, seeing her folds cling to as he left her. How her pussy had become so attached to him after just a day or two of being used.
An entirely different appeal from Yang's auto-masturbator of a pussy, or Summer's juice-slick honeypot, Raven was air-tight. Slow to penetrate, and even slower to exit, all while every fold and pleat stuck to him like a second skin.
He couldn't wait to play with it some more, to see what changes he could make to her to make full use of it.
Speaking of those changesβ¦
Jaune sent a quick and hard slap to the back of Raven's thighs. She'd stayed folded up even after he'd pulled himself out of her. It left her pussy and ass the highest points of her body and left her looking like just the most tempting sight.
Cherry-red skin rippled with the force of his blow. Even her tits jiggled.
But her pussy? Oh her limp pussy suddenly clenched shut, juices flowing with sudden and renewed vigor for a moment, her arousal flowing down her back and her front before she fell limp once more.
Good.
Raven had some of the juiciest thighs he'd seen. He'd make a pussy out of them yet.
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