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Raven begins to feel the changes that Jaune has been making to her body and reflects on what's happened to her - sort of. Just before they make their way to Vale for some business.


Chapter 24

"Hngggggggggggg!~"

Raven keened, body shaking as the hot mix of pain and pleasure sent electricity through her nipples and up her spine.

She squirmed, shivered. Red eyes rolled back into her sockets as she hunched forward. The edge of the bed was pressed against her forehead as the world darkened. Everything falling away until all that was left were the sensations.

Fire and lightning shot from Raven's tits as her other arm was squeezed in between her slick thighs and was pressed against her turgid clit. They felt so large, her senses completely dominated by the pain and tha yanking, the way her skin pressed at her button and dragged against the wrist while her thighs felt like they were being fucked as squirmed herself around her arm.

But she couldn't stop pulling. Her fingers twitched, her hand quavered, but still she drew the chain taut. Her nipples were being yanked even through the thin cloth of her top, flesh and fabric stretched by the piercings that went through both.

The master had her pierced after she'd been knocked out, stuck her nipples and clit with needles that had to have been magical. Raven refused to believe that they were anything but.

After all, why else would it feel so damn good for it to hurt so damn much?

Raven couldn't even remember it happening. She'd woken up earlier today only to find that she'd had holes made in her body, and her nipples had been linked together with golden chains. Summer had been leaning over her, and - before Raven could get a word in edgewise - took the bonds connecting both her nipples and pulled.

She squealed like a stuck pig at the memory of what happened, a rush of juices coating the inside of her thighs, her wrist, and her fingers as she came from the remembered pain. Raven felt her body spasm uncontrollably as it crashed down on her just like it had earlier. Her legs jerked closed as her abdomen cramped from the contractions, pistoning up and down her arm like her enclosed thighs were fucking herself.

Meanwhile, the hand pulling on the chain shook so violently that it only served to pull harder, her tits feeling like they had gone pointed from the strength of it. Raven idly wondered if the piercings would rip, ruining her breasts completely.

Instead, she came again. Her spine went ramrod straight and her arms and legs failed her as she fell forward. Only the edge of the master's bed spared her the indignity of falling face-first on the puddle of girlcum on the floor, even as she could feel herself continue to shoot her discharge like a broken tap.

She was boneless and in pain, not that it seemed to detract from her body enjoying the experience. The exquisite stinging and burning from her nipples fed into the fluttering at the base of her belly and the rhythmic clenching of her core while she lay slumped. And it just kept going and going even as Raven's lightning-struck mind slowly began to clear.

Eyes open but unseeing, Raven realized something: she'd called the boy her master.

It had been in the heat of the moment, and it had been in her head, yes, but she'd still done it. And an overwhelming feeling of discomfort seemed to get under her skin, silver and lavender eyes looking down on her even though Raven knew that she was the only person in the master's- Jaune's room.

Surely it was magic. Raven couldn't see herself ever, ever calling the boy her master under any other circumstance.

But did it matter if it was? Chains jangled as she panted, and she could still feel the base of her belly clenching in the lingering shocks of her orgasm. Raven couldn't even muster the strength to right herself right now as she lay in a puddle of her own shame and felt… good.

She was exhausted, her body aching, but it was a familiar and pleasant ache that she'd never felt to this degree before. Not even her most passionate nights with Taiyang had left her this wrung-out, and she felt herself grow warm in a full-body flush at the thought.

And still she was raring to go, her sore pussy already dripping in anticipation as she wondered what the master would put her through next.

Raven grit her teeth as she'd done it again.

Doing her best to ignore her climbing arousal, she tried to get her legs back under her. She'd been tasked with getting the master's things packed for a trip they were going on tomorrow while Summer and Yang made other preparations, and she'd be damned if she gave her once-teammate an excuse for doing even more to Raven.

"Oooooh…"

But her legs didn't do as she'd willed them, protesting at the sudden and forced action before giving way and returning Raven to the floor. The jolts that ran up her spine from them sent her shuddering and her trembling arms squeezing down on her thighs to try and get a grip of herself.

That was a mistake.

Raven saw stars as her thighs - her hot, jiggly thighs - just seemed to send her arousal skyrocketing, a spurt of juices discharged from her nether lips and coat her in a fresh layer of slick.

Without thinking, without considering what would happen next, Raven put her hands in between…

In seconds, she had her legs pressed tightly together as she shoved her hands in and out of the space between like she was fucking them. Her core emitting a pleasant, almost comforting warmth that spread all the way to the tips of her fingers and her half-numb toes.

"Ah… Ah… Ah…"

Magic or no, the ma-boy had more control over her body than she did right now, and it galled her to think that, but she couldn't do much about it.

"Cu-Cum-…" Scarlet eyes clenched tight as her nethers fluttered, "Cumming! Ah! Again!"

Drool seeped from the edge of her lips - her upper lips - as her lower lips gushed once more. Her hips shuddered, jerkily thrusting against the hands she had between them. Raven's fingers turning clammy and wet as they were covered in a fresh layer of girlcum.

Already she could feel herself climbing towards another orgasm even as her muscles cramped in the still going throes of the current one.

But still she couldn't stop, not as her head grew light, not as her body ached in protest, and not as she came again.

"Cumming!" Ragged breaths filled the otherwise empty room, Raven a sodden, twitching mess half-slumped against her master's bed, "I… c-can't stop cumming!"

~TtT~

Condom play wasn't something Jaune did very frequently.

After all, he went through great pains to make sure his girls only ever got pregnant when he wanted them to. Why shouldn't he raw-dog Summer or Yang or Raven after that? Yang wasn't pregnant and he'd been cumming in her womb just about every day since he'd taken her the first time.

Hells, the only reason why Summer was carrying his daughter was that he wanted her to.

Soft and fleshy walls squeezing down on him, folds and pleats clinging to his shaft while his cockhead was shoved all the way up into their wombs, seeping out and coating his balls in soppy heat. Jaune loved that, loved it even more when they'd squirm and cling and grip at him - outside and in.

It was so sexy, especially when paired with their eyes rolling back into their heads, or their bodies shattering from overstimulation.

He'd get a little less of that with the condom on. It muted some of the sensations. Sure, their reactions were usually still the same, though even then he'd been able to spot some differences in how much Summer felt when he'd last tried wearing them in his first few times with her.

And that had been more than a year ago. He hadn't needed to use a condom with his girls since.

Still, when he was being treated like this, Jaune had to say that he found it hard to argue against it.

"Oh that is good."

He groaned, leaned into Summer's warmth as she planted featherlight kisses on his shoulder, neck, and collar. Each touch of her plush lips to his bare skin sent jolts up his spine. Only the warmth of his company kept him from twitching at each kiss she gave him, though how her curves - her pregnant belly especially - did not take from his pleasure at all.

And this was while Yang was in between his legs doing the same for his thighs.

They were on their way to the city of Vale. Partially because he had some business to take care of, and mostly because Summer needed to take care of some business of a more personal nature. But since that business of hers was both entirely at his behest and for his benefit, he decided to make a little vacation of it.

Besides, it was a great time for him to take Raven out of the house for the first time.

Sure, the woman had only been with them for a few days at this point, but it wasn't ever too soon to establish how little chance she had at escaping even if they were in a public place. Though Jaune couldn't say he'd have minded too much to see her try if only to see the look on her face when she inevitably failed.

Closing his eyes as he felt Yang's fingers clasp his nutsack in a warm embrace, he decided that he was going to do that.

He even decided that they could afford to take their time. The usual suite of rooms he usually stayed at in Vale had been booked for the next week-and-a-half. It'd give Summer time to settle things, and him some time to actually go around the city a little more.

So he'd decided that instead of taking their usual private Bullhead straight to the city, they were opting to drive. An hours-long ordeal that would have normally been his option if he wanted to enjoy the barren wilds between the Chateau's estate and the city. Instead, they'd taken the trailer and he got to spend the trip having extended playtime with his girls.

Which is how he'd found himself now, half-sitting, half-hanging off the couch that ran along the side of the trailer. Jaune's legs were splayed out, his button-down shirt spread open and his pants rolled down far enough that it was pooled around only one of his legs. He must have been quite the sight.

Teasing was the name of the game. A rare thing as far as he was concerned with how much immediate gratification he usually got.

And it reminded him of the condom, a thin, almost see-through thing that clung to his cock tightly enough that he could still feel the bulging veins of his length pulsing in the rubber membrane.

But with the way his member was so stiff he could probably run each of his girls through with it, he couldn't say that it wasn't effective.

Again, it twitched as Yang leaned in and planted several kisses of her own on his ballsack. Each touch lingered just enough that Jaune could feel her sucking on the sweltering skin before she pulled back with a barely perceptible pop.

His length throbbed each time she did it, and he failed to suppress a gasp as Yang came in to slather him with her spit with her tongue.

The same diligent tongue that had worshiped his cock earlier, working tirelessly to get him to hardness while Summer had pressed her milky tits against his arm and whispered temptation into his ear. Experienced hands had undressed him, caressed the skin beneath his clothing while Yang's lavender eyes had looked up at him in reverence as she fished out his cock with her mouth and prayed to him with fellatio.

And when it was time for the condom to go on, Yang had fished it out of somewhere that he hadn't noticed, pressed the flat thing to her lips and showed her master how much her cocksucking practice had improved her technique.

Jaune had almost laughed when he found out that it hadn't been by much, as she'd started choking on his length halfway down the shaft. Though with the way her upper fuckpipe had spasmed around him, squeezing and stroking him as she gagged, only served to improve his experience.

Choking had filled the trailer, and Jaune had reached forward with his one free hand and held her down. Her lips pressed against his base as his length bent down her throat. Lavender eyes rolled back into their sockets as her body quivered - inside and out. She clenched, spasmed, swallowed, and covered his crotch and inner thighs with spit and slime.

To make things even better, Summer had placed her head on his shoulder while he abused her eldest daughter. One of her hands had been rubbing at his bare thigh, covering her palm in Yang's own spit and wiping it all over her daughter's cheek.

Nuzzling against him, she giggled, "She's not gotten any better at taking you down her throat, huh?"

As if to prove her point, a spurt of spit spattered all over Jaune's crotch once more while the sound of her daughter's gagging filled the trailer. Despite the very clear discomfort, though, Jaune could see how much Yang enjoyed it. She shuddered, and he could still feel her wetness splashing against his bare legs as her sopping pussy continued to drip.

"But," Summer shrugged, "I suppose that's what you wanted out of her, wasn't it, master?"

He'd hummed, agreeing, "There's… something fun about… Ahhh… A-about feeling her throat strangle itself around my cock while she cums from doing so."

Jaune returned Summer's affection, planting a kiss on her temple as he leaned back into her, "Besides, it makes it very different from your…" He groaned as his hips jolted as a particularly strong squeeze from Yang before he felt her throat try to drag him down in an unconscious swallow that left him positively turgid. "Ooohhh… Your significantly more well-trained mouth."

Without hesitating, Summer had taken one of his hands and shoved it into her mouth. All five of his fingers had gone down smoothly until he had his hand in her up to his third knuckles where the sheer size of his hand prevented him from pushing more in.

She licked, she slathered, she swallowed. The older woman reminded him of how thoroughly he'd trained that mouth and throat of hers to take his cock, silver eyes glistening in delight. Summer had leaned on him further, pressing her heavy and bare tits as well as her growing baby-bulge.

And he throbbed at the contrast, and Summer's implied offer to take her daughter's place.

But he'd wanted to take his time, and they'd had things they wanted to do - especially with the rubber that had been in between his cock and the sultry and silken contractions of Yang's unconditioned throat.

So he'd pulled out. Pulled his hand back from Summer's mouth and let Yang catch her breath before both girls went back to pleasuring him in other ways. They caressed him, kissed him, whispered promises of things they could do for him, do to each other, to him, that would bring him enjoyment.

Until it had almost become painful, with how stiff his member had become from the indirect stimulation. Yang's hot breaths to contrast the cold air, her hands, her tongue, or her mouth almost always covering his balls, warming the sperm that was churned inside to readiness with her squeezes and licks.

That was when Yang slathered his rubber-clad cock and started to stroke it with her free hand, Summer joining in to cover the upper half and head of his cock that she gave special care to while Jaune enjoyed the view.

Because across them was Raven, eyes wide and terrified in a naked fear that she usually did her best to hide. She was naked this time, body presented to him with her legs spread while she was on her knees and her arms held behind her back to thrust out her growing tits, which hung loose and heavy with a slight sag from the increased weight.

Jaune doubted Raven had even started to notice that her breasts were growing heavier every day.

Even better, she wasn't being tied down by anything. Only the enforced obedience he'd forced unto her kept her body holding an uncomfortable position for the past hour or so while she was forced to watch what was going on in front of her.

And from the way her spread pussy was dripping unto the floor and her pale skin was rosy in a full-body blush, the former bandit was liking it.

Forced to? Certainly. Not that Jaune cared if he was forcing Raven to be aroused at the sight of him making use of Raven's blood-daughter or being serviced by Yang in turn.

He had to admit, he'd been amused to walk back into his room the night before to find an insensate Raven still jerking her thighs off against one of his bedposts. With his bag only partially packed and his fresh sheets already ruined, the woman was due a punishment.

And Summer, always happy to torment her once-teammate, had been more than happy to come up with this idea. Gleefully, she'd also been the one to tell Raven what was in store for her just before the latter had been ordered into the position she'd been in now.

Jaune once again felt himself throb at the memory, and he pressed his face against Summer's hair as Yang leaned in and once more took his balls into her mouth while Summer tended to his length with long and firm strokes.

Summer gave him a pleased hum as he pulled her closer towards him, something he felt more than heard from her close-pressed chest.

"Yes, master Jaune?"

Her nipples were as stiff enough he could feel it press into his skin, even the little movement of clinging to her tiger dragged the hard nubs enough that Summer moaned against the top of his head, her full curves shuddering against him.

But her movements barely faltered, only the briefest of pauses before she cupped his mushroom head with a twirl before going down to his base in one long and practiced stroke. And she kept going as he began to play with her milk-laden breasts, while he felt the warmth at the base of his belly begin to build and his balls tighten.

His favorite seemed to notice, however. Either from the way his cock throbbed or something else he couldn't see, not with his eyes closed and his senses focusing on the muted sensation of practiced hands on his cock and reverent lips and tongue practically begging his balls for cum.

"Excited?" Summer's breath was hot, scorching against his scalp as he felt her body do its own unconscious thrust, likely imagining the same thing he was. "Ahhh… I am, too." Returning his kiss on her temple with one of her own on his, she let out a shuddering sigh, one that came with a jet of milk covering his palms as he continued playing with them.

"Hnggggg…" And she squirmed under his grip as he pulled at her nipple rings. "Cu-cum for us, master." She whined, "Cum for us and fill out that condom. Fill it so that we can make Raven eat it. Fill out a bowl and make her bend down like the animal she is!"

It was the whimper, Raven's whimper as Summer coaxed his cock to completion while Yang churned his balls with spit that did him in. As he imagined the sight of Raven eating his cum out of a bowl like a dog, perhaps even giving her seconds.

With a cry of victory Jaune ejaculated, a torrent of his swimmers ballooning the rubber that they'd decided would catch his load.


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