Ok so I realized that I didn't give a description of Menma so just think of a young kushina

with shoulder length hair and brown eyes. She wears shorts and fish net pants under them, and a black shirt under a jacket. That's the description for now. (Also I can't write fight scenes just yet I will try to add fight secenes in future chapters just not In this chapter or the next few chapters). Also I do not own Naruto and I only own MY OC named Menma

Chapter two

Both Menma and Orochimaru were in a deadlock. Orochimaru had shed his disguise and revealed his true self.

Menma spring up and, using her Bo staff, smashed it on top of Orochimaru's head. Instead of blood, she saw mud.

"Tsk," Menma muttered, looking around for the true Orochimaru. "Where are you? Get out here and fight me!"

"Kukuku, always so eager to fight," came the response from the dark.

Menma's eyes only had a moment to register the threat before a long snake wrapped around her.

"Wh-!" she exclaimed as Orochimaru held her tightly in his grip.

"Hehe, now we can have a normal conversation without you trying to fight me," Orochimaru said, smirk etched on his lips.

"Let me go, you asshole!" Menma shouted angrily.

Orochimaru just continued to smirk, then used one hand to cover her mouth, and used his other hand to hold her cheek. "Just clam down," he said, shaking his head.

"Fucking let me out!" Menma shouted, the snake tightening its grip around her. She tried to move or mumble out a sound, but Orochimaru pressed his hand tighter against her mouth, silencing her.

"I'll let you speak if you promise not to try to fight or escape."

Menma glared at Orochimaru, trying to move or mumble out a sound, but the snake continued to bind her.

"Tsk tsk tsk, you were always so stubborn," he said, shaking his head. Menma continued to glare at him with fury in her eyes. Then he takes his hand off of her mouth.

Menma breathed "You only used me for your weird ass experiments," Menma gritted through her teeth.

Orochimaru cupped both her cheeks with his hands. "Hehe, even though that is true, I also did care for you."

"No, you didn't!" Menma shouted back angrily, her patience nearly nonexistent.

"Oh,?" Orochimaru stood, gesturing to the Bo staff a couple of feet away from them. "Who made sure you had something to eat, who gave you attention, who gave you that Bo staff?"

He smirked, the snake that had previously been binding Menma now releasing its grip.

"I-I...," Menma fell to the ground at a loss for words, overwhelmed by the sudden outpouring of memories from her childhood with Orochimaru as a father figure. Menma's childhood memories rushed back to her, like a tidal wave.

"No," she finally managed to say, tears streaming down her face. She couldn't give in to Orochimaru's emotional manipulation.

"See?" Orochimaru smirked wider, the pat on her head growing gentler. "Now you realize how much I did for you. So just come back with me, and I can give u the life u want and

deserve."

Menma's resolve steeled once more, and she stood up, getting into a fighting position. "I'm never going back with you!"

Orochimaru appeared behind her and, before Menma could even react, he knocked her out cold.

Ok so thx to aguylittle for the first like and favorite and follow. I'm very happy to see that at least one person likes this story. Also I don't really have an ending and if someone else wants to pick this story up and write it how they want u can. Just tag me some where. But updates and new chapters are most likely not going to be consistent. And plz review if u like the story. (I also hope that this chapter is better than the first one).