Naruto: The Breaking of a Raven
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Naruto and never will, sadly :')
Kyuubi/Summons speech
Kyuubi/Summons thinking
"Speech"
"Thoughts"
Jutsus
Author-san here, this piece is rated T for blood and possible sucky battles. I might throw gently cusses, according to my "Friend", words like damn, stupid and idiot, but it will be light. The focus of characters will shift based on who I mentioned in the description. Tons of characters will be OOC's, there will also be a few OC but no pairings. I'm so happy to post this, its my first piece, I'm hoping that this piece will be liked and not very criticized, as a new author I can't wait to join the community. Sadly, I don't have a beta reader. That's enough from me, happy reading, Author-san out!
Being a genetic experiment of Orochimaru wasn't the greatest, especially when the genetics used was of Minato Namikaze and Fugaku Uchiha. Itachi Uchiha-Namikaze was left with two half siblings, Naruto and Sasuke, as well as a full-blood sister, Menma. He needs to find peace inside and peace in his broken family, it doesn't help that a relative, Kabuto, seeks out their deaths.
PROLOGUE
His day started normally, with him waking up in a dark room. Itachi lay on a bed, sweating and panting, as a result of his nightmare. He sat up and started some breathing exercises before getting up and going to the bathroom.
Itachi looked in the mirror, reminding him that he was fairly tall with a fair complexion, under his eyes were long pronounced tear-troughs, and his face was framed with center-parted bangs that extended halfway down his neck, he was wearing casual clothes consisting of a black shirt with the Uchiha clan symbol on the back, bandages around his ankles, and he was shoeless at the moment. His gaze fell upon his eyes, which were mismatched -or heterochromic as the nurse said- blue and black. He sighed picking up the contact lens and placing it over his blue eyes, he looked back up into the mirror, noticing his hair dye had faded showing the blonde tips he had in his hair. Itachi grimaced as he gently touched his hair.
He sighed, knowing damn well Fugaku would chastise him for his hair, he needed to stop thinking about it, he grabbed the black hair dye and began the process of dyeing his hair.
Sasuke sat at the table wanting for his nii-san, he was fidgeting with his hands, clearly nervous. "Sasuke, you don't need to keep shifting every second, Itachi can handle himself." Mikoto gently chastised, Sasuke looked up and nodded knowing that Itachi could fend for himself "I'm a little worried because I heard thrashing and slight muttering coming for his room last night." Sasuke replied he couldn't keep that away from his mother. Beside him Fugaku tensed, using a Shushin, and he disappeared.
Sasuke was rather confused, his father would never usually act like this. Looking towards his mother for answers, but he only got an angry Mikoto, she turned back to cooking cursing under her breath. Now that scared him, his mother was normally calm, whatever happened to Itachi worried him.
Using academy-level stealth he went to try and find out what was wrong with Itachi.
Naruto ran through the street, trying to outrun the crowd that chased him. He didn't know why they were chasing him, he didn't know why they called him the Kyuubi, he came out to get some bread because the bread at home was stale. His teary blue eyes made several villagers sneer and laugh at him, and he cried harder. He had lengthy cuts on his arms, a cut that ran down his thigh close to his knee, and a jagged cut that ran from the top of his ear down to his lip.
Naruto ran on end for a while before noticing who was in his line of sight. The guy was of average height and build. He has brown hair that he keeps in a ponytail, dark eyes, and a scar that runs across the bridge of his nose. He wears the standard Konoha shinobi outfit complete with a forehead protector, sandals, and a flak jacket. His sleeves are also rolled up about ΒΌ way. "Iruka-sensei!" Naruto thought, hoping Iruka would save him. Iruka turned around hearing footsteps, he was wide-eyed at what he saw, Naruto, the little six-year-old spiky blond-haired blue-eyed boy with three whisker markings on his cheeks, bleeding and crying, with a nasty cut that was sure to scar.
Iruka quickly placed himself in between the crowd and the six-year-old. He drew his kunai, slightly nervous, It was a rather large crowd. "Move Iruka! Let us kill the boy!" One of the villagers shouted, "Are you being controlled by the demon?" Asked another. Naruto didn't want his sensei to get hurt, he didn't know what to do!
"My mind can't be controlled, you know this" Iruka started making Naruto look up, "Besides the laws set up by the Hokage are clear, 'Anyone who is to injure or even attempt to assassinate Naruto Uzumaki is to face immediate punishment, most likely death penalty'" Iruka stated, grinning inwardly "So, you want to risk you're life and attempt to kill Naruto?" Iruka asked mocking them, he could sense three Anbu on their way, he just needed to stall them for long enough. "It doesn't matter, the counsel will never know." was what the third villager replied.
"Report," Danzo stated. "They tried to kill the Kyuubi container once again" A female voice rang through the area, she looked up, she had short spiky black hair(Similar to Naruto just far more feminine and with long bangs) with a mix of blond and red tips, her eyes were (left)black and (right)blue with the sclera of the right eye black, her frame was similar to that of Minato's, she was wearing the anbu outfit only a mask sat on her face tilted to the side, it was a fox mask with red and orange paint markings. Danzo sighed annoyed with how the villagers were, "Nonetheless, well done, Menma."
Menma bowed "Do you wish for me to interfere?" She asked, looking toward the old war hawk. "For now get Kakashi, Shisui, and Itachi, then head to the area and seal the villagers into a sealing scroll." Menma bowed again before using Shushin to get to them faster. "Naru-san is too young for all this hate." Menma thought as she thought about her younger half-sibling.
"I'll make them all pay!" Menma thought furiously, but she knew damn well she would need cold-hearted proof before she could rain hell on the village. Menma Namikaze-Uchiha would make the whole world pay.
Elsewhere, an onyx-eyed male with ash-grey hair kept up in a ponytail was walking, he was wearing a dark purple shirt with a high collar, a white under-shirt, and dark purple pants with a white cloth waistband and dark purple fingerless gloves with armored plates on the back of his hand, soon he raised his head, his circular wire-framed glasses clear as day, his dark eyes were hypnotizing, he continued walked until he ran into someone, this person had very pale skin, golden eyes with slitted pupils, purple markings around his eyes and fang-like teeth, He also has pronounced cheekbones and straight waist-length black hair with some locks covering and framing his face or to his shoulder. The ash-grey haired knew who he had run into, Orochimaru, The Snake Sannin, he extended his hand, "Kabuto Yakushi" Kabuto said.
Orochimaru smiled, that was the first time someone willingly threw themself before his feet knowing all he had done. "I wish to go with you! I want to get stronger and be able to prove my worth to you!" eleven-year-old Kabuto stated. Orochimaru smirked inwardly, this kid was going to be very useful, "Very well, I'll give you a week to figure out if you want to come with me." He responded before Shushining away.
Kabuto smiled, knowing he was going, was going to get the deaths of a few certain people.
In a place of clouds, sat a blonde-haired male with sad blue eyes, it was the Yondaime Hokage or Minato Namikaze. He was watching over Konohagakure or Konoha, deeply saddened. He was wearing a normal Konoha uniform with two bands on both His sleeves, a green vest, a blue forehead protector, and blue sandals, over this was a shirt-sleeved long white haori decorated by red flame-like motifs on the edges, with the kanji for Fourth Hokage, closed in the front by a thin orange rope. He also had white feathery wings on his back, symbolizing he was dead.
He was saddened by how the villagers treated his son, Naruto. He had chosen Naruto to protect the village but who could blame Naruto if he wanted to leave to another village. A red-haired female came walking up to Minato, her eyes just as sad "Minato, maybe we shouldn't have left Naruto in the village." She said, leaving Minato to sigh, "I wish I didn't Kushina, but Jiraiya won't take him with him, and the Sandaime won't move him."
Kushina sighed and then turned toward Minato, he had his back to her, he was somewhat in Kyuubi form, twitching yellow fox ears and livid nine-tails, when he turned to Kushina, she saw his eyes had slits, as well as claws and fangs, "I just wished the villagers saw Naruto as a hero not as the Kyuubi. I should have never sealed the Kyuubi into him..." Minato started as he trailed off.
"Now, you didn't have a choice, no one was nearby and it was on short notice." Minato turned and saw a tall man with tanned skin and dark eyes, he had waist-length black hair typically styled in the centre-parted fringe that framed his face. He wore the standard Shinobi dress with red armor worn a simple black suit with sandals. The armor was constructed from numerous metal plates, formed into protective guards along his body; each collar of his shoulder guards bore the Senju logo, as well as the usual feathery white wings, representing he was dead. It was the Shodaime Hokage or Hashirama Senju.
"I just wish the attacker didn't use my name, that was pretty damning to my pride." Minato peeked behind Hashirama to be met with another male, he was fairly tale while his hair grew to waist-length with shoulder-length bands framing the sides of his face covering most of his right eye, although still young, more prominent creases developed under each of his eyes. he wore crimson armor with numerous metal plates, forming protective guards along his chest, waist, shoulders and thighs, with a metal belt, as well as a brown leather sash to hold weapons, along with a pair of belt smashed to carry two swords. It was the "Ghost of the Uchiha" of Madara Uchiha.
Kushina started to get angry her hair rising, forming livid nine-tails "A boy is being abused and you're talking about your pride." Kushina said as a shadow crossed her face, Madara remained impassive while Minato and Hashirama sweat dropped. "You damn Uchihas are all the same." They turned to see a fair-skinned man with sliver, shaggy hair and dark-colored eyes(red). He had three red markings on his face, one under each eye and one on his chin. He was wearing blue armor with a distinctive white fur collar over a simple black suit, his armor was constructed from numerous metal plates, formed into multiple protective guards along his body, beneath his shoulder armor her wore two extra shoulder guards on each arm, accompanied by sandals and happuri on his forehead with an engraved Senju logo.
"Oh shut up Tobirama! It's the same with all of you Senju." A voice came from behind and revealed a fair-skinned male with spiky, black hair that had a blue tint to it and was tied in a ponytail. His bangs parted down the centre of his face to frame both sides of it. He wore the standard Uchiha outfit which consisted of a high-collared, blue shirt with the Uchiha crest on his upper back and blue pants which were wrapped up in bandages at the ends. On his waist, he had a bandage belt that held a sack which presumably held ninja tools. Madara brightened slightly, it was Izuna, his younger brother.
Minato sighed and then turned back to look over Naruto, he started to smile brightly seeing Iruka protect him, and soon Itachi, Shusui, Kakashi, and Menma showed up. They began to either knock out or kill the crowd and then use sealing scrolls to seal likely to take to the Sandiame. As Minato turned back to face them Madara was gone with dashes flashing in the shape of his figure, while Tobirama and Izuna were bickering while Kushina was throwing threats and Hashirama was looking around for Madara. Soon Minato felt a hand gently touch his sharp fox ears before petting him, Minato spared a side glance to see Madara petting him, seems Madara had a slight soft spot for him.
When Minato got up to break up the fight, Madara practically deflated like a balloon, hanging his head as he acted like Hashirama, getting depressed easily. Madara glanced over his shoulder to see the Uzumaki boy, asleep and being carried by Itachi. Hashirama came over and took a look. Izuna looking over the edge, frowning and thinking, looked up "Weren't Itachi and Menma Orochimaru's Genetic experiment? Using Minato and Fugaku's genes?" All was Silent.
Hello, my lovely Meh Readers!
As a prologue, I wanted to get a few things out of the way and show you a few things before y'all start to get at me say "Thats not how they look or act" As I stated in the beginning almost all the characters are OOC's. So, hopefully that explains everything. I also wanted to get Character descriptions out of the way. Desipt being a Naruto Veteran I had to do some resereach to get a few things straight. I would also like to give credit to Narutopedia for giving character appearances. Here's the link: wiki/Narutopedia. See ya! Also 2,463 words... wow.
Author-san out!
Ja ne!
