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Fleur sat cross-legged in the warmth of her room, a cozy space tucked close to the center of the magnificent Beauxbatons carriage. The delicate carvings on the wooden walls shimmered faintly, reflecting the soft glow of the fire crackling in the ornate hearth. She gazed into the flickering flames, her usually poised demeanor softened as she lost herself in thought. Her fingers idly traced the embroidery on the hem of her dressing gown, but her mind was far away.
The fire suddenly flared brighter, signaling an incoming Floo call. With a soft sigh, Fleur reached forward and dropped a pinch of shimmering powder into the flames. The green fire roared to life, and moments later, the face of her cousin Rosaline appeared, her sharp features and mischievous smile unmistakable even through the magical haze.
"Sorry … I 'ad to grab something. So, what are you planning to do?" Rosaline asked, her tone light but teasing, her dark eyes sparkling with curiosity.
Fleur blinked, momentarily startled by the directness of the question. She leaned back, pulling her knees to her chest as she contemplated her response. "I ... I do not know," she admitted at last, her voice quieter than usual, tinged with a rare vulnerability. "I 'ave never been in a situation like zis before."
Rosaline's laughter echoed warmly through the flames. "Ah, Fleur, come now. You know what I—or some other Veela—would do in your place." She raised a perfectly arched eyebrow, her implication clear.
Fleur let out a small laugh despite herself, shaking her head. "Oui, I know. But you also know why zat would not work. And even if it could ..." She hesitated, her expression growing serious. "I would never do zat. It would make everything—everything—a lie."
Rosaline's amused expression softened into something more tender. "You truly feel that way, don't you?" she said after a moment, tilting her head. "I've never seen you like this before."
Fleur didn't answer immediately. The only sound was the crackling of the fire as she stared into it, her thoughts swirling. After a few moments of silence, Rosaline broke the tension with a knowing smile.
"What about the other one?" she asked slyly, her voice laced with mischief.
Fleur's head snapped up, her cheeks flushing a delicate pink. "I 'ave no idea what you are talking about," she said quickly, the words rushing out too fast to sound convincing.
"Oh, really?" Rosaline's grin widened. "Because it certainly seems as though you've been talking nonstop about her for hours." Her tone was playful, but the twinkle in her eye showed she wasn't entirely joking.
Fleur coughed, a faint hint of panic in her eyes as she tried to compose herself. "You must 'ave misunderstood," she said briskly, brushing an imaginary strand of hair from her face and sitting up straighter.
Rosaline laughed, her voice melodic and utterly unrepentant. "Of course, my apologies, Fleur," she said, though her smirk suggested she didn't believe a word of it.
Fleur huffed, her flustered state only adding to Rosaline's amusement. She redirected the conversation with the grace she was known for, though her cheeks remained faintly pink. "Zis is not ze point of zis call," she said firmly, though the corner of her lips quirked upwards in a reluctant smile.
Rosaline settled back slightly, her teasing abating for the moment. She regarded her cousin with a fond expression, her playful demeanor replaced by genuine curiosity. "Alright, Fleur. If not that, then what is the point of this call?"
Fleur hesitated for a moment, then leaned closer to the fire. "I do not know what to do," she admitted softly, her voice barely above a whisper. "I feel ... lost."
Rosaline nodded slowly, her teasing demeanor replaced by thoughtful seriousness. "Then let me ask you this," she said gently. "What do you want? Truly, in your heart?"
Fleur stared into the flames, her expression unreadable. The question lingered in the air, unanswered, as the firelight danced across her face.
Rosaline's face lingered in the green flames, her sharp eyes studying Fleur with an expression that was both curious and gently teasing. She leaned her chin on her hand, her features illuminated by the flickering firelight.
"Well," Rosaline began, her voice taking on a playful lilt, "if you're not ready to talk about them,"—she emphasized the word just enough to make Fleur shift uncomfortably—"then what are you planning to do about the boy you brought to the Yule Ball?"
Fleur sighed, her gaze dropping to her hands, which were clasped loosely in her lap. She remained quiet for a moment before finally speaking. "I am going to end zings," she said softly, her French accent thickening as it often did when she was deep in thought. "It is ze right thing to do."
Rosaline tilted her head.
Fleur hesitated, searching for the right words. "Because ... it is not fair to him," she admitted. "We 'ave only been on a couple of ... 'dates,' if you can even call zem zat. I do not feel I owe him much, but ..." She trailed off, her brows knitting together as she stared into the fire. "I would feel better ending it politely."
Rosaline nodded, her expression turning sympathetic. "That's very noble of you," she said sincerely. Then her lips quirked into a mischievous smile. "And very you."
Fleur gave a small huff of laughter despite herself. "I prefer to zink of it as being considerate."
"Of course you do," Rosaline teased, her grin widening. She leaned closer to the flames, her eyes sparkling with mirth. "Well, I wish you good luck with it. He seemed ... what's the word? Oh, yes. Handsome enough."
Fleur rolled her eyes. "Oui, he is handsome."
"And," Rosaline continued, her tone growing sly, "he does seem to have at least someability to resist a Veela's allure. Otherwise, he'd have been a complete statue sitting so close to you all of that evening."
Fleur couldn't help but laugh, shaking her head. "He is not entirely immune, but I suppose he is better zan most."
Rosaline smirked. "Perhaps, if he is heartbroken, you should let him know you 'ave a cousin who wouldn't mind a chance to ... how shall I put it? Help him get over you."
Fleur burst out laughing, her clear, melodic voice filling the room. "You are terrible, Rosaline."
Rosaline feigned a look of innocence. "What? I'm just offering a solution. I'm always here to help, you know."
The two of them exchanged playful banter for a few more minutes, their laughter easing the tension that had lingered earlier in the conversation. It was moments like these that Fleur cherished—when she could forget about the complexities of her emotions and simply enjoy the lightheartedness of her cousin's company.
Eventually, their laughter subsided, and Rosaline's expression softened. "All jokes aside, Fleur," she said gently, "I wish you the best of luck with everything. Breaking things off isn't easy, but it's the right thing to do if you know it's not going anywhere."
"Merci," Fleur said softly, a small smile gracing her lips.
Rosaline studied her cousin for a moment, then leaned closer to the flames once more. "And as for Harry ..."
Fleur stiffened slightly, but Rosaline's tone was sincere rather than teasing.
"Make sure he's interested in you for the right reasons," Rosaline said, her voice filled with both warmth and caution. "You deserve someone who will treat you right, Fleur. Someone who sees you as youand not just as a Veela."
Fleur's smile returned, this time more relaxed. "I will."
"And make sure he knows he'll have me to answer to if he doesn't," Rosaline added with a playful wink.
"I will keep zat in mind," Fleur replied with a soft laugh.
The two women said their goodbyes, exchanging promises to write soon. As Rosaline's face disappeared from the flames, Fleur leaned back in her chair, letting out a long breath.
The room was quiet now, the only sound the crackling of the fire. Fleur stood and crossed to the window, pushing aside the delicate lace curtain to gaze out at the Hogwarts grounds. The castle loomed in the distance, its towers silhouetted against the night sky. Her eyes instinctively drifted toward one particular tower—the one she knew housed the Gryffindor common room.
A small smile played on her lips as she rested her hand against the cool glass. "I 'ave a feeling I will be alright," she murmured softly to herself, her voice barely above a whisper. For the first time in days, Fleur felt a sense of calm settle over her.
The next day dawned crisp and clear, with a winter sun casting its pale light over the Hogwarts grounds. Fleur Delacour walked through the castle corridors, her heels clicking softly against the stone floor. She had chosen a quiet, semi-private alcove on the fifth floor for her meeting with Roger Davies. It was neutral ground—a place where they could speak freely without the prying eyes or ears of other students.
Fleur arrived first, standing near a tall, narrow window that overlooked the partially frozen Black Lake. She smoothed her robes, taking a deep breath to steel herself. This conversation wasn't going to be easy, but it was necessary.
The sound of footsteps approaching made her turn. Roger rounded the corner, his handsome face lighting up when he saw her. "Hey, Fleur," he greeted, a warm smile spreading across his lips.
"Roger," Fleur said softly, returning his smile with one of her own. "Zank you for meeting me 'ere."
"Of course," he said easily, his voice tinged with curiosity. "What's up?"
Fleur gestured to a nearby bench, and they both sat down. She folded her hands in her lap, staring at them for a moment before looking up at him. "We need to talk," she said, her tone steady but gentle.
Roger blinked, his relaxed demeanor shifting. The dazed look that often lingered in his eyes when he was near her seemed to evaporate as the weight of her words sank in. He straightened, his brow furrowing in confusion. "What's wrong?"
Fleur almost smiled despite herself. She had noticed before that when it came to serious matters, Roger had a remarkable ability to resist the pull of her allure. Even so, she could see the effort it took—there were still hints of the dreamy smile she had come to associate with those under her natural influence.
"I am sorry," Fleur began, her voice soft but firm. "Zis is not an easy conversation to 'ave, but ... I zink we should part ways."
Roger blinked again, the confusion on his face deepening. "Wait—what? Why? Did I do something wrong?"
"No, Roger," Fleur said quickly, shaking her head. "Zis is not about you. Zis is on me. I 'ave felt zis way for a while, but I was not sure 'ow to say it."
Roger frowned, clearly still puzzled. "I don't understand. I thought things were going well. I thought we were a good match."
Fleur hesitated, choosing her words carefully. "On paper, oui, you are perfect," she said, her voice tinged with regret. "You are smart, attractive, competitive ..." She trailed off, taking a deep breath before continuing. "But as cliché as it sounds, zis is not about you. Zis is an issue with me."
Roger opened his mouth to argue, but Fleur held up a hand to stop him.
"I know you are smart enough to realize why serious relationships are complicated for Veela," she explained, her tone patient but earnest. "But this is especially the case when we are young. It is very difficult to know if someone's affection is real, or if it is caused by ... our allure."
Roger shook his head, a hint of frustration creeping into his voice. "That's silly. Of course I'm interested in you. I wouldn't be here if I wasn't."
Fleur gave him a small, understanding smile. "I do not doubt zat you care about me," she said gently. "But zere are moments ... times when you 'ave drifted off mid-conversation, or simply agreed with everyzing I said without zinking."
Roger frowned, clearly struggling to process her words. "So what? That's not always a bad thing," he said, attempting a small smile.
Fleur shook her head, her expression turning serious. "Zat is not what I want in a relationship," she said firmly. She leaned forward slightly, her gaze searching his. "Roger, tell me—what do you like about me? Beyond my appearance."
Roger opened his mouth, then closed it again, clearly caught off guard. He thought for a moment, his brow furrowing in concentration, but no words came. Finally, he shook his head. "What's not to like?" he said, a note of frustration in his voice. "You're perfect."
Fleur smiled sadly, her heart aching for him. "If only zat were true," she said softly. "But I am not perfect, Roger. I 'ave my flaws, as all people do. Ze allure ... it hides or mutes zose imperfections. And once I gain better control over it, zose flaws will become more apparent."
Roger stared at her, still looking confused. Fleur took a deep breath, her voice becoming even softer. "At zat point for Veela, ze relationship often falls apart. Either because ze partner cannot stand ze flaws zat were hidden before, or because zey feel lied to. Ze other alternative ..." She hesitated, her expression darkening.
"What alternative?" Roger prompted, his tone cautious.
"Zat ze Veela chooses to actively and consciously continue using 'er allure on 'er partner," Fleur said quietly, shaking her head. "But zat is not a real relationship. It is a lie."
Roger's eyes widened slightly, and Fleur could see the surprise in his expression.
"I cannot imagine putting myself—or anyone else—in zat position," she continued, her voice steady. "I want a relationship built on real love, not one dependent on ze allure."
Roger was quiet for a long moment, processing her words. Fleur reached out, gently placing her hand over his. "I do not zink you do not care about me," she said sincerely. "I know I am ... how do you say? A catch." She gave him a small, teasing smile, and to her relief, he chuckled softly.
"But I want someone to love me for who I am," Fleur said, her tone turning serious again. "Not for what I am."
Roger was silent, his gaze fixed on their joined hands. Finally, he nodded slowly, his expression a mixture of disappointment and understanding. "I ... I think I get it," he said quietly.
Fleur let out a breath she hadn't realized she was holding. "Merci," she said softly. "I know zis is not what you wanted to 'ear, but I 'ope you understand."
Roger nodded again, his lips curving into a small, bittersweet smile. "I do," he said. "I'm disappointed, yeah, but ... I get it. And I appreciate you being honest with me."
Fleur's heart felt lighter than it had in days. She squeezed his hand gently. "Zank you," she said. "I do care about you, Roger. I truly wish you ze best."
Roger smiled, his expression softening. "Same to you," he said.
They sat in companionable silence for a moment before Fleur stood, smoothing her robes. Roger followed suit, and the two of them exchanged a final smile.
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The crisp winter air stung Fleur's cheeks as she stepped out of the castle, her boots crunching softly against the frost-covered ground. She tugged her cloak tighter around her shoulders, the warmth of the wool a small comfort against the chill. The conversation with Roger lingered in her mind, playing on a loop as she walked aimlessly across the Hogwarts grounds.
It had been the right decision. She knew that. But even as the weight of guilt eased, she couldn't shake the ache that accompanied it. Fleur glanced toward the horizon, where the sun hovered low, casting the grounds in hues of pale gold and soft pink. The castle's towering spires loomed in the distance, majestic and steadfast, a reminder of the sanctuary it provided for so many.
Her thoughts drifted to the earlier conversation with Rosaline. Fleur could still hear her cousin's teasing voice, the laughter that followed her playful barbs.
"Zere is nothing wrong with you, Fleur," Rosaline had said, her tone equal parts serious and light. "But you cannot deny zat you 'ave feelings. Maybe you do not understand zem yet, but zey are zere."
Fleur sighed, her breath forming a faint cloud in the air. Rosaline's words had struck a nerve, as they often did. She hadn't wanted to admit it at the time—still didn't—but her cousin's teasing wasn't entirely baseless.
Her mind wandered to Harry and Hermione, the two Gryffindors who had, against all odds, left a mark on her during this strange year. Harry's quiet determination and surprising kindness, so different from the boys who often fell over themselves trying to win her favor. Hermione's sharp wit and unyielding conviction, easily apparent on the other girl from their run ins within the library.
Fleur frowned, the corners of her mouth tugging downward as she tried to make sense of her emotions. It wasn't that she hadn't thought about them before—about Harry's awkward charm or Hermione's disarming intellect—but she had always pushed those thoughts aside, dismissing them as fleeting moments of admiration.
Now, with Rosaline's words echoing in her mind, she couldn't ignore the questions that arose.
Harry had been a surprise from the start. She had initially dismissed him as a poor little boy unfortunate enough to have somehow been entered into the tournament, yet he had proven her wrong time and time again. From his handling of the dragon during the First Task to the way he treated her with respect rather than awe, Harry Potter was not what she had expected.
And then there was Hermione. Fleur felt her cheeks warm despite the cold as she remembered their brief but meaningful interactions. It wasn't just Hermione's intelligence or her fierce loyalty that had drawn Fleur's attention—it was the way she carried herself, the fire in her eyes when she spoke about something she was passionate about. Fleur couldn't deny the admiration she felt, though she was hesitant to label it as anything more.
"Mon Dieu," Fleur muttered, shaking her head as if to dispel her thoughts. She quickened her pace, the rhythmic crunch of her steps grounding her.
By the time she reached a small lookout point overlooking the Black Lake, the sun had dipped lower, its reflection shimmering on the ice-covered surface. The castle stood proudly on the other side, its towers framed by the soft glow of twilight. Fleur paused, her breath catching at the sight.
For a moment, she allowed herself to be still, to take in the beauty of her surroundings. The lake stretched out before her, its frozen expanse glittering like a sea of diamonds. The air was crisp and clean, carrying with it the faint scent of pine and snow.
As she stood there, the weight of her thoughts began to lessen. She didn't have to have all the answers right now. The future was uncertain, yes, but that didn't mean she had to dwell on it.
Fleur closed her eyes, the corners of her lips curving into a small, peaceful smile. She focused on the moment—the quiet, the cold, the breathtaking view. For now, that was enough.
She opened her eyes again, gazing out across the lake. With one last glance at the castle, Fleur turned and began making her way back to the carriage.
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The warmth of her room in the Beauxbatons carriage greeted Fleur as she stepped inside, shaking off the cold that clung to her cloak. The faint aroma of lavender lingered in the air, a familiar comfort that reminded her of home. She unwound her scarf and draped it over the back of a chair before sinking into the plush seat near the small writing desk by the window.
Her gaze lingered on the frost-covered panes, where the glow of the castle lights shimmered like tiny stars in the distance.
Fleur sighed, reaching for a sheet of elegant parchment embossed with the Delacour family crest. She smoothed it out carefully, then dipped a quill into a bottle of dark blue ink, letting the tip hover above the page.
Dear Rosaline,
She hesitated, the quill poised in mid-air as she considered how to begin. The conversation with her cousin the previous night played through her mind, the teasing remarks and sincere advice that had pushed her to confront the things she'd been avoiding. A small smile tugged at her lips as she began to write.
Merci for your advice last night. I believe you were right, as usual, though I hate to admit it. I had the conversation with Roger today, and while it was not easy, I feel that it was the right decision for both of us. He took it better than I had expected, which I am grateful for.
Fleur paused, glancing out the window again. The castle loomed against the twilight sky, its towers outlined in soft hues of purple and blue. She watched as a few owls swooped from the Owlery, their silhouettes dark against the fading light.
Her thoughts wandered briefly to Harry and Hermione, unbidden but persistent. Rosaline's teasing voice echoed in her head, and Fleur chuckled softly despite herself.
Shaking her head, she turned her attention back to the letter. She tapped the quill against her chin, contemplating her next words.
As you said, emotions can be difficult to navigate, especially for someone like me. But I think I am learning to trust myself, even when things are uncertain. The future is still unclear, but for the first time in a long while, I feel at peace with that. I have faith that everything will be fine.
She hesitated again, her fingers brushing the edge of the parchment. There was so much more she wanted to say but couldn't put into words—feelings she wasn't ready to name, possibilities she wasn't ready to explore. Fleur smiled faintly, letting the ink dry as she re-read her words.
Satisfied, she added one final line.
Thank you for always being there. I will keep you updated.
Setting the quill aside, Fleur carefully folded the letter and pressed her family's wax seal into place. She held it for a moment, the edges of the parchment cool against her fingertips, before setting it gently on the desk.
Her gaze shifted back to the window, this time lingering on the Owlery. The last traces of sunlight had disappeared, leaving the grounds bathed in the soft glow of the castle lights.
The faintest of smiles curved her lips as she let her thoughts settle. Tomorrow, she would send the letter. Tonight, she would let herself rest, knowing that she was finally moving forward.
For now, that was enough.
Kind Regards,
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Story Note 1 – A small little chapter to build on this story from Fleur's perspective. I don't have anything against him and wanted to make sure he had a nice send off, rather than just Fleur ghosting him. There will be a couple of these chapters coming up. Mostly as a way to pass along information to help the reader understand parts of the story that are beyond what is immediately relevant and known to Harry.
Story Note 2 – Yay! Rosaline is back. Now before anyone gets upset with her, she was just written to be flirty and more relaxed. I don't think she would actually use her allure to entrap someone into a relationship. Most importantly I think she was just trying to be there for her cousin and lighten the mood.
Story Note 3 – Also congrats for those who noticed but I did try to write the dialogues from Fleur and Rosaline a little differently. While they both still had some of the accent. I tried to make Rosaline's a little fainter or less prevalent as a way to show that she was a little older and had done more travelling, therefore would have less of an accent.
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First of all - super sorry about double posting the last chapter and thanks for all the comments about my faux pas! I'll try to make sure that doesn't happen again but ... c'est la vie!
Rai Daniels, jkarr, OfInkAndQuill, dakotafogarty, gigamans57 - Thanks so much for the feedback and really hope you continue to enjoy the story as it progresses!
FenreldStormblade - Well this was an amazing comment! I'm really happy the way that the story is being built is working. Obviously there are plenty of things that I'm trying to incorporate but it is really nice to hear that they are coming off well.
midnightscar17 - Ya ... the site was having difficulties but should be all good now!
Monkey D. Conan - Well then I guess we will just need to see what is in store. But I imagine there will be a significant arc in store for him. Not that he needs redemption for his actions but he deserves the opportunity to be of importance.
ElfOwl - Ya ... dialogue went through a significant change in the mid 20's and in general seemed to have been well received.
Ayasaki125 - I have pruned back a lot of non-story stuff and the stuff that remains I try to keep under 10% of the chapter and is there for a purpose.
cameron1812 and stacygrrl2002 - Glad it came off well. Obviously Kreature pretty much led to Sirius dying but in the end I felt he was more a product of circumstance and not irredeemable (aka read Book 7 - was ignored in the movies).
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littleemberlou - Thanks so much for the review! Spent probably more time on this chapter than I have on a bunch of other ones trying to get it right. Sirius and Harry's relationship is something I felt could add alot to the story and glad it comes across as well written. I certainly believe that the world would be a better place with more kindness and understanding and obviously that might come out in my writing haha. It's nice when people apprecaite when I try new things! As for Hermione ... wonder what she was doing there ... Ah ya unsure what had happened but seems alright now. Plus it was weird it was only for this story.
Hands Off MY Wolfie - Nothing wrong with putting in a little work! Hard work pays off! Plus I can't imagine what he had to put up with before the isolation of living with the portrait. Glad you are enjoying the story!
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Fenrir070 - I have to admit that your feedback is incredibly insightful. Thanks for keeping it going! I'm happy that interaction came across. Sirius went through alot and I'm trying to portray that he is dealing with significant baggage. And as always I felt that canon Dumbledore made huge fumbles and while I understand that he had his reasons to do things "For The Greater Good" there were mistakes he made that didn't need to be made and just because he might have felt Harry would have had to die doesn't mean he would have ignored him so. So have changed the way he was written a bit and glad that came across alright!
melikereading - Thanks for the feedback, certainly the dialogue went through significant changes. Really happy you are enjoying my work but while I love this story, it was the first piece I had ever written so there will certainly be changes that are apparent that aren't in other stories as I was certainly learning during this story. Whereas the other stories came after I learned.
Erik Penrose - Such good feedback! I really do and thanks for taking the time to provide feedback. Whether I am able to incorporate it into this story immediately (have a feeling I'll try to eventually as there are certainly things I'm not happy with that I plan to go back and rewrite) the feedback provides a chance for me to see things I did not see or think of and gives me a chance to grow. So thanks! As for the feedback itself - without a doubt the fights are something that I spent alot of time thinking on before and have spent even more time thinking on it since it was written. The fight with Lucius was two fold (although honestly may have to go back and rewrite it so it comes off better) but firstly part of it was Harry still reeling from the surprise of the situation but more importantly while I have no doubt that Harry was an exceptional duelist I find that the way JK wrote Lucius was slightly unrealistic. While I know that Lucius might have become one of Voldemort's high ranking supporters for his political skills the fact that he was unable to deal with Harry in book 5 seemed a stretch and a massive use of plot armor. No matter how well Harry "trained" the members of Dumbledore's Army the fact that a handful of them were able to almost hold their own against Malfoy and the other Death Eaters seemed too much. So as a result I changed up Lucius character slightly, making him more capable and certainly darker (will see that later on, especially in Draco Interlude chapters). As for knowing something was going to happen I wrote it from the perspective that it is very difficult to remember when something was going to happen three years previously. It is one thing remembering something had happened but without the cues it is a complete other thing to know exactly when it had happened.
