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John Smith 135: Hello, since you've marked my Review, I'll say this.
Don't Belittle your Intelligence, I'll be Honest, The Guy Isn't Smart either, but unlike me, you wrote 2 Cool Fanfiction or Even More, I'm about an Absolute Killer where Makoto is like Red Hood or Dexter Morgan and this Fanfiction is about Vampires, for example, so you're Definitely Doing Well with Intelligence.
Well, I Understand That Writing May Be Really Hard... I'm Not Going To Ask You For The Impossible, I Really Understand Everything, I just Thought maybe you could still Write A Fanfiction that would have a Harem, but Despite the Harem, Kyoko would be the Main Love Interest and Number 1 Makoto would of course Love all the Girls in the Harem, but Kyoko would Love More, no matter how Strange it may Sound.
But I Understand That You Seem To Have A Favorite Female Character, Sayaka, which I also Understand and Do Not Condemn. Everyone has their own Tastes, I'm just A Reader who Likes Kyoko More, but I'm just a Pathetic Reader.
It would be cool if Yukizome Chisa were in Chisa's Harem too, I just really like it.
As For UHA, I Don't Understand what You're talking about?
In general, I didn't mean to offend you, as I said, I'm just a Pathetic Reader of Your Brilliant Fanfiction.
Don't you dare belittle yourself like that... I'm not that... nah I'm not good at all... I just write what I think is cool... and believe me most of the time I have no idea what I am doing... this chapter should show that in spades... but I like it cause even when I don't have a plan that 100% written... it feels good... maybe that is why I do stuff like this... and DM for DND -.- ... Honestly I don't know why I like Sayaka that much... but I do love Kyoko a lot. But yeah... with Chisa? IDK I mean I can try but I feel we are already in the deep end to show something like that... but ehh who knows. But yeah JHON SMITH 135 you are not a pathetic reader... In fact I'm actually glad you read and comment lately, when I came back to writing this story I was just going to post it thinking nobody would read it... I just felt bad that I didn't finish it... well actually with all of them... but one at the time I guess. So when I received the notification that you have commented... in 2 languages none the less. I was ecstatic... I mean a story is just as good as the readers who read it think it is... and I appreciate any of you who would spend time reading my crazy messes of stories XD
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BIHP 60: Before the bloodshed
knock * Knock*. Makoto knocked on the door to Sayaka's hospital room - "Come in" - he heard from the inside. Makoto looked a bit confused as he could hear a bit of coldness coming from her voice. He slowly opened the door only to notice that Kyoko and Maki were also inside the room… the three of them looked mad at him - "Kyoko? Maki? I didn't know you were going to visit Sayaka as well today" - Makoto looked a bit confused.
"We came here after Chiaki told us what happened" - Kyoko explained. Makoto looked shocked, how in the flying fuck had that happened? he just left Chiaki's hospital room… they were on the same floor - "Makoto please sit down"- Maki offered and Makoto sat down - "ok first things first Makoto… are you ok?"- Kyoko said softly shocking him.. before he smiled softly - "No… Sayaka… Kyoko… please be honest with me"- he then both stared at him, their eyes widening as their instincts hit and their bodies started shivering - "when you look at me…. Do you see a human or…. a vampire?"- Maki looked shocked as the other two girls looked terrified at Makoto… and yet she didn't feel anything - "I see…. It's just like a thought"- Makoto said as the two looked shocked - "every day I lose my humanity little by little… to the point people don't see me as a human anymore" - Maki and the other two looked shocked at what he said.
"I saw it all the time in the isle of Noctis. The difference between when the servants talked to me to when they talked to me than when they talked to the clan of the night… even though I could see their love and devotion to them… they couldn't stop their instincts and their bodies couldn't stop shaking. It's been happening more and more"- he said his head falling low as the fear disappeared from Sayaka and Kyoko… yet they felt deep painful guilt from seeing him like that - "so I guess the reason I didn't feel anything is because I'm not human right"- Maki asked trying to break the silence.
"Yeah, it seems so. But I have been noticing lately how I have been losing more and more of my old self" - he said as he looked at the ceiling - "I used to hate myself, and every day I just wished for my death… but I felt close with people… I felt like a regular teen. Yeah, I didn't expect that 3 girls would like me… it's quite shocking honestly… I don't believe I'm even attractive… but it felt good" - the girls listened closely their hearts felt pain over his words - "but now… now I'm stronger… I have accepted that I'm a vampire… but… I don't feel the happiness I used to. Everyone in the world sees me as a monster or a hero. But even the ones who see me like a hero secretly fear me… I feel more alienated from everyone than ever to the point… I have been killing more and more people… and worst of all the ones who love me fear me as well" - he said clenching his teeth and trying his best not to cry - "of course… I don't blame you… after all it isn't your fault… but ironically my biggest fear… has become true" - Sayaka and Kyoko felt despair as they knew… his biggest fear was to be hated by those who said they loved him - "sorry I been making you feel guilty… sorry" - Kyoko and Sayaka then just felt worse as he was trying to make them feel better. The couldn't even look at his face in shame. They then both looked a bit surprised as Maki hugged them both - "hey is ok… the fact you guys feel so heartbroken means you two really care for him. And he knows it looks"- Maki guided their heads so they would look at him and they both looked how he felt really bad that he hurt them.
"Kyoko, Sayaka I'm sorry… I really am. I'm not doubting that you care for me…. Well maybe a little after all other than being a vampire I look so plain" - he joked trying to lighten the mood - "I'm just a bit saddened because everything has just become… more complicated. And I can't simply act like it isn't, but I will tell you this… talking to you three makes me feel so much better"- he said with an honest smile, which made them blush - "you don't look scary when your like that Makoto" - Maki teased him surprising all of them… and it was then that Sayaka and Kyoko noticed… they never felt scared of Himiko or Kaito… yet why were the servants.
"I see… is emotional fear" - Kyoko said confusing the others - "isn't it weird that Kaito can be our teacher and we don't feel the fear? Or that this is the first time we have felt this with you?" -Kyoko asked and the others looked confused - "the more you feel alienated, the more confused or in pain you feel the more afraid we become. That would explain why the people of Noctis were reacting like that… their minds were overly stressed over Atua's brainwash…. And caused the same effect" - she explained and Makoto looked a bit shocked before he looked sadly and tired - "so I… just have to feel normal? I don't know if I can do that" - he said looking at the floor… what meant to feel normal.
His eyes widened when he felt both his hands being held. He knew their touch and he looked up seeing both Kyoko and Sayaka holding him - "You just need to take it a step at a time" - Kyoko said softly - "and if you need help we are here for you" - Sayaka said softly as well. Seeing them made him blush… and smile as well - "thanks… I really don't deserve you"
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Mondo and Chihiro were riding on his bike. They arrived at a bridge, and they got off, Chiniro feeling nausea - "Come on Chihiro you should be better than that if you want to prove your manliness" - he Joked a bit as he helped him during his nausea. After he felt better they then walked to the edge of the bridge.
"So… I know I didn't ask before… but can you tell me why are we here"- Mondo then looked a bit solemnly - "hey Chiniro one question everyone already knows you are the boy… why are you still wearing girl clothes"-he asked and Chihiro looked a bit surprised - "umm… I don't know… I guess I have been using it for so long that I feel more comfortable wearing it"- he said and Mondo laughed a bit
"Is funny how you kept asking me to help you become stronger… And yet… you have grown so much you have left me in the dust" - Chihiro looked confused - "you are not afraid of showing your true self… you don't let other people perspective define who you are. Yes at first you started as a girl because you feared what people thought. But once you decided you wanted to change you did it… I'm envious of you. My life has defined me… and I don't believe I can change" - Chihiro then asked him why he wanted to change… he was already awesome - "dude... I'm not awesome… there is a part of me that… I want to show…. But I'm afraid" - Chihiro then asked him what he meant. Mondo then took a really hard breath before turning to see him.
"Chihiro… I… I think I love you" - Chihiro's eyes widened - "at first I believed you were a small kid with low self-esteem… but as time went on… I started developing feelings for you… it felt strange, and it felt wrong… but then I just couldn't stop… I became addicted to your kindness… And I know… that because we are both dudes, you probably won't ever feel the same way as I do you… but I just need…."
"Wait that's not fair!" - Chihiro screamed while looking a bit mad - "you can't just tell, me you love me and give up before I give you my answer…. Especially when I feel the same way" - Mondo looked shocked at him… as his mind started processing what he said - "wait…. Really?" - Mondo asked surprised, and Chihiro nodded - "you were the first one to know my secret… the first one to accept me… and lately… I have been feeling fear… as you go into missions… I know that you were trained and you want to help people… but the fear… the fear of losing hurts a lot" - he said crying a bit, while Mondo looked sadly… he wasn't too much of a romantic guy like Makoto… but. He swallowed his fear and kissed Chihiro. Who's eyes widened before he returned the kiss after a couple of minutes Mondo stopped the kiss and looked directly at Chihiro's eyes, whose face was fully red - "Chihiro, you know that I'm not the most romantic, and I'm quite dumb… but you know that I'll always keep my promises… and I promise I will always come back, can you promise to wait for me?" - this time to Mondo's surprise Chihiro was the one who kissed him before looking at him - "only if you promise to me you will always come back" - and they sealed their promise with a third kiss.
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Leon is playing the guitar in the music room… while trying to sync with a Piano song he was playing online. He would do this from time to time… just to feel closer to Luzia. He took a hard breath and looked upwards - "Sorry Luzia with all the craziness lately I haven't even had enough time to mourn you" - he said before he heard the four open seeing Ibuki enter holding her guitar - "ohh Leon… I didn't know you were here" - she said a bit surprised - "yeah I have been occupied" - She then sat next to him - "yeah after I joined the reapers is been mission after mission" - he said. Ibuki then looked sadly.
"I'm sorry over your girlfriend's death… I heard that she was killed by ghouls… that is why you became a reaper isn't it?" - Leon looked a bit surprised, but he guessed Jin decided to spread that info to hide their true nature… - "Actually it wasn't like that" - he said getting her attention - "Luzia was a ghoul… she came to this school and even started dating me as a way of threatening Makoto" - Ibuki looked shocked over the information - "while I was in love with her… I was just a hostage to her… once I found out she then left… and looking for answers I became a reaper"- he then looked sadly - "The fun part was that… I don't know for sure if she even liked me before she died… maybe saying that she loved me was just her being compassionate over a grieving man… man am I pathetic" - he said looking down while scratching his head. He would replay that again and again that moment in his head… it felt like he was able to get through her… but the doubt always crept into his heart.
"Well I don't know about ghouls or anything but I do know that girls had feelings for you" - Ibuki said and Leon looked at her. What she was saying? - "I know… because she had the same eyes as me"- she said confusing Leon… Ibuki then looked away - "Leon I love you"- she said softly his eyes widening - "I loved you for a while. We spent so much time together that little by little I noticed how cool you are… and I just fell… and I know this isn't the time to say it… but I have to do it so you can understand" -she then looked directly at his eyes seriously - "because I love you… I can say with confidence and certainty. Luzia shared the same eyes I have… she also loved you… so be confident that she loved you" - Leon's eyes couldn't be seen over the shadow of his hair… before he gave a forced smile - "I see…"- tears started falling - "I…"- Ibuki then hugged his head softly - "is ok Leon… cool guys still cry"- Leon then started crying softly as the weight of his guilt and grief fell off.
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Tsumugi looked down from the top of a bridge. Lately, she had been feeling inadequate over her love of Makoto… she had been feeling he was drifting away… and that came with consequences on her life as well. She had spent her entire life for him and everything she had done was for him… and yet… she felt like a secondary character… somehow she felt like she lost to Kyoko, Sayaka, and even Maki. She felt unworthy of his love… and without him… she had no purpose.
"Nice view isn't it?"- she heard from behind her, she then turned to see Junko and Mukuro there. She then looked a bit disappointed, she was really expecting Makoto - "not expecting me? Sad news you only have us" - Junko said jocklingky as Mukuro and her sat to a now annoyed Tsugumi - "why are you two bothering me?" - she said. _ " Makoto wanted to come himself… but he got caught in a last minute thing… so he asked me if I could check on you to make sure you are ok… Nee-san only came because she was bored" - Mukuro said - "Hey you say it like I'm a bother!" - Junko complained.
"So… what's the issue?"- Mukuro asked to the sadly Tsumugi - "is none of your business"- she said Mukuro then smiled softly - "so it's about Makoto isn't it?"- Mukuro said and Tsumugi blushed a bit mad - "yes… but you wouldnt understand "- she said - "you know… I have the biggest crush on him too"-she said surprising Tsumugi and Junko - "what?! Since when?!" - Junko asked as they both looked at Mukuro who's face turned red - "since… since we met… you see Junko knows most of this story. When we were kids we saw a Ghoul kill our parents… after that an exorcist killed the ghoul and Junko believe he was the killer… and because of that she became enamored with despair"- Tsumugi then looked at Junko who was just looking away - "well its fun!" she pouted.
"In desire of strength, I trained and joined both Fenrir and the exorcist. And once they found out I was chosen as the Ultimate Soldier the exorcist ordered me to investigate who the original demon was. Whom only the Pope knew and wouldn't share the info. So I decided to comply not only for my job as an exorcist… but also to protect Junko from that monster. So once I arrived at Hope's Peak I distrusted everyone… anyone could be The Demon and therefore everyone was my enemy… but… then he smiled at me… I didn't know him. He was just a lanky boy… but his smile shot me like an arrow to the heart. His eyes were pure and he was… cute" - both girls looked shocked as Mukuro was talking with a full blush and a cute smile. - "but then…I found out that same boy… was the same demon who I needed to kill. And my heart broke and sank… I felt betrayed…even when he didn't do anything on that matter. I was ordered to kill him… and I steeled my heart to do it… I tried to kill him"- she then clenched her fist - "and he… he smiled at me… he felt bad to see me cry… he cared for me… and he protected me. I fell for him badly… I didn't care he was with other women… I just wanted to be next to him… and I wanted to give myself to him… but my guilt always stopped me…so I stood comfortably, joined his team, and helped him… I kept my feelings in the shadow"- Tsumugi looked shocked… somehow she could feel her feeling as if it was her own - "So I'm a bit envious of you being able to still fight "- Tsumugi looked sadly.
"I… I don't know how to keep going"- Tsumugi admitted - "I was supposed to die when I was a little kid and he saved me… so I felt that my knew life had to be dedicated to him… that he was my purpose… but as time went and he found other love… I felt useless and empty… without him… I feel like I have no purpose to be alive. And i fear that he won't love me back… I even feared that I wouldn't be enough for him… and during a time I thought I was ready to be intimate with him… I felt fear… I wasn't ready… so maybe…I know deep inside he will never love me back and I didn't have a purpose"
"Fucking him wouldn't have changed anything he has fucked me silly twice and our relationship hasn't advanced at all"- Junko said nonchalantly, shocking Tsumugi and Mukuro… - "WHAT!?"- they both then screamed shocked at Junko who looked confused - "wait, sis? You have feelings for him… and have you been intimate with him?"- Junko then gave a sly smile - "stop calling being intimate… we aren't children anymore..l had had sex with him… and Sayaka as well technically… and surprisingly that herbivore is quite the Casanova. He took my heart by force" - she admitted she then looked super annoyed - "being smart suuuuucks. If you know too much everything and everyone becomes boring. So once than man killed our parents and I felt despair I became addicted… it was something I simply couldn't understand and every time I saw it at play it was like a new experience. So as my sister knows… I was planning to create the ultimate despair and turn this world upside down… the thought made me salivate and the idea felt like traveling to a brand new world… but… then I found out about Makoto and that caught my interest and then ghouls appeared and my mind was overjoyed. But for some reason Makoto was always on my mind… for some reason I wanted to break him and turn him into despair… so we made a bet" - Tsumugi and Mukuro looked confused - "I would try to make him despair and he would try to make me change… it was fun but then the apocalypse happened and ghouls started destroying everything… normally I would be elated… but instead I was conflicted. Stuff happens, stuff happens Sayaka threatened my life because I almost got Makoto killed, I fucked both of them… blah blah blah"- she looked annoyed reminiscing.
"But then I discovered that despair no longer brought me the pleasure I had…while despair is still fun it no longer made me crave for it… I broke… Just like you Tsumugi I lost my way… I needed purpose… and I begged Makoto the only person I could trust without any fear for it, because I felt that if he couldn't give me purpose I would just kill myself"- Mukuro looked shockled and sadly… she knew that Junko never truly socialized with anyone.. not even her sister, but to consider suicide - "and you now what he said… that he couldn't help me… so that was it I had no purpose and I was better dead…but then he hugged me telling me he didn't want me to die… me the one who tortured him, injured him and almost killed him… he said that he would be next to me as I found new purpose and experience, that even if I was annoying, he liked and had fun having me around… it felt… good"- she said with a soft smile and she held her chest - "and then I convinced him to fuck me multiple times that day… it was a really fun experience"- she said returning to her jokey persona. While the two other girls faces were entirely red. Junko then noticed this and had a mocking grim as she looked at them - "ohh to be a pure maiden is so cute" -she said mockingly, making them a bit mad, but then Junko turned to a serious smile - "but at the same time I learned a lot about Makoto" - she said catching their attention.
"Just like me and even though most people can't notice it… Makoto is broken" - she said to the surprise of the other girls - "he believes that he isn't deserving of love… he thinks that there's no way people even like him… that's why Kyoko, Sayaka, and Maki are so in the lead… because they are repairing his perspective and showing him there are people who truly love him… of course that is too cliche and lovey doves for me… and that has opened his heart little by little, creating spaces for us and the others… but for his heart to fully open to you guys you have to prove him that you truly love him. That his idea that he is alone and not worthy of company is simply Bullshit… and I know just how to do that"- she said with an evil smile. - "By the way Junko I wanted to ask… how they got your Monokuma style for the video"- Mukuro asked a bit interested, breaking her bubble _ "ohhh that… no idea… but in all honestly I kind of like that… don't tell Makoto though?
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"So Makoto we also called you for another reason" - Kyoko said getting his attention - "honestly I didn't want to talk about this… but… the council has spoken"-s she said pointing at Maki and Sayaka - "Makoto… you have to answer to the feeling of all the other girls who also love you" - Makoto then looked confused - "what do you mean other girls who love me?" - the three girls then sighed, since while it was true that Makoto felt unworthy of being loved… the other problem was he was incredibly dense.
"Makoto you have to stop putting yourself down. You may believe that there aren't any other girls… but there are"- Sayaka said a bit annoyed, but he still looked like he didn't believe it - "how about Junko?"- Sayaka asked, Makoto then smiled - "she just likes to mess with me… I mean I do want her to be happy… but I don't think she loves me" - Makoto explained - "And Tsumugi?"- Maki asked seriously making him a bit sad- "Tsumugi believed I was her god… she was confused thinking that she loved me because I save her… and although I care for her… I don't think she would like the real me" -he said sadly… making them a bit sad as well.. why couldn't he see himself the same way they saw him - "what about Mukuro, Celes, and Hina?"- Kyoko asked, even if he didn't see it… it was quite obvious how they saw him. Makoto then smiled confused - "What do you mean Kyoko? They just see me as a friend"- the three girls then sighed heavily… how was he so dense? - "ok but if any of them reveal their love do you… you have to respond to them ok?"- Sayaka scolded them - "ok? But I thought…."
"Yes we know we said that you shouldn't get more girls… but to be honest…we feel kind of… guilty"- Kyoko said confusing him, Sayaka then smiled softly - "Makoto you may not see it yourself but you are amazing. And you have a really kind heart… to the point that you always make sure you help others… and we feel really thankful and loving about that… but at the same time we feel that we aren't letting the other girls share that feeling if they truly want it.. and while Kyoko is a bit of the jealous type who doesn't like sharing"- Sayaka said jokingly while Kyoko pouted a bit - "we know you have enough love for all of us… so if they do care about you… and you feel the same way… then it is ok… even if you get a harem"- she said making him blush - "the only condition is that you must make sure you show us the same love"- Kyoko ended and Makoto smiled a bit embarrassed while scratching his cheek - "well I don't think that would be the case… but thanks… you three are the best"- he said making the girls blush.
"Ok now to establish kissing turns. I go first"- Sayaka said while the other girls looked a bit mad and offended… but before a discussion started they heard the door knock. - "Who is it?"- Sayaka asked the room still being her hospital room - "is… Celes"- they all looked a bit surprised - "Come in"- Celes then opened the door noticing everyone there - "ohh sorry… I knew Makoto was here but didn't know the rest of you were as well"- they all looked a bit surprised as she sounded a lot more reserved - "you were looking for me?"- Makoto asked. Celes looked scared her body shaking but it wasn't at Makoto - "Celes are you ok?"- Makoto asked worried.
"I… need a favor… something… something…. That I shouldn't be asking… but… I need… I need to ask it"- she was shaking like a leaf… the pain of what she had to say deep in her eyes - "hey is ok… sit down"- Makoto then offered her seat and she sat - "if you want, please tell us what happened, take your time" - she then nodded and took a big breath - "you… you see after you left angry from the video Chihiro then decided he wanted to do his best to help you… so he used his AI Alter ego to scan as many of the people on the video and do a background check on everyone as he could" - all of them looked a bit impressed over how quick-witted Chihiro was… they should go talk to him and thank him… although Makoto decided better not to… he knew Mondo's plans and didn't want to interrupt… he wished them the best… but then he shook his head remembering that he's was in the middle of a conversation -"sorry about that please continue" - Celes then nodded.
"During the process, Chihiro noticed something weird and called me over… the AI identified a person who was registered… dead" -she said with a knot on her throat. She then showed the picture of a woman not too old maybe in her mid 20… which the other girls didn't recognize at all… but Makoto's eyes widened intensely… he had seen this woman before - "no…he… wouldn't" - Makoto said and horrified as he remembered a place full of this woman's pictures, he then looked at Celes who's poker abilities couldn't hide her reaction it didn't take Kyoko long either as her detective skill noticed the key details and she covered her mouth in shock confusing Sayaka and Maki - "it…it seems to me that even without my collaboration, father proceeded and… he brought my mom back to life as a ghoul!" - she said her voice full of pain, Sayaka and Maki also looked horrified. Makoto then held his head… he had seen so many things and weird stuff… but to defile the dead… it was then that he noticed Chihiro had tabbed certain people… and each one of them filled Makoto with more and more rage as not only showed the people but also…their information. Sophia Yasuhiro (Cele's Mom), Dio Santos, Luzia, Rakdos, Markus, Modore and Silan, Nagito, and finally the man himself Arakan Yasuhiro… but he looked differently his hair fully white, his eyes purple. He was surrounded by all these people who were confirmed dead… yet Makoto knew they were none of the real ones… after all their eyes showed no souls behind them, they looked more like puppets than humans… somehow Arakan Yasuhiro… had brought back life to these corpses. Makoto then looked in anger and disgust. He then heard the sobbing of Celes
"Makoto… please…. Please kill my parents… my mom deserves a proper death…. And that bastard deserves to disappear" - Makoto then hugged her to let her cry… but the four of them (Naegi, Kyoko, Maki, and Sayaka had a cold stare and silent anger… he would pay.
After Celes calmed down Makoto then texted Mukuro to go talk to Tsumugi… he had planned to do it himself but he was now occupied. There was a storm brewing… and he was going to cause extreme destruction.
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Yeah, I know that Mondo x Chihiro seems to come out of nowhere… and yes any interaction between them seems mild at best…. Welll… I don't have a good excuse… yep.
So please review be it positive or negative and yep.