john phoenix was online on fanfiction dot net and he did his daily check of the john phoenix adventures reviews

he saw a review by john phoenix sux it said

"this story is garbage kill yourself"

john phoenix sprang out of his seat, he coud not tolerate this bullying of his friend dakoolguy

he would punish john phoenix sux

john phoenix went to crime affairs and gumshoe did an IP test of the guys computer and it said he lived at cape west apartments

they went there and broke the door down

"DYLAN FITCHAR YOU BULLIED DAKOOLGUY"

"no you cant prove it" said dylan

"yes we can" said john phoenix "because you left behind your IP ADDRESS!"

dylan fitchar ran away

but then he got caught!