I'M ALIIIVE! Sorry for such an unexpected and unannounced hiatus guys; it was not my intention. If none of you have ever dealt with the surge of writer's block that comes right after having weeks upon weeks of work vanish it is a real deluge of demonetization. So, I really needed to step away for a while there before I could even acknowledge that I had a story to write. Also didn't help that I was traveling around for a while visiting family and friends right after the holidays.
And then after a few weeks of hiatus I was ready, ready to jump back into it. And just when I was about to start writing again one of my siblings introduced me to a Minecraft mod known as Cobblemon… annnnnd all of my creative focus went right into that for like over a month. Gosh my builds and Pokémon collection were so cool. But then some of my add-on mods updated and there was an error, and a lot of my structures were deleted and now I've lost motivation in that. Soooo that means I am officially ready to get back onto the saddle. I have already started to rewrite the next chapter but I'm about 35% - 45% through. And because I'm kinda writing from scratch here it's been slow going but I'm making steady progress. So, I'm not sure when the next chapter will be up so please check in every Friday from here till then and I'm sure it'll pop up. Take care and thank you all for your kind patience, support, and understanding.
Responses to Guest Reviewers Ch.88:
Thunder Dragon: Yes. All of my Yes. This was glorious. Welcome Deku 9. It is your time to shine. And Shine you will.
Guardian-Sigil: Yes he will
Grimm: Wow, just Wow, this arc is simply something like no other, I have never seen so much passion for a fanfic, I have never seen such a thing, and although the epilogue is missing, I feel that this is easily a great conclusion, it is a climax that will change many things, although I thought I would save Way Big for the secret of the omnitrix but I won't say that I'm excited (Machia starts to tremble). The nine new aliens were spectacular, I want to see what changes you will give to some of them. Gutrot is my particular favorite, although I suggest removing its ability to create fictitious gases that according to the wiki it has. You can't expect it to change later, but that's what's exciting. I think you accomplished the task of making this arc perfect, the wait was worth it. continues to surprise.
Guardian-Sigil: I apologize for a missing epilogue I am working on it as we speak
Yeah I am trying to keep Gutrott's powers in check but I also want to be creative with it so hopelfully I can find a balance
Guest: Just a thought but why does no one address Thirteen by her real name? I mean the faculty call each other by their real names sometimes. Why not her? We could also use some more one on one time with her and Deku. I mean she is supposed to be his mentor right. Their should be more solo training with them.
Guardian-Sigil: Well I mean the students won't call them because that wouldn't be consistent. I mean they don't call Present Mic "Mr. Yamada." And Principal Nezu always call people by their hero name unless they are a citizen or student. Aliens act the same as humans and refer to Plumbers i.e. heroes as their hero names and so on. Basically they're no real reason for me to address Thirteen by Anon Kurose. But yes there needs to be more one and one time between them both. I thought I would be able to incorporate more then I have…obviously I failed at that
Guest02957: Awesome story! I love how you had Izuku get the Omnitrix instead of One for All. I also love how you had Hisashi as a member of the Plumbers. I personally think that Mirio should've gotten One for All, but that's just my opinion. Will Izuku regain the alien forms he had before the Omnitrix was recalibrated? Will Izuku be paired with Ochako in the future? These are just suggestions since this is your story and you can write it however you want.
Anyway, awesome story and keep up the great work!
Guardian-Sigil: yeah I considered Mirio but so many other stories do that so i wanted to go against the grain
Also he did not lose any of his previous forms. Heck that's why Rath appeared in between transformations was to help prove that
Guest: This was so worth the wait! The fight between Deku and Vilgax! Epic doesn't even begin to cover it! You really are one of the best fanfic authors out their.
Guardian-Sigil: Thank you, I'm glad it was worth it. Can't say I agree that I am one of the best fanfic authors but I appreciate your words nonetheless. I do apologize that the follow up is taking far too long.
Avalon GX: Been a while as I have just waited before you put more chapters out so I could binge read instead of dealing with cliff hangers.
How to deal with Harangue ideas
A fellow reporter who know about him in the past blows the whistle on him
Nezu realized that something was off with the interview and destroys the man with legal evidence
Harangue using his quirk on izuku but the monitoring safety feature activates turning him into brain storm to counter it on live TV.
Guardian-Sigil: Hey I was trying if i could post everyday believe me I would love to
Guest: I was hoping Ball weevil would be one of the new guys but the line up is still pretty great. Plus you introduce Chromastone and he is definitely my top 3 for favorite aliens. Now that he is here please use him a lot. He. Is. Awesome!
Guardian-Sigil: Chromastone is one of my personal favorites so no worries there
Guest: Until someone with both the power and the will to fight to kill, as well as a crack recovery team to find the body and destroy it on a cellular level, you know as well as I do that that wretched space squid is never going to die. I'm assuming that Omnitrix shenanigans are how you plan on eliminating One For All's degradation of quirked users. You won't see me complaining about that in the comments.
That bit with Vilgax and NRG was pretty funny to me, Vilgax is shouting and has to pause to activate his transmitter so his conversation can continue, because you can't "talk" in space, ha ha.
Unless I'm missing something, I thought Way Big's lasers were green or blue, not yellow. The Ultraman reference was not lost on me, thankfully, my dad is a fan and had me watch the Netflix series with him.
Honestly, in my opinion, Dragon Ball in its entirety is not exactly known for fights between characters with hacks abilities other than LAAAAASER BEEEEEAM. And teleport too, I guess. Like a character that Goku couldn't beat by punching because they had intangibility.
Same person from the Beyblade tangent, again btw.
Guardian-Sigil: that's the rule of media if we didn't see a body then he ain't dead!
Yes. Ben 10's Way Bug uses blue/green beams. But, I might as well say it, each of Deku's 9 new aliens are based on a different wielder of OFA. And each weider resonantes with a different color ex. Original holder is white, Bruce is red, Banjo is orange, and All Might is …yellow
Also Way Big was inspired by Ultraman so any references have to lean in that direction
Guest: I really liked the arc, but I feel that Malware was quite relegated to the background, yes, it gave problems to Nezu and the heroes, and I liked how it merged several ships into one and shows that it can now combine technologies like AFO does with their quirks. But I feel like it didn't have the most interesting fight. And by the way, what about Malware? At one moment it is being destroyed by Jetray and at the next it stopped appearing.
Guardian-Sigil: Oooh Malware…we're not done with him
Tanico: Can't wait for the epilogue for this Arc. I'm excited to see what happens next. Btw my guesses for the other 6 new aliens Deku got were all wrong. Go figure I couldn't even get one right lol.
Question is the epilogue next chapter going to be when your going to be when post your AN announcement where you would be open to hearing ideas? I've seen a lot of good ideas reading the past comments especially ones for the future Khyber arc so I'm interested in hearing your thoughts about them.
Guardian-Sigil: hey you tried i mean it was a guess of 6 out of 30 so the odds were low
And yes/no I was going to elude to it and then post a separate chapter that goes into more details about that
Striker23: I don't know if it would be funny or cruel, but I imagine how Present Mic would be if he met Clancy. If you are already terrified that a lot of insects will crawl on your leg, I don't want to imagine seeing a guy completely covered in these and using them to attack. XD
Guardian-Sigil: Well he'd still win cause he'd freak out so bad i think he'd involuntarily scream so loud he'd bring an entire building down
Anon: I can't wait for the characters that will be introduced later, like Ester (plus Ester considering that she is half human like Mina and further expanding the perspective of the hybrids, and also giving her a Quirk) or Rook, will we see Pakmar? With the damage that Izuku causes to Bauman, they will get along very well. although it would also be great when they interact with Magister Labrid or how they endure Magister Prior Gilhil. although I'm also excited about how you introduced the Kid plumbers
Guardian-Sigil: Some of the most fun I get in this is adding more Ben 10 characters like Rook and Pakmar. I am still working out details between other Plumber characters and such. I will definitely add the Plumbers helpers but every idea I get changes and shifts and nothing sticks. It's not an issue of I have no idea how to use them but more like i have too many ideas on how to use them
Guest: A thought but you now have almost half the ben 10 alien roster and at this pace you will have them all long before the story ends. So after you have caught up do you plan on adding some original aliens or aliens from other media to the omnitrix roster?
Guardian-Sigil: As of now…no. I have a feeling that I will not be introducing all cannon aliens until the very end of the story or near the end we will have the entire collection. So there probably won't be a chance to even introduce oc aliens
Guest: HOLY SHIT, THAT WAS OFF THE HOOOOOOK!
Very damn interesting what you're doing with OFA; 'Secret of Chromastone' is gonna be real different I bet. Tho I wish that the OFA issue could have been solved by Alien X, that could have ead to some very interesting character moments
Tho it makes sense for it to be this way honestly, because the reason Deku was so powerful with OFA was because of his creativity and admiration for Quirks
So what happened to letting people interpret their designs for the aliens? *smug emoji*
Sucks you didn't add three more aliens earlier so we could have a complete Playlist #3 and have, what I assume is the AF 9, be in their own playlist. Unless you wanna have them in their own playlist, and later on when Deku unlocks three more aliens we put in Playlist #3 to complete the set?
Fasttrack's accent, really took my off guard, that'll be interesting XD. Sucks you had them named right off the bat, we could have gotten some scenes of them brainstorm names; ey!
And speaking of which , really sucks you didn't use the same line from Brainstorm's debut, and maybe the scene from the reboot where Ben and Gwen name Jetray together, but with IzuOcha
Did you watch Hero Inside? Because that link I shared doesn't work anymore. You can still find videos on Youtube; seriously, I recommend you track it down, not just for inspiration, it's just so freaking good, I want more people to know about it
Ok, I know what that scene at the end was setting up, thank you in advance for the IzuOcha and Izuku getting some appreciation from his female classmates
Well, I was gonna save this till after you did SOTO, but given recent events I'll just do it now XD:
-When Deku gets Way Big and uses his laser, he should do it like Ultraman X's Xanadium Beam, except he would make the roman numeral for IX; his arms glow, he holds one vertical, he does the move and then connects them to form the X, leaving an energy trial of the vertical shape. He also says Kyu-Sha, reference to the number 9 and X's grunt Yi-Sha, and he instead of the technological patterns it's energy that resembles OFA's lightning
-If you do Vengeance of Vilgax, you could do a ROTTMNT reference. Remember in the finale when Splinter's soul punched Shredder and then went back with a thumbs up? I'm picturing that exact scene but with Way Big and Deku scanning him. Given what just happened, I think it's likely you WILL do something Vengeance of Vilgax-esque with the 'escaped geno-archetypes'
-Way Big's predator should look like Zetton
-Deku doing the Algebra dance from Power Rangers 2016. Could be as Way Big, Upgrade becoming a giant robot again or just as himself
-Way Big could fight like Ultraman, with his Judo throws
-Sometime ago I found out Kaminari's Japanese VA was the voice of Ultraman Z. Please make him do references when Way Big shows up, or maybe he gets a different Support Item inspired by Deku that lets him shoot a beam, and the way he does it resembles Ultraman Z's Zestium Beam, maybe he also knows about the Roman alphabet and numbers
-To'kustars should do exaggerated poses and movements, because Ultraman. As well as do the pose from the Rising Sequence, even the bit where he moves his arm and head; it's a warrior stance
IzuOcha moment: While they were training Deku and Ochako talked about their future hero names, and one of Ochako's options was Gravattack but she thought it would be lame while Deku liked, and so when he picks the name and everyone says it sucks he defends it furiously, even more so than his other names, which surprises everyone with how serious he is about
Line for when Deku gets Gravattack and Ochako gets jealous: "Hey, come on 'Chako, green is supposed to be MY color"
Could Gravattack completely negate Ochako's gravity Quirk?
Deku uses Spidermonkey to beat Ochako like how Spiderman beat Dr Strange in No Way Home
When Spidermonkey appears, you have to make Supaidaman references
Good jokes for Brainstorm: The one-liner Kevin uses in Brooklyn 99 when he punches someone in the throat, as well as the dirt bag comment, with either, Iida, Shoto, Momo or all of them agreeing that it sounds more like a compliment
Another good joke could be that scene from Big Bang Theory where Sheldon tried insulting that one guy about his mom
Brooklyn 99 reference: Momo creates a kerfuffle (oh damn!) and following that up, Brainstorm has a rock hard brain!
Brainstorm line: Unorthodox display of hubris, but very well (weird flex, but ok. That line is not mine)
Ideas for Brainstorm's character: Is Nezu if he was an asshole, does Joseph Joestar's 'Your next line is' thing, he also acts like Captain Holt, one great example is the TRIPLE DRAGON bit, maybe he could form visual aids with his electricity to give his thoughts shape and spells it out, maybe some Megamind references, like after he hurts his brain he gets dyslexia. Maybe he even throws Aizawa the 'logical ruse' line back at him? He does like Dr Strange and looks into possible futures by doing calculations. He even tries to do the one finger thing from Endgame, but can't because he has a claw, tho that could also be a Jujutsu Kaisen reference, with him thinking fast like Todo
You said there was an Aggregor-like character you wanted to use, and I can imagine who it is, so it would make sense to have Bivalvan and the other Andromeda 5 show up; and him being a 'water bender' is a good reason for Aggregor to want his power, and it's not like all Orishan can do it, Bivalvan can do it because he's an ecceptional specimen among other Orishan, which would be the same for the others. And the reason why THIS Aggregor would want to absorb them could have something to do with how the Omnitrix seems to be able to interact with Quirks now
I'm didn't say Izuku would consider joining the Knights, I said he probably realizes that if he didn't find the Omnitrix and made friends he would have most definitely joined them
When we get to the dorms, will you adapt that Brooklyn 99 episode where Jake and Amy make a bet as to who will move in to who's apartment? There is a lot of good material to get out of that; the bit with the towel is KamiJirou incarnate
And when we finally see Deku's room post-All Might, will it be full of JoJo, cuz his VA voiced Narancia? Or well, more accurately, will it be full of JoJo music references?
Like, he has posters and records that are from the music references from Part 5? Like, his favorite band of all time is Aerosmith, the Rolling Stones' Sticky Fingers album, Jimmy Hendrix's Purple Haze and Purple Haze Feedback songs, Prince's Gold Experience album and Spice Girls being a close second, followed by The Moody Blues and Sex Pistols; and he hates Little Feat, Clash, The Talking Heads and King Crimson
And adding to that, he could have a Special Move named Aerosmith; maybe he uses Jury Rigg to build himself a small bi-plane, a Lil' Bomber if you will, and he says 'Volare Via' as a finisher
I can't remember, did Nana know about Xylene? Not that she was an alien, but that she existed and what her deal with Gran Torino was?
Would Bakugou fight Ochako when they get to the dorms instead of Deku? That could be a good set up for the Alien Force team (did you know their team name actually was Alien Force?); Deku could show up to stop the fight before it escalates as Humungousaur, and get the two to shut up and listen to him, and that could be the catalyst on having Nezu making him team leader. Ochako and Bakugou could still get house arrest but Deku gets a pass after the Megawhatt thing gets revealed
I hope they explain to Aizawa their reasons for keeping secrets, and that they told Izuku to lie
I honestly thought that Vilgax wanted to take over Earth so he could scan every human with powerful Quirks with the Omnitrix, and forcefully breed people so they're off-springs could make even stronger Quirks for him to scan for his army. Not even just strong ones but weak ones that could work well together, like with the Bakugous; Mitsuki and Masaru's Quirks are pretty useless on their own but combined gave Kacchan his powerful Explosion Quirk
Guardian-Sigil: Oh yeah I was always planning to change up the "Secret of Chromastone." Yeah sore about the OFA issue but it was getting tiresome hearing everyone bring it up every chapter like i didn't know that it was a thing
Hey fanart is an exception did you want just silhouettes of the aliens? ;)
Yeah i know i should have added 3 more but i was struggling to meet a balance if i could back i would have added Jurry-Rig i think maybe. I would just consider these new 9 as their own set and then the next 3 are added to the previous set (Playlist 33)
Yeah i wanted to get their names out right away especially cause of all the action. Causing waiting to call them by name and use aliases like brain crab or blue cat would have gotten annoying to read
No i did not watch Hero Inside, sorry. How can i watch it?
I gotta look up this stuff for Way Big because it sounds like gold
Gravattack could prob negate Ochaco's Zero-Gravity
If they fought i'm sure it would go similarly but then again she might have some new tricks by then
I forgot who said but I love the idea of having Brainstorm act like Capt. Holt just with a british accent and i love it
Idk what Izuku will have in his room yet, still on the fence with that
No, Xylene entered the picture after Nana's death. Remember All Might was already in America when she arrived in Japan
Honestly i don't think a fight is appropriate anymore between any of the chatters as you will maybe see next chapter (whenever it's done). But who knows i may change my tune about that
And yes i am well aware their team name was Alien Force, i've been writing this story for over 4 years I am aware of that
Yes that was Vilgax's plan hence his interest in Earth
Anon: Seeing that Todoroki's new technique worked, will he ask for changes to his suit or does he plan to train on his own?
Guardian-Sigil: Yes he will be getting a more practical costume change
Guest: With how you described Fasttrack, it almost seems like you went with Fanart like this that I found on Pinterest instead of the Canon look, which is not a bad look for him admittedly~
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Guardian-Sigil: Yeah that's coincidently how I described him but you can also look at the fanart made for the previous chapter and see him there too
Guest: It would have been cool if Fastrack's tail acted as the gear lever and showing where the gearshift pose comes from.
Guardian-Sigil: I did consider that as well but trying to describe that occurring every time sounded tedious in my head
Guest: I know this is random but it just popped into my head and I think it would be funny. The next time Ikkaku makes an appearance you should have one of his teammates play the Narwals song as a joke as her fights.
Guardian-Sigil: Hahaha! I can see one of Class 1-A making the reference
Guest: Now that more of the class knows the truth you should have them start to visit other planets soon. Honestly some of my favorite Ben 10 episodes where when Ben was helping people on other planets because they really showed that he was a hero for the people of every planet not just earth.
Guardian-Sigil: For now let's just keep the story centered on Earth. There will be some visits into space but they will be…limited
DeadCool14: I myself recommend Aquaman 2 and Black Adam, they're really fun
Could Deku rig the S.A.G.E gun's trigger? Like after a few times he gets it stolen he decides to alter it so it has to be shot a specific way only he knows and if someone pulls the trigger they get shocked? And adding to that, if he does also turn it into a Halo Energy Sword, could he also rig it to turn on for him? That one is mostly a reference to Red vs Blue, but it's also sounds like something he'd do
And speaking of Red vs Blue, when you introduce EightEight, could I ask that you make her like Tex? Well actually that you adapt this fight "Red vs. Blue S8 Tex fights Reds and Blues in awesome action sequence Rooster Teeth" to show that she's even more dangerous and skilled to SixSix and SevenSeven. And maybe she becomes obssessed with Deku after he beats her with Gravattack,as she's never been beaten before
Oh and fact about SevenSeven, he's not as deformed as SixSix is; SixSix just modified himself to a horrific degree
Gotta say the Lego Movie reference took my off guard XD
Have you seen Dan Da Dan?
Also goddamn, through all that excitement I forgot, All Might legit lost that arm didn't he?
When we get to meeting the parents about the dorms, will there be one of those misunderstandings where Hisashi thinks All Might is interested in Inko, and when he tries to clear it up he thinks he's insulting her for being heavy, and then defends her furiously?
Check out Frava8 on tumblr. They have good MHA art, it's not much so it won't take long. And it even has some B99 references, my favorite is one where they do the 'spilled beans' bit.
A really good one is the 'old ass eyes' moment with Hawks and Endeavor. But I imagine it with Hisashi and Endeavor, with Endeavor adding "And you're one to talk, you're the one that wears glasses" and Hisashi responds "Yeah, but I look good in them, when I was at UA the other day some students called me a DILF, which I'm pretty sure means something positive"
Do you think Ryukyu is a fan of Cinder?
Will Brainstorm levitate? Because he and Psychobos do that a sometimes
Will Deku train flying as Chromastone? And if so can you do the scene from Invincible where Mark flies for the first time at night? Because I feel like that one should be a very majestic flight scene since it must feel different and even more freeing than flying as Big Chill or Stinkfly, because he is not bound by the wings and can move however he pleases
And speaking of Chromastone, will he also have different powers? Like, maybe he can make hard light constructs like MCU Ms Marvel?
When Deku and the others do become a team and get their Plumbers Badges, will they be modified to have the Omnitrix symbol, to signify they're a special team? Then Deku could do that with the Proto-Tool and the Proto-Truk when Rook shows up
Will do a chapter like The Beast Within episode from Teen Titans?
Humungousaur line: When I'm through with you, you're gonna be Humungou-SORE
Would Deku steal Shishida's Re-Beast move for Humungousaur, and for when he learns to quick change?
Will the recalibrated Omnitrix give Ripjaws a respirator?
Since he's already here, I'll throw in a fun fact I found it: In the And Beyond episode for Jetray, it says that his bones contain helium, which explains how he's sometimes seen just levitating in the air in the show; I love it when they give explanations for little stuff like that
Guardian-Sigil: Perhaps he can alter the S.A.G.E. Gun, we shall see
I also need to rewatch Red vs Blue it's been tooooooooo long
I want to watch Dan Da Dan but i've been tooooooooo busy (and distracted)
Yes, All Might has only one arm now
No i'm not going that route with Hisashi and All Might since that's supposed to be a meaningful moment
I'll check Frava8 out sometime
Naw, i don't see Ryukyu being a fan of Cinder since to the hero world he is an unknown
No, Brainstorm won't levitate my headcannon is that Psychobos upgraded himself with cybernetics which in tandem with his electrical waves allows him to hover
I'm sure Deku will fly and train his new aliens. I did consider the hardlight route via Miss Marvel for him as well but I'm on the fence about it
Maybe they will alter their badges, not sure yet
I love the Beast Within chapter and i was thinking of combining that with Benwolf/Blitzwolfer if possible but no promises as of now
Deku is known to copy moves so I'm sure he'll learn something from Shishida and others
Yes, Ripjaws will get a respirator
DeadCool14 again: Vilgax and AFO being vanquished is definitely a victory, but it's also a double edged sword. Just like how AFO and All Might being taken out of the picture made random villains certain groups more bold in their crimes, Vilgax being beaten is gonna leave a massive power vacuum in the universe, one that would make the plans of a, certain species, easier to accomplish
Would the moon become a significant location for the story? I mean, it's not just where Vilgax was beaten and Deku's legend across the universe began but also is where the trio met Simian, and he could become a very significant character in Izuku and Ochako's journeys. Not to mention that, there's a trope in Japanese writing, the phrase: "tsuki ga kirei desu ne"; which means "the moon is beautiful tonight". It's used as an indirect love confession since it sounds similar to "I love you". And with how the moon is very much connected to gravity you can see where I'm going with this lol
Oh and if you are considering doing romance, I recommend using My Adventures with Superman as an example, they do romance very naturally and in a way where it doesn't mess with the main story, keeping the drama to a minimum, also it's very wholesome and funny. Like, a lot of Lois and Clark moments I can definitely see Deku and Ochako doing
Would the Omnitrix still mistransform Deku even after recalibration? Maybe because of OFA?
Oh! Maybe you could use that for Destroy All Aliens if you decide to make it
Could some of the electric aliens do Pokemon moves, like Electro-Ball and Volt Tackle? The former I could see Feedback doing, maybe like how Electro did it in TASM2, and the latter Shocksquatch
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Guardian-Sigil: As they say when a power vacuum occurs in nature something will takes its place
Dude please stop bringing up romance. I GET IT!
And no I think mis transformations are over sadly
Pokemon moves are already how i decide their attacks, I just try hiding the names ;)
BlueRanger-Lyric: WOW!~ That was one epic chapter, both of them are, so much has happened in both of them, especially when Vilgax was involved, though I'm a little bummed out that we didn't get to find out what the last two Quirks Vilgax has was before his defeat by the hands of Way Big, but I hope we will get to see what those two Quirks are at some point in the future, and after looking at the artwork of "Deku 9 Unleashed" and seeing the designs of each of them, I'm curious if that's actually what they will look like throughout the Fanfic, or if those looks will be temporary, because while I do like the more traditional looks of NRG, Spidermonkey, Way Big and Green Eyes for all his Aliens, I do like the creature looks and additions to Fasttrack and hope it sticks, and that there's a close enough Fanart for it, and I also so a Comment from that Art Piece that talks about how each of the 9 New Aliens represents OFA Users, and thinking about my earlier question and what you would have as Izuku's 10th starter Alien, I'm now curious, if that was the case, what Alien would you choose to be the 10th New Alien that would represent Deku as a OFA User? And as for your question of what I would like to see in the next chapter, I would definitely like to see a sweet moment between Izuku and his Mother as they embrace each other, with Hisashi joining the hug too, and maybe a ship hint between Izuku and Ochaco, to show that they might care for each other more than they might realise, but aren't sure just yet, and maybe a moment between Izuku and Katsuki as they start a new chapter of their friendship together in this alien world, but anyway, that's all I have to say for now, so I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next, keep up the good work!
Guardian-Sigil: If there was a 10th alien then it probably would have been Feedback, Grey Matter, or something. Basically it would have been an alien i already introduced cause those that best represent Deku himself have already been used
Grimm: It would be really cool if Bakugou had a Rex Splode moment in Invincible season 2. where he loads up his AP Shot or a more compact version of his Grenadier Bracers to show that he has changed as a person and learned from his mistakes.
Guardian-Sigil: Are you a manga reader? If so then i think we can agree that he had that moment near the end there
DeadCool14 again x2: Another great reason to have Deku go to Ryukyu for his internship is just the dynamic he could have with Nejire in the first place. They're both so much in each other's wavelengths they would be practically siblings, maybe they could brain storm moves for his aliens and even solo combo moves now that he can Quick Change, their constant interactions could even make Deku less nervous around girls, and maybe Ochako a little jealous? Heck he could even start being unknowingly flirty, until he realizes and folds immediately XD
And again, the dynamic between Atom Smasher and Cyclone in Black Adam is perfect for those two, it's great; they do this team-up move in the movie and it's perfect for them, heck, Deku could probably do it by himself
Bet you're happy with having Quick Change now, now you can do as many aliens as you want, especially ones that you don't use often
Ngl, I really expected Eri to name NRG, because it's just so simple a name but she spent a lot of time thinking about it and thought it was really clever, and Deku just couldn't not use. And when people call him out on how bad it is he says it was Eri and everyone changes to loving it XD
Oh well, there's still Bloxx, I guess
Will Midnight tease Deku about Fasttrack? Besides being a cat, she mentions girls love accents, which could be a running gag, Deku even says 'chicks dig accents' trying to be flirty before folding
The class have a betting pool on which aliens have accents and what accent it is
Sucks you didn't use some of the lines from the aliens' debut during the fight
I appreciate the helmet being v1, so it can look like his mask or the Ultra Ben visor later on. Oh and, where did his new suit come from? Did the Omnitrix make that?
I can see Momo and Brainstorm being rivals, he's contantly one-upping her and being condescending towards her, which irks her because she's usually always the smartest in the room. She fully separates him from Deku as a person. And I can see him always patting people on the head like they were children, he even does it to Aizawa and Nezu, and they can't say anything about it because he always has a point XD
Why does Brainstorm have two sets of Shinomori's scars?
Why is Gutrot such a scaredy cat? I thought he was supposed to be like Columbo?
And yeah, what's with Fasttrack being an Aussie? XD
Will Camino Ward become much more significant? Lotta things can come from it, like, Billions and Nemesis towers, and even Undertown, both because aliens are called to help repair it faster in secret and due to Deku defeating Vilgax; which is a reference to to the conflicting ideas of why and how Undertown was formed, because according to Derrick J. Wyatt, Undertown was created after Way Big's fight against Evil Way Big in Destroy All Aliens destroyed a large section of Bellwood. Alien workers were brought in to rebuild the city and these workers built a small camp underneath Bellwood that grew to the size of a city over the course of a few years. But according to Matt Wayne, Undertown is a recent settlement that was built because the events of The Ultimate Enemy: Part 2 may have made Earth more attractive to aliens.
Guardian-Sigil: Again i already know who Izuku is gonna intern with and it will not involve Ryukyu. Sorry but i already know how i'm gonna do this internship
Yup, i'm glad i have the Quick Change
I'm sure Eri will get a chance to name an alien
The new suit was from Vilgax. When Deku and All Might first woke up in the ship i described their i guess space/prisoner outfits that Vilgax's drones slapped onto them
Why does Brainstorm have two sets of Shinomori's scars? Because it makes it asymmetrical and since they aren't scars but accents, think freckles for Brainstorm that happen to represent Shinomori's scars
Why is Gutrot such a scaredy cat? Cause that bit was funny, he'll be scrappier later
What's with Fasttrack being an Aussie? Same, i thought it'd be funny and a way to make him mooooore distinct
Will Camino Ward become much more significant? Potentially i was gonna have most of that stuff be in Musutafu where Izuku lives and where U.A. is but i like the idea of using a disaster zone as the place to make something new so i have to give it some thought
Saldinet: Thank you for these great chapters, as frustrating as it is to wait a month for each chapter worth this great story so well done that even the original authors would envy you Excellent way to improve fasttrack since it was only the "the cheap copy of XRL8" but you stressed that it was less fast than XRL8 but better fighter, able to hear things at a distance and convert the blows he receives into kinetic energy to fight back
I also liked how you presented Way Big the third most powerful alien in Ben 10, the way that this illustrated similar to All might and his fight with Vilgax was much better than the original and definitely better than the reboot
Finally the omnitrix recalibrated and did not lose its previous aliens that was something I feared but I have a couple of doubts:
-Does the omnitrix already have the function of "genetic repair"? and will it have an effect on the nomus?
-Now izuku will shout out the name of every alien?
That Nue wished luck to izuku shows that he still has hope and good that izuku felt it, hopefully izuku reflect a little on it and think about saving Henzu, I did not expect that he took red and sevenseven and the omnitrix data, I think Vilgax would use them to create in Nemetrix
Speaking of Vilgax, it undoubtedly showed that he was a greater threat than AFO since they faced him with everything and barely stood up to him. I liked Vilgax's seventh quirk, it may not seem like a big deal but it is perfect for him since he can find any enemy as long as he is alive and has a heart but I would have liked to see the last two which I thought would be "flying" and "launches explosives." His little fight against brainstorm made me think: do I read Vilgax's mind and does that "devilish smile" have to do with his past? because I love that Vilgax sees himself as a devastating and inevitable force of nature but I would like to know what made him come to that conclusion.
The only thing I didn't like about the chapters was how Izuku ignored his father again, that is, Hisashi runs with tears towards his son, the son that a day ago he didn't think he would see again and yet Izuku only focused on attending. to All Might, I thought Izuku was over the whole abandonment thing.
Finally, I loved Izuku's new mask, maybe you could make a complete image of Izuku with his jacket, shield, blaster, mask and the recalibrated omnitrix
Are you planning to change Nana Shimura's quirk? Since Uraraka can fly, the "float" quirk is useless.
Since the "guardians of the galaxy" are not there, do you think you could apply Rocket's story to Nezu since even though Nezu was a character with an aura of mystery, they did not tell us anything about him and it would be a way to introduce the "Rooters" like their creators
Now that Psyphon has fled, I was wondering if I could bring General Grievous to take his place as Vilgax's right-hand man? He was my favorite clone wars character and he could be the general of his empire
Apart from the Halloween special, could you also do a Christmas one? combining the Christmas episodes of both series
Guardian-Sigil: Believe me i'm frustrated too i would love to post everyday but realistically i'm only human
I like the changes i did for Fasttrack too, it took a while. I had several ideas for him but i like what was decided in the end. It felt fair and creative
And yes, moving forward izuku will shout out his alien's names
I like izuku's new mask too, i'm sure we'll get a full getup art eventually
I think i'm keeping the Quirk Float but i'm gonna try to change up how it's used. I have no idea how to do that but i'm working on it
I actually have an idea for grievous but that's a long ways off for sure
So yeah, no Xmas special, sorry
Anon again: I find it curious how Psyphon had told Shigaraki that they were both equal, but that is very far from reality, Tomura has his own ambition apart from AFO's plans while Psyphon only follows Vilgax as his servant. one was forced to leave his master against his will, while the other had the opportunity to help but decided to escape to save himself. One will manage to have a loyal army and a power that will put everyone under his feet, while the other will barely succeed on his own and beyond illegal trafficking he is little threat. a very curious parallelism.
Guardian-Sigil: it is but still there are still so many differences
Guest: Just a couple of ideas I have had for the story you can take them or leave them if you want.(Minor spoiler for the new movie ahead)
First as I was playing Destiny 2 I thought that the coalition that united against the Witness would be cool in this story. I mean just think about it the armies and champions of many worlds united together for the final battle with Vilgax and All for One with the fate of the Galaxy or even the universe on the line. I think that would be epic.
Second I just saw the new My Hero Academia movie and it occurred to me that in one of your pervious Q responded you mentioned that you plan to go off canon by the time of the first war. If that is true then you wont be able to do the You're Next story. If that does end up being the case then you should include Anna and Giuilo earlier in the story. I mean weren't their 1A kids in Europe already during the World Hero Mission. I mean you aren't afraid to give other 1A kids their own story arcs. You could do that here if you wanted to. Have them try to save Anna with Giuilo help before the Villains can use her.
Again this is just my two cents on ways you could take the story going forward. Either way this is still by far one of the best fanfics around. Keep up the good word.
Guardian-Sigil: maybe it's too early to say
Guest: Now that Todoroki has access to Pluto White fire, will we see ice versions of Endeavor's techniques? such as prominence Freeze or Flashfreeze: Jet iceberg, etc. It was something that Shoto always lacked.
Guardian-Sigil: Perhaps I definitely want to get inventive with this new technique of his
Guest: Which Japanese voice actor would you give to Hisashi?
Guardian-Sigil: I am about to disappoint you but I am majoridly listen to dub
I know I know but I'm a mix bag: most anime I watch as dub but some I can only listen to as sub
Blame it on the fact that most of the time I watch anime i am doing something else like writing this very story so I need a way to partially listen and understand what it going on
This is just a long winded way of me admitting that…I don't know the Japanese Voice actors as well as I do the English ones
Guest: I was looking at the Wiki and found exclusive villains from the video game My Hero Academia: Clash! Heroes Battle, more specifically in the Volcano Thiefs and Wild Villains groups (these particularly since they are characters from Umagadoki, Horikoshi's previous manga) and it would be cool to put them as cameo or idiotic villains (more Volcano thiefs, you can even put them in the fistrick group ).
Guardian-Sigil: Oooh you beat me to the punch cause i was already planning for them to show up
Anon again x2: Have you seen My Hero Academia you're next? For me it was better than the third movie.
Guardian-Sigil: Yes, I saw it opening night!
Guest: Hi, I just saw your entire story on the recommendation of a friend and I didn't have high expectations since most of the Ben 10 x BNHA stories are about Ben entering the UA after Omniverse or the Omnitrix being transported to the BNHA universe and they showed more fanservice than coherence but yours has it all: good start, coherence, mystery, drama, references to other alien series and other cartoons, action, good follow-up of events between both series, character development better than the original making Deku not so submissive and even improving Bakugo who is not seen often. I hope to see how far you go.
I'd like to ask you a few questions and give you some ideas I had if you don't mind:
- Will Deku's former classmates and teachers ever apologize or congratulate him for being a hero? Like Ben's classmates did?
- Will Deku's classmates and teachers ever find out what Bakugo did to him? And is he going to be punished for it? I always believed that he should suffer some punishment for that and he had to accept it since that is called responsibility, maturity and character evolution.
- Will you put the Black Order as Vilgax's lackeys?
- Can you make the Endeavor fan an alien boy and instead of his friends encouraging him to meet him, his parents are the ones telling him not to talk to him because they don't trust him?
- Are you going to introduce Phil as Hisashi's former classmate? I liked that little arc of how an old friend became corrupted, but then came back as a monster and refused to change. I suggest this to create a "dilemma" regarding Kurogiri and which side he's on: The lost friend who can still be saved (Henzu) or the man who's already set on his corrupt path and can only be stopped by
- When Deku unlocks Whampire, will Toga fall in love with him even more? Since that alien sucks blood too. This is so that Deku understands better how Toga must feel and wants to help her along with Uraraka.
- Will you give Vilgax his "giant squid" form either in his real body or in the "Quirk world"?
- Are you going to include Primus? I know that many people didn't like that episode to the point of erasing it from Omniverse, but I did like that idea since it shows the Omnitrix as a more complex device than it is initially believed to be and how Primus is the "heart" of the Omnitrix.
Since you've already introduced half of Ben's aliens, but considering how much content is left, I was wondering if you're going to include some discarded or non-canon aliens or those seen in some fanmades?
- Will you give AFO a given name? He said his last name was Shigaraki, but we never found out his first name if he had one. But what about AKU? Which means "evil" even without a nickname he represents evil incarnate.
- Will AFO discover that Henzu and Deku stole his watch?
- Can you give Shoto the power of freezing fire and the Ultimate Big Chill line of "fire so cold it burns"?
- Could you make Deku have those visions of Vilgax promising to come back and destroy everything he loves? It would be like the omnitrix warning Deku that Vilgax will come back.
- Will you give Vilgax a "theme music"? AFO has his dark opera, it is only fair that he also has his own music that plays when he attacks.
- When will humanity discover the aliens? During the Highbreed invasion? The Incurseans invasion? Or when Vilgax returns?
- When Vilgax returns could you introduce Atomix? Since he is the second most powerful alien and I really didn't like that it was Diamondhead who defeated him when we already saw that that form is no match for Vilgax.
- Will the attack that Vilgax gave Deku on his side leave him with a scar like All Might?
- When Uraraka uses One For All at 100%, could you make her take the "anodite form"?
-Mina will use her emotional powers against Gigantomachia? Just like she did with Fun Gus
- Will you give Hisashi a personal feud like the one between All Might and AFO? Maybe saying that Vilgax killed Hisashi's father in his early days as a plumber and that's why Hisashi dedicated himself to ruining Vilgax as much as he could and that's why he left to get Vilgax away from Earth for fear that the same thing would happen to his son, to give a personal touch to the new feud between Deku and Vilgax.
-When All Might and Gran Torino talk about Nana Shimura could you add Hisashi saying that he and Nana made the same mistake of leaving their families believing that they would be safe and happy but they ended up hurting them with the only difference that Hisashi had the opportunity to repair the bond that he cut and Nana did not causing her son's resentment to be transmitted to Shigaraki turning him into the villain he is now and that in another time or other circumstances Deku would have ended up the same? Since in the original Deku kept saying that he and Shigaraki were the same just because they dreamed of being heroes, but nothing more, although I know that they will not be "the rivals" in your story
- Will you do a "body swap" episode? You can do the one where Charmcaster tries to switch bodies, but Bakugo interferes and they switch, you can have them do silly things to humiliate each other, but in the end, they go back to normal. This is to "improve their friendship" and to have a laugh.
-If Deku's "weakness" now is resistance, then how about he does his internship with Mirko? Since we know that this woman never tires of fighting, even if her limbs are torn off, that's why she's my favorite heroine. If you want, can you base it on the manga "team up mission"?\
-When you reintroduce Animo, could you do it by applying the crossover with the "Saturdays"? I liked the idea of that special, and it would also be a good way to mark a rivalry between Koda and Animo, one arguing that he wants to improve the animals and the other responding that he has no right to do anything to them to give some prominence to Koda. I also think that Deku and Zack would get along very well.
-When Zsskayr escapes from the Omnitrix, can you have him have a fight with Tokoyami and Dark Shadow? The latter telling him that they are the same, dark beings that need physical bodies and that he should take control of Tokoyami like he did at the camp and that that is his nature. You know, to give him his "screen time" like you did with Kaminari, Jiro and Shinso.
-Although I consider Bakugo to be the worst character in an anime, the way you've handled him is already impressive in itself, so how about you replicate the Vegeta vs Jiren fight, only in this case it would be Bakugo vs Vilgax and instead of giving him that power up that came out of nowhere, make him fight only with his willpower while he remembers a certain boy who was also mercilessly slaughtered for the pleasure of the cruel bully in front of him. You could even apply the "Vegeta burial" and have Bakugo say the phrase "you are Number 1"
- Did you see the movie "Paul"? Could you play the scene in which the ship crushes the president of the HPSC
- Will you make Deku a teacher at the end of your story? I think the reason why many didn't like that is because it didn't seem like he chose that job or saw it as an "alternative path" but rather it was more out of pity for him since he lost his Quirk and "couldn't be a hero anymore" hence the super suit at the last minute since once again Deku made others feel sorry for him and the others helped him. Personally, I don't mind that idea, it's just that they never gave us any indication that he would or could be a teacher since he never got with anyone to advise him or instruct him in anything, whether it was with class A or B or the children he saved and I don't think his endless murmurs count. Ironically, they did the opposite of what they did with Uraraka's ship; that is, from the beginning they indicated that they would be a couple and it didn't happen. It would be better for Deku to be like Aizawa, that is, be a teacher and a hero and marry Uraraka, which would be a rebuttal to the original ending.
- What if you make a fusion between AFO, Vilgax and Malware, meaning that Vilgax takes over AFO's Quirk and equips himself with Malware and together they could be called "Malgax One" which would mean: (Only Galactic Mistake)
Guardian-Sigil: Thank you and you have a good friend, you should trust them more. They know what's good for ya
I'd love to answer your questions to the best of my abilities please for give my answers though since I try to minimize spoilers or sometimes I haven't thought that far ahead into the story's future
1. Deku's former classmates and teachers won't apologize or congratulate him for being a hero? At most maybe we'll get some references to them but nothing in person
2. No, punishment at this point for things done so far in the past feels unnecessary and drag the pace down. It'll feel like backtracking
3. No, since Vilgax has the Negative Nine which i plan to give a revolving roster, think like how Spider-man's Sinister Six has rotating members
4. Maybe, i will think on it
5. I have a few ideas for Phil for sure, he will be connected to Hisashi somehow for sure
6. I'm sure that'll be the case
7. Not sure yet, it is not off the table
8. Primus is a sore spot for some Ben Ten fans, and I would like to add a "version" of Primus. Basically Primus will be "important" but maybe it has a different relationship to the Omnitrix
9. Sorry but no OC aliens will be appearing. Well except for one but tha single one will be an exception. Otherwise I rather stay to cannon aliens. Plus readers get confused on which aliens Izuku has already so adding OCs would just add even more confusion
10. Prob not, we want to think of him as a monster a demon as it were and a real name would make him human
11. Maybe or maybe he already knows… Who's to say?
12. Eh, he already has a brand new technique as it were but the concept behind his new technique was partially inspired by Ultimate Big Chill
13. Ooooh, I'm way ahead of you, actually in a way i set this up already to occur eventually
14. If i give Vilgax a theme song it would have to be "Kai's theme" from Kung Fu Panda. No joke that theme lives rent free in my head and pops into my mind every day; it's a curse
15. Come one I can't tell you that, that would ruin the fun
16. No promises…seriosuly i can't promise a thing. I haven't gotten that far in my planning yet
17. I have to reread my own chapter cause of my unprompted hiatus i forgot if that happened
18. I would like to do a version of an anodite form for sure but with an MHA spark to it
19. It's an option but manipulating him was Shinso's thing too
20. I wasn't gonna make their backstory that personal. It's more like how a police officer and a mob boss despise each other. And then you have the mob boss go after the officer's family (i.e. izuku) and it escalates their already flaring tensions. Plus i had a different spin on Hisashi's…early life story so this may not work plus i canonical had Vilgax admit he did not know where earth was till now
It's not a bad idea it just the story itself already contradicted it
21. I'm sure the parallel will occur. But pointing that directly out would kinda break the nuisance of the story. Kinda like how it was never out right said that both Deku and Tenko were given quirks and were mentored by their respective symbols. We as the audience don't need to be told that, we get it
22. I would like to do a body swap episode but i'm not sure what it could add without being total filler. Maybe it gives a villain and a hero student a new perspective of the other's situation or maybe a new alien is unlocked or maybe it's like the JLU's body swap episode between Lex Luther and the Flash where both parties get new vital info from the villains/heroes
23. I have someone else in mind for his internship. But not to worry i would like to incorporate the Team Up missions when I can (at least the ones that involve Izuku)
24. At some point i would like to do that crossover but no promises. I want to give animo some solo villain time that he so very much deserves
25. Hahaha oh i'm sure they'll cross paths in a dark alley;)
26. Um, i don't watch Dragon Ball…i know i know i'm a terrible human that lacks culture
27. No i haven't seen the movie Paul. Is it good? Do you recommend it?
28. I always knew Deku would be a teacher in some regard, I mean the name of the anime is My Hero "ACADEMIA." It's in the name. Besides before the ending came out, one of my ideas for my own was to establish that Deku even in my story became a teacher of sort for a new class of heroes. Plus, i'm assuming between you writing this and me answering the new added chapters to the epilogue was released so maybe your thoughts have changed
29. I'm sure smoking of shenanigans will go down I mean it kinda has to, i just have to figure out the how part Also that name is spot on
muffinseahorse: You know, I think Hokkaido would be a great option for a Japanese version of Omnitrix City, for good reasons: Hokkaido has the land needed to build a sprawling city with well-planned infrastructure. This space allows for sustainable development, avoiding the overcrowding issues found in more densely populated regions. The region's access to natural resources such as forests, rivers, and fertile land can support renewable energy initiatives like hydroelectric power, solar panels, and sustainable agriculture. Hokkaido's existing balance between urban and natural environments makes it ideal for creating a city that integrates eco-friendly practices with urban life, fostering stability and long-term growth. and compared to other regions like Tokyo Bay, which is susceptible to typhoons and rising sea levels, Hokkaido is more stable in terms of natural threats, adding to its potential for a sustainable, resilient city. Hokkaido's moderate climate, ample space for development without overtaxing resources, and reduced risk of catastrophic natural events make it an excellent choice for a stable, enduring city. Sure it may lack the immediate connectivity and established infrastructure found in the Tokyo area, which could slow down initial progress in scientific and technological development, but that can be mostly handled.
Guardian-Sigil: I'll keep that in mind
Guest: Reading how is going this story, do you have plans to include Rook Blonko? Maybe he would be like a new rookie who was trained by Cinder. Besides, even if he is like Iida, he would be different like having difficulties to understand humans behavior. I think he would be introduced during Overhaul Arc like a new support.
Guardian-Sigil: Yes, absolutely. If you looked closely Patelliday and Hisashi eluded to him in a recent chapter
Remember? When the Plumbers arrived at Plumber Base in front of the U.A. heroes and students? It's around the same line where they explain why Melissa Shield couldn't come
Guest: Welp, that's it, the last of Ben's Aliens have been given ultimates, now they have a complete list to choose from if you decide to give Albedo Ultimates in this Fanfic among other Artists that's made Ultimates~
Guardian-Sigil: Yes they have, I have a lot to think about
Anon again x3: Sometimes I get overwhelmed by the amount of requests people send you to make fics when you're already very busy with it. makes me think they see you as an artist and ask for requests and with how detailed and long they are they can easily do them themselves.
Guardian-Sigil: I know right?! At this point I can't even address them anymore
But I can't be too harsh about it, some people just need to get their ideas out there even if in small ways
DeadCool14 again x3: Sucks you named them all now, could have resulted in some funny name ideas, like calling Chromastone Night Light, as a reference to Ms Marvel, or to Jetray's prototype name: Bluestreak
Will Brainstorm call Aizawa out on being a hypocrite for talking about self-preservation, when he himself is not sleeping well and also said himself that his well-being irrelevant and coming to teach class while being covered in bandages?
Will you adapt the character of Sunny? You know, the copy paste of Gwen? Maybe she could be Mina's annoying cousin, that could work for a funny one-off adventure
Will the S.A.G.E gun turn itself into a respirator for Ripjaws? Side-note: If he's ever on land, could he use his tail for combat? Like, he jumps and merges his legs into his tail to slap them?
Would Deku still have a chapter and a half of required reading in Plumber Academy? Because Rook would have graduated before they added info about Deku, right? Unless every Plumber is required to read it even after they graduated
Now that this is all over, will the kids be assigned as the Alien Force team? If they do, they could have the Omnitrix symbol as a logo instead of the Red Spot to separate them from the Plumbers, and to indicate that Deku is the leader. It could be done for mostly marketing reasons, as a way to replace All Might as the unnofficial "Protector of Earth" (get it?), since after beating Vilgax that symbol is gonna become much more well-known across the universe.
But besides that, I can also see Nezu making Deku the leader after seeing him stop the fight between Ochako and Bakugou; because that just HAS to happen, right? I imagine that maybe around when it starts, Humungousaur shows up and grabs them, and before they start to rag of Deku for stopping them he actually raises his voice at them and makes them stop, and puts them in their place saying that after everything they just went through they shouldn't fight. This could show just how confident he's become lately and it could culminate to when they meet Helen and Manny and she compares him to Pearce.
It could also be great foreshadowing for his future as a teacher; tho, that could be shown better for when they meet Alan and Deku teaches him how to fly on the rock
Would Ochako get her own Full Cowling and Shoot Style, or would that still be Deku's thing? Maybe with Kickin' Hawk?
If you do the pool episode from the anime, will you have Ripjaws' eyes burning because of the chlorine, like the Missing Link in Monsters vs Aliens?
Would Deku get a Batman "Am I Blue" moment from Justice League? But maybe not as exaggerated
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When you do Secret of the Omnitrix, can you add this scene from Sonic 2?:
Deku: We have to find his weak spot!
Xylene: I suggest the groin!
Myaxx: Agreed!
Deku: WHAT?! N-NO! I-! NO!
Tetrax: Ideally yes, for most carbon based life-forms the groin is the weakest spot!
Deku: Stop. Saying. GROIN!
Would Kaminari get some Ben's dumb moments? Like, those moments when they need comedy so they just have Ben do something stupid?
Was Uraraka destroying the Charlotte Device her 'body moved before she could think' moment?
Would the 'holding someone's hand makes me feel at ease' thing happen sooner?
Guardian-Sigil: Yeah but i needed to name em all asap otherwise it'd be annoying to call them stone guardian, brain crab, and blue cat then entire time
No, brainstorm is not gonna call out Aizawa
I have not given Sunny a second thought honestly, so no guarantees
Actually Ripjaws will be getting a respirator thanks to the recalibration so he'll get more time to shine
Probably not that long of a chapter since he's had less time with the Omnitrix then Ben
Ochaco will get her own techniques
Eh, that episode in the timeline was a while back so prob not but then again they may end up in a theme park or water park or 2
"Am I Blue" i need to look up what that is again
Hahaha, yeah that Sonic 2 line would be funny
Would Kaminari get some Ben's dumb moments? Yeah i bet!
Was Uraraka destroying the Charlotte Device her 'body moved before she could think' moment? In a way i consider it to be
DeadCool14 again x4: Besides having the Pussycats help with training, Tetrax could help too, maybe he says he's Deku's relative too and Pixie-Bob flirts with him as well, to no avail. Deku could ask Mandalay and Kouta about his parents moves for Water Hazard, like, parkour with water, sliding like Mina by putting one hand behind him to propel and one down to his feet to slide, makes a water orb that works as a bomb. These could be Water Hose moves combined with Deku's own moves, like he flies around with water bursts similar to Bakugou
I really think Izuku and Ochako should swap internships, with the transformations now being linked to his stamina he should definitely be talking to Nejire more since her Quirk works the same way, and he could steal/improve on some of her moves with, say, Feedback. And maybe you could do that chase scene from A Change of Face, like: he uses his crystals for parkour, making small crystal platform with his foot to push himself up or to the side against a wall for momentum, making constructs to parkour off of, like more platforms to make wall jumps or ones to do a wall run. Maybe an attack where he jumps really high and shoots crystals from his feet? Oh! Maybe that move from Destroy All Aliens where he makes that crystal board! Feedback absorbs Hado's energy and jokingly makes a Hadoken
Also it could lead to some funny IzuOcha jealousy.
I imagine Billions could hire the Urarakas to build the tower, mostly so Billy could be a creep to Ochako, but then eventually find out he was gonna scam them and also the robot that looks like their daughter. And then when Deku helps them, they basically already accept him into their family after he not only helps them but furiously defends Ochako as a person and compliments the other ways she's amazing besides the physical, like when they were talking on the cliff in the anime; it would legit even make Mazuma jealous and would straight up make the Uraraka's adopt him into the family, especially after they
Class B interactions: Kaibara tries to flirts with Ochako by flexing his Quirk and Deku shows him up with Armodrillo, X-Men Fastball Special, but it's a combo between Ochako, Rath and Tetsutetsu, Setsuna comments how normally she'd make an overcompensating joke but knows Deku can back it up. Also this:
Kendo: SET, NO!
Ocha: What?
Set: You're a real lucky gal. That boy ain't just got a Humungousaur in his watch
Kinoko: R-Really big shroom
Kendo: GUYS!
Or This:
If Class B members find out about the Omnitrix, I expect a joke like this:
"Guess that explains the size of his 'Humungousaur' back at camp"
Kendo: S-S-SETSUNA!
"They do say that's God's way of compensating for Quirkless boys"
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Deku would also be weird with food but has limits. And people would point out how similar he is to his dad in that regard despite him denying it. Maybe you could do the haggis scene from Earthworm Jim and also have Deku eat those foods in smoothie form
The girls help give Deku confidence after he encounters some old classmates and he talks about how he's unlovable and how he should settle being happy that amazing girls like them want to even be around him. They all have a fun day together and they all help him by saying the many ways he's attractive and that others are dumb for not even bothering to get to know him. He also throws in the many ways they're all beautiful and attractive, and they remark that if he had confidence he could be a total lady killer. Could also be a moment combined with Kai rejecting him, even though he didn't have feelings for her it still hurts and he brings up two times he tried confessing to a girl and it went very bad; one liked him but didn't wanna get bullied because be was Quirkless and the other was a prank that ended with him getting beat up
Everyone gets Deku's notebooks and are amazed and how detailed they are, they even have stuff they've never thought about, he legit cries. Based on the one-shot from the movie
Tsuyu would mock Humungousaur's name until the Pussycats give him a death glare because Kouta came up with the name
I always thought the Omnitrix recalibration could have been an update sent by Azmuth, but with what happened, could it have happened because of OFA?
Reference: The universal greeting from Transformers
So if Amphibian is gonna focus on the mind reading, what was that thing with Brainstorm and Vilgax?
Would the Forever Knights be a branch or be based off of Humarise?
If Deku does get house arrest he could learn Ant-Man close-up magic
Deku reacting to how Ochako saves money, and maybe should have asked her to live with them
So, after Fasttrack, would you also write Ochako using her kansai accent sometimes? Which is basically a southern accent? A perfect example is this:
They kinda did it in the anime, in the English dub, when she says "I'm gonna do my best" in the background
Oh and speaking of which, will you please do an Omake for Ochako's birthday?
I just read in the MHA wiki, and found out that Yoichi and AFO's backstory resemble the story of Romulus and Remus, which reminded me that part of Sir George's backstory was that he was originally named Georgius and was born in Ancient Rome in 231 AD, funny coincidence huh?
You know I just realized you missed a chance for a really good joke with Deku. When Mandalay asked him his favorite color, to everyone's shock he would say orange, as a reference to his original design. He still likes green but he just likes orange better, he only really keeps getting green things because it just so happens to fit his aesthetic; Inko even assumed green was his favorite (like her), which is why his first costume was that color. He just took it as a sign that his whole thing should be green, especially after finding the Omnitrix
Guardian-Sigil: Trust me i already know who Izuku and Ochaco are interning with and i'll just say it, Ryukyu will not be involved
But otherwise your ideas are fun to read but there's no guarantee they will be used
Also you repeat a lot of the same ideas over and over
So if Amphibian is gonna focus on the mind reading, what was that thing with Brainstorm and Vilgax? Come on man, i can't tell you that;)
Would the Forever Knights be a branch or be based off of Humarise? Yes and no.
Deku reacting to how Ochako saves money, and maybe should have asked her to live with them. This feels pointless i mean they are all about to move into dorms
So, after Fasttrack, would you also write Ochako using her kansai accent sometimes? Which is basically a southern accent? A perfect example is this: At this point it's kinda too little too late to incorporate it
Oh and speaking of which, will you please do an Omake for Ochako's birthday? Yeah that time came and went, sorry
Guest: DUDE! I just caught wind of there being a Chapter 431, with showing additional infomercial regarding certain things, and especially between Izuku and Ochaco, so I thought you should be given a heads up that another chapter is coming and that there's more coming from it, hope you enjoy it when it releases~
Guardian-Sigil: Thanks
Guest: The name of Shinso's hero has already been revealed, which is Hypnosis Hero: Nighthide, I don't know if you liked it or if you would change it like with Bakugou
Guardian-Sigil: Prob not, i might also retcon/change Bakugou's name to Dynamite. Please keep in mind when I gave Bakugou the name it was literally a month before they dropped his true hero name in the manga and I haven't had a single chance to address it in story
Was gonna have change it around the time of the internships
Guest: You know, it would be funny to see Aizawa or Shinso take it personally that Nyancy-chan uses cats for crimes, one, because she is a criminal, and second, because she uses innocent kittens to steal. I even imagine both of them jealous of that quirk and would like to have it. Another thing that would be curious to see is that the rook race are felines and since Shota or Shinso find out about this, at least they are not rath XD
Guardian-Sigil: I think they would have to fight the urge to pet Rook like they do the cat policeman, Sansa
Guest: So since IzuOcha is now an official ship at the end of the Manga, does this mean we'll see it also happen in this fanfic?
Guardian-Sigil: I shouldn't say anything, mainly cause i can hear the vultures (other readers) circling for this exact answer. But probably they will be the end ship buuut don't expect me to do any romance build up or whatnot till the tail end
I have no real interest in writing romance
Grimm: What do you think of the new ending of My Hero Academia? I liked it much more than the previous one and I think it calmed down the fandom more (except for the bakudeku fans, don't go on Twitter)
Guardian-Sigil: I was very satisfied by it and it gave me a followup laugh (i.e. a laugh at the Bakudeku shippers' expense)
DeadCool14 again x5: Happy Anniversary! Sorry you couldn't get the chapter out in time
Will you please make an omake for Ochako's birthday? It would be wholesome AF because everyone would give her expensive gifts that she couldn't afford on her own, and maybe some IzuOcha too? Hopefully?
Would you include elements from And Beyond for Jetray, Brainstorm and Fasttrack? Mostly about their powers but also their lore?
Could Nyancy-chan be a Pussycats fan that wants to replace Ragdoll? Maybe adding to that she's racist towards Quirkless
When the Pussycats come to visit, will they and Aizawa help Deku train his new aliens and Humungousaur?
You could use this to set up his future as a teacher: The training is not just for him but also for them, since now they have to adapt to working without Ragdoll, Deku notices this and he ends up teaching them, using his notebooks; he uses Water Hazard and asks Kouta and Mandalay about Water Hose, as well as showing Kouta ways to train his Quirk since they're powers are the same (WH shoots water by absorbing the air's moisture, and I always headcanon that Kouta's Quirk works the same as All Might's example for the Quirk Registration) and teaches him how to do the moisture absorbtion move he used on Captain Nemesis; maybe he does it on one of Pixie-Bob's golems. And of course, Izuku would comfort Ragdoll about being Quirkless, he could probably tell that she was putting on a happy face since he's likely done it himself for years in front of his mom and can tell when someone else does it. And maybe Ochako could do some counselling for Kouta too. Oh! And since Deku has to take counselling with Hound Dog she could actually ask him about it too!
Maybe Class B pops in to check, and Setsuna (besides fangirling over the dinosaur) makes a joke that Humungousaur shouldn't just be the name of his transformation, given what she knows XD
Oh and maybe Bakugou and Ochako pop in to help with the Pussycats' training, as payback for the trials during camp. Brainstorm screw with Mandalay's powers or just keeps one upping her strategies, and maybe even gets Aizawa with his own logical ruse, Gutrot uses a truth serum gas on everyone, especially Pixie-Bob, Tiger and Pixie have to fight NRG but neither can get around his armor or his heat, since he can melt her golems and his armor blocks Mandalay's telepath so they can't get the drop on him, well that and maybe the fact he's an energy being.
Would Gravattack use moves based off of Inko's Quirk? Like, things Izuku thought she could do if she trained her Quirk?
As punishment for not telling anyone about sneaking off to Kamino, would Aizawa hold a buffet lunch, all made by Hisashi? But it soon backfires as the teachers are roped into it too, so then they just ask Lunch Rush to make regular food. This one I'm asking for because I imagine a really funny joke with Hisashi, it's from Aquaman 2, where Arthur tricks Orm into eating a cockroach, calling it 'surface shrimp', and at the end of the movie he's eating a burger and puts a cockroach in it; Hisashi would also do that, but on purpose lol
Omg, I just realized, is All Might losing his arm a reference to Future Max?
Will Deku fight some very physically strong opponents hand-to-hand and with the S.A.G.E gun, to show just how deceptively strong and physically adept he is? I especially think it would be cool to have a call-back to when Ochako and Bakugou beat him during the forest training because he timed out, and because they got cocky he quickly turns the tables on them and beats them up
Also these:
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Deku should be this strong, maybe sneaks out to train and records himself as Rath to copy his moves
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You could do this, especially with Rook and the Plumbers kids
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Ignore the text above it. I just wanted to share this because it gives me just so many Ben 10 vibes XD
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Give them the chance, pls!
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Also give him this jacket, cuz he is KILLING IT
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Same vibes as when Deku says "You're so Uraraka", and btw, Uraraka means 'beautiful' in Japanese
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I don't even know who she is, but please have her wear something like this!
These videos too
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This should happen right after they get them on the ship
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Guardian-Sigil: I'll prob incorporate as much lore from And Beyond as i do the aliens Izuku already has
I might not even do Nyancy, we shall see
No. The Pussycats aren't gonna do any training. Please stop bringing this suggestion up, you seem desperate about it. It is frankly annoying to hear over and over.
Look it's not a bad idea but you gotta take it easy, it's like when a teacher is telling you over and over what you need to do; you end up not wanting to do it
Yes, All Might lost his arm like Future Max Tennison soooo you can probably guess where this is going
I was gonna have the S.A.G.E. gun only transform when in alien transformations, otherwise yes he will use it as human too but then again he has a less timeout feature now
Omar: My biggest problem with the ending wasn't the loss of power or anything like that. My biggest problem is that the original work is supposedly called My HERO Academia, it is supposed to be a superhero work/story, I understand that Batman is the only one who has a self-imposed moral code, I think that not even Superman has one of those (it is difficult to say since some writers do give it to him and others force him to say explicitly that he does not have it, but that is another story), but even so, the heroes have to try to set good examples, they are models , they must be better. So what am I trying to get at? Please tell me that your story will take a more heroic path and in fact more villains will live long enough to be prosecuted by the authorities by the book. I am not asking that all of them be redeemed and rehabilitated (although I decided to investigate and it turns out that stories of rehabilitated criminals who after leaving prison finished their studies and got good jobs are not as rare as I thought), but I do think that The fact that so many villains died was not good for the story, because it more or less proved that the villains were right and that heroism in the world of My Hero Academia is worth little or nothing, so I repeat, I am not asking you to turn the world of My Hero Academia into a utopia because a utopia is realistically impossible, but please tell me that you will do more honor to the idea and the title of the universe in question.
Guardian-Sigil: You got it we'll go the J.K. Rowelling route on this one… On an unrelated note, who is your favorite character? Asking for a friend…
But for real, I think it is fair to point out that the villains' stories like Toga or Twice would feel…unresolved and unsatisfied if they were kept alive
I mean Horikosihi was done, he wanted to end the story and tie up what he could. And we can all admit he did not tie up everything. So I ask would there have been time to wrap up their stories in a satisfying manner in that situation? Also what villains other than our main one's died? I don't remember seeing a panel where Fatgum just squashed a group of aliens into goop or Ryuko eating someone alive or Bakugou ever actually killing a villain. Also are we ignoring Shoji's stand against Spinner? Or are you talking about the Nomus that were killed cause those guys are not human (or at least not anymore)
But in any case I cannot promise anything of my own ending I have a feeling mine will be just as satisfying and disappointing. That's not me putting myself down, just trying to be realistic
Wendy: I have an idea that I think is interesting, I don't know if it would be possible since there are already some things in the story that may limit it, but although the idea came to mind late, I still want to share it, this story is supposed to It has 2 protagonists (Izuku and Uraraka), have you thought about doing what Ben 10 did with Grandpa Max or what Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. did with Ghost Rider (I mean what did they do about making them presumed dead or missing and actually making them disappear for a long time), but with Izuku being the one who disappears?
Look, I know that you already did things like you fixed Izuku's relationship with his father and in fact Izuku had support from Thirteen at the beginning of everything. and you know, I think that's perfectly fine, I'm not asking you to do with Izuku what Marvel does with Spider-Man (I mean make him destroy and rebuild his life over and over again), but still, the journey of a hero is not supposed to be a cakewalk, heroes are supposed to go through situations and challenges that test their abilities to hold on to their hope or hold on to what they know is right but that benefits others who do not deserve it, I think we can agree that this Izuku Midoriya has had it worse than his canonical version since: All Might destroyed his dream, but in this version he did not become his mentor (honestly "between" the disappointments that All Might and Endeavor were for Izuku despite being the best that heroic society has to offer, I am surprised that during or after the cultural festival there was not a subplot or at least small clues that indicated of Izuku began to question himself if he really still wanted to be a hero). He lost his best friend 2 times first with Bakugo then with Henzu. His father abandoned him for many years and well that hurt and the pain doesn't just go away. His mother in a certain way and to a certain extent (having said that, not much) chose Hisashi over Izuku because despite being the person most aware of what Izuku's childhood was like and how not having anyone in his life affected him. that loved him, she thought that putting them together for dinner would be enough for Izuku to accept Hisashi into his life again (something that unfortunately could be interpreted as her being willing to forget Izuku's pain because she wanted Hisashi back in her own life, which is understandable since as far as the Midoriya family is concerned we don't know about anyone except the three of them, which means Hisashi is the only other person she had in her life, that's why I repeat, understandable but still not a good thing).
So the suggestion I want to give is that, between the fact that this version of Izuku has had it worse than his original version and that this version has an omnitrix (a device that was partly created to give people the ability to discover what is be another species) I still think an interesting idea (but it would be one that would not last 1 chapter or anything like that, but in fact would last one arc or maybe two complete arcs) would be to do something similar to the cases I mentioned before and do that Izuku disappears but does not die and takes him away from Earth, thus making Izuku and Uraraka live separate stories for a time, in Uraraka's case with the idea that this would help her better understand the mantle of responsibility that she has by basically forcing her to follow in the footsteps of the original Izuku as she is the only one who can confront AFO effectively, and in the case of Izuku the idea of the story It would be Izuku feeling more comfortable with aliens than with his own species since thanks to the Omnitrix he can fit in and be equal to others, something he cannot do on Earth due to the Quirks, thus developing a lack of care towards the planet he was born on because he never fit in, instead finding his footing out in space and finding it way more fun out there (thanks to the Omnitrix and the fact that other planets are probably not as strict with heroic actions and keeping people in check, since unlike Earth not everyone is their own thing), that and also the why would he ever want to go back to the place that ruined him and that did not allow him to be happy? though that might just be him misplacing his anger and his frustration at feeling like his pain is the only pain that never mattered.
Of course, obviously this would not last forever, eventually destiny would make him and her cross paths again and he would end up involved in the problems of planet Earth again, but with him not being all that helpful at first due to the fact that he's not sure if he legitimately wants to get involved in these matters and this planet again, And with her and the rest of his friends trying to make him realize that even though his life on earth wasn't perfect, that doesn't mean he shouldn't 't do something and that humanity isn't worth it.
I think my idea can be summed up as: have you thought about having him and her go on separate adventures for a long time so that in her case it works as a lesson of exactly what she got herself into when she accepted the power and in the case of him serving as a type of journey of discovery in which he actually learns true happiness but at the cost of finally learning to actually resent the world that did not allow him to have a happy childhood, thus forcing her to ask herself the question of whether she can or not and forcing him to ask himself the question of whether he wants to or not?
Guardian-Sigil: So you bringing this up is very fitting cause i am constantly thinking about the future of this story and specifically it's ending. And the idea of having izuku "vanish" or leave Earth for a time has been on the table for a while. I even had the thought that maybe this is how the story ends, he leaves for years, comes back and that would kick off a new series (story) or something. But that's so far down the road that i can't even promise if i'll be ambitious to still be writing by then
But i like the idea of them splitting the story for a time. I do and again it's on the table, like for example maybe when i do a version of the Secret of the Omnitrix (which i would extend the events and adventures) would be a good time to do it. Like i had the idea that maybe the search for Azimuth takes a few months and Izuku with a very selective group have to leave Earth leaving all his Classmates, including Ochaco, behind. Now this idea is not set in stone but if i were to follow through with it i think i need to strongly consider your suggestions
So i just want to say thank you for sharing
Guest: Hey, I found a YouTuber that makes videos of common phrases in games, shows and movies that I think you could use in your Fanfic
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Guardian-Sigil: I'll have to check em out, thanks
BlueRanger-Lyric again: I'm not sure if you've thought about this before, but what if you tried making a mini episode where someone makes a Contingency Plan to neutralise Izuku and his Alien Transformations, and the one to make the Plan could ether be Batman, an OC of yours, or one of the Plumbers in yours series, or even Principal/Magister Nezu, so that in the off chance Izuku goes rough, someone is prepared to deal with him should the need arise, how does that sound?
Guardian-Sigil: Dude you can just ask if I saw the latest Ink Tank vid? But i don't think Nezu is the type to have a contingency plan for his heroes, otherwise he'd have one for All Might
But that doesn't mean other characters wouldn't use that concept
Guest: I just had a cool idea for the retaliator form destroy all aliens. I think he would be cool to include just not as Azmuth's dad but a badass Galvanic Mechamorph(not a suit) who is after Malware for his many past crimes against his race.
Guardian-Sigil: I am not that familiar with destroy all aliens (it's the 1 piece of ben 10 media I missed and never knew existed until after i started this story
Guest: Will the forever knights join the side of the heroes in the final battle. I mean their were villains that joined the heroes in the canon story and if a villain organization was going to join the heroes against AFO and Vilgax it would probably be them.
Guardian-Sigil: Who knows? Seriously, it's tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo early to make any promises on that
Guest: If Himiko takes blood from Henzu Uuichi (maybe from one of the parts that is Tetramand or from Kineceleran's tail) what would happen? Does size matter? Would she get the powers since they are not Quirks but rather alien DNA?
Guardian-Sigil: IDK, or at least not yet. This is something im 'still considering cause i mean Stain's own blood Quirk didn't work on SixSix and Eraserhead can't cancel an alien's powers. I guess the question is if Himiko can turn into non-human being? Like can she turn into animals? Like a sparrow? So I guess, I still need to decide what her limits are
DarkMist: Hey a few days ago I had a crazy idea and it was "what if the Ben 10 universe and universe 10 were the same universe?" and today I remembered this fanfic, so where am I going with this? Well can we have a Dragon Ball reference in the form of a Rumsshi and Kusu cameo?
Guardian-Sigil: I can certainly try
Guest: Hey, there's a Ben 10 comic called "Down in the Dumps" that isn't canon but it exists. There we saw new characters like Skraprr Byakko for example, can we see them in the story? either as secondary characters or at least as a cameo?
Guardian-Sigil: I have to check out this comic for myself
