This chapter has been revised on 9/10/2024
Snow in the Air
A week and a half later…
It was almost midnight. Most in Arendelle castle are likely asleep by that point, save for a few guards. Princess Anna was not one of those sleeping. In fact, she was very much awake and fully dressed in her winter dress, mittens, and black boots.
Tonight was the night. After almost two weeks, Anna had finally decided to make her move. She explored more of the secret passage in her room a day after discovering it. The supposed map was correct about the wall going to the end, with the edge of the mountain range not too far away. It would seem that her prayers had been answered after all.
She would've done this much sooner, but she didn't want to freak anyone out, and the events of her going missing in the woods was still fresh on everyone's minds. So she waited for the heat to die down. Anna had taken that time to plan her trip. Nighttime, she thought, would be the best time to do this. Her parents would most likely notice if she had done this during the day and was gone for a long period.
All of this was risky, but Anna wouldn't wait any longer. She was going to visit Elsa, one way or another.
Once again, Anna looked over at the clock. By now, her parents should be sleeping or getting ready if they stay up late working. She placed some extra pillows, along with a poorly crafted wig with her hair color, on her bed, covering them up with the blanket, leaving the wig poking out. It would look like she was sleeping in bed to anyone looking in. Once that was handled, Anna put on a dark-colored cloak. Even though her usual cape was fixed up, its magenta color was too bright, and Anna had to stay incognito. Anna had also carried her father's pocket watch so she could keep track of time.
Grabbing the knife Elsa gifted her, Anna reached the wall and opened the passage door. In her other hand, a small lantern was lit. The light helped bring out the darkness of the passage. Before Anna entered, she stopped herself. There was a moment when she hesitated.
"No. I'm going to do this. I was born ready!"
Pushing all doubt aside, Anna crawled into the passage. She closed the door before continuing. The first half of the tunnel was difficult for her. It involved a LOT of crawling around and then climbing down at one point. Thankfully, the second half had enough room for her to simply walk. Most of it was in the wall portion of the passage and was noticeably longer to get through. This passage looks as if no one has used it in many years, judging by the cobwebs and cracks on the walls. It was also dark, with the only light source besides the lantern and the small rays from the cracks above.
After a long period of walking, Anna made it to the end. She had been here before but struggled to remember the secret door that led her to the outside world. Several moments of thinking later, she found it. This door felt heavier than the one in Anna's room. Yep, no one hasn't used this passage for a LONG time. After spending minutes prying it, the door finally opened.
Anna slowly stepped into the open. Around the young teen were woodlands, still covered with snow. The month of March was not too far away, but there was still some snow left. After closing the door, Anna looked around the area until she spotted something in the distance. Not too far away were the mountains. Taking another glance, she could see the castle and the fjord in the distance before she returned her glance at the range.
"Look at the mountains, so close, and I'm almost to it! Look at it all. It's so risky. Do I even dare? Look at me, there at last! I just have to do it. Should I... No! Here I go."
Pulling up her hood to cover her head, Anna took a deep breath and stood in her spot. She looked at the castle in the distance one more time while taking several slow backward steps. Each footstep speed had significantly increased. As she finally picked up speed, Anna turned and started to run.
That is what she had done for what felt like minutes. Anna continues to run through the forest. The sound of her feet running on the snow-covered ground played in rhythm with her rapid heartbeat. Not once did she ever stop running. As she approached her destination, the ground started to elevate to steep hills. With the steep incline, Anna had to reduce her running to walking.
After walking up the steep hill, the incline finally ceased. Taking this moment to catch her breath, Anna quickly looked around her surroundings. Near her were mountain tops. Turning the opposite way, she could see Arendelle. Then she realized she had reached the edge of the mountain range.
"I can't believe it...I did it! I can't believe I did this!" Anna had almost screamed excitedly before calming herself down. "I can't believe I did this...Mama & papa would freak out if I knew I did this!" Anna shook her head. "Don't think about that! Stay focused, Anna!"
With that, Anna entered the mountain range. It shouldn't be too hard to find The North Mountain. Unfortunately, Anna was not an experienced mountain person. She knew to look north, but the entire range was all north. Also, all the mountains look alike, especially in the dark of night, which didn't help.
Anna had brought a map with her to help. However, there wasn't any sign of the mountain on the location the map told her to go to. She was at her fourth spot, looking at another small series of mountains—like the previous times, none of which looked familiar. Sighing in defeat, she turned away and wandered around, putting the map in her dress and picking up her lantern. How hard was it to find a mountain with a giant palace made of ice?!
"I knew it. The universe hates me..." Anna muttered to herself dejectedly. "Some people lose their pen or their shoe. No, not me. I managed to lose an entire MOUNTAIN!"
Anna smacked on a branch from a nearby tree out of frustration. The branch hit her back in the eye. Its impact was strong enough to cause her to stumble back several feet as she covered her eyes and grunted in pain.
"Damn, that hurt…"
As Anna took that moment to let the pain pass through, something in the corner of her eye caught her attention. Looking in that direction, she saw a mountain, which wasn't like the other mountains. This one was huge, towering over the others she had seen. And instead of having a triangular top, its top was curved. It took Anna a moment to realize that the mountain she was looking at was...
"The North Mountain. I found it! Ha Ha! Thank you, The Universe!" Anna cheered while lifting her arms, both hands balled into fists before she calmed down. "Alright, how much time do I have?" Anna took out the pocket watch and looked at the time. It had been nearly an hour since she started this journey. "I still have plenty of time." She put the watch away.
"Next stop: Elsa."
Surrounding her was the dark hallway. She had found herself once again in this place. It had been in the same state as the previous times. Like last time, she attempted to find her way out.
"Hello?"
"Hello again, Elsa."
Turning around, Elsa saw the site of the hooded man who was referred to as Master. All she could do was scowled at him. She clearly doesn't want to deal with his trickery right now.
"You again?" Elsa snarled.
"The very same, darlin'," Master mocked, giving an equally fitting smile.
"I don't want to deal with you right now."
"Why so sour? Aren't you happy to see me?"
"I am NEVER happy to see you! Now go away!"
"What? Don't you want some company that isn't made of snow & ice for a change? Though that Anna girl would fit the bill. Speaking of which, how is she?"
Elsa didn't dare to say anything. She looked away while trying to hide her somber look. Those efforts didn't help much since Master seemed to take notice.
"She ditched you, didn't she? Why am I not surprised?" He said that somewhat sarcastically.
"She had to go back to her family," Elsa defended. "She said that she would see me again."
"And how long it been since you saw her? It's almost been two weeks. I'm quite surprised she didn't get an angry mob marching to your little home by now." He paused. "Then again, she probably doesn't want to remember you. Can't say I blame her."
"Would you just shut up?"
"Touchy, aren't we? Did you honestly think you could be friends with her? Why didn't she go back to her family sooner? She only stayed just so she could find a way to control you. Once she couldn't, she just left."
Elsa didn't say anything, but Master just continued on.
"Look at to yourself, Elsa. You're nothing without me. Nothing but a freak monster. People don't make friends with monsters. I was the closest thing you ever had as a friend. Probably family."
"You were never my family!" Elsa shouted to him. "I'd much rather be alone than spend another moment with your 'family'!"
"Then why am I still here then?" The words from his mouth made Elsa silent. "If you hate me so much, how come I appear in your dreams still?"
"Why does that matter? You're not the real thing!"
"But I'm the perfect figment of him. In a way, we're still the same person. I know why I'm still around: You don't want me to go."
"Shut up…"
"I know you hate being alone. You long for companionship with other people. But you and I both know why that'll never happen. So you stick with me. Even back then, I was the only person willing to come near you."
"I said shut up," Elsa said again, this time more angrily, clenching her teeth and fists.
"Maybe I haven't quite treated you...well. But at least I was willing to be to offer you companionship. Monsters are destined to be alone. And you, Elsa, will forever be alone."
"SHUT UP!"
That was the last thing Elsa said as she shot shards of ice.
"Elsa! Elsa, wake up!"
Elsa bolted up on her bed. She breathed heavily, and a cold sweat covered her.
"Are you okay, Elsa?"
She turned her head to see a concerned Olaf on her side. Not too far is an alarmed Marshmallow and The Snowgies who were frightened. Elsa then took notice of some ice spikes around her room.
"I'm fine. Just a bad dream," Elsa answered.
"Are you sure? It sounded pretty bad…" Olaf mentioned.
"It's nothing. I'm fine, really," Elsa assured. "Let me get rid of those spikes."
Elsa spent the next few minutes clearing out her ice spikes. She knew what to do because this wasn't the first time she had nightmares extreme enough to cause ice spikes to grow. Typically, they stick around her bed, but they were spread out in her room this time. Thankfully, Olaf, Marshmallow, and The Snowgies weren't hurt-Not that they could feel pain anyway.
Since her trip to Arendelle, Elsa hasn't had a moment of peace. On the one hand, the nightmares were more common than before. On the other hand, she sometimes recalled those images she saw in Arendelle. The ones with the people interacting with her. Did they mean something? Elsa had no clue and thought it pointless to keep thinking about them.
"There! That's all of them." Elsa got rid of the final spike. Now we can all go back to sleep-" Elsa stopped as she noticed Olaf's expression looking...off. "Are you okay, Olaf?"
"I feel something. Or rather...someone," Olaf responded.
"What?" Elsa asked.
Marshmallow jerks his head up. "I feel them, too."
"And they're...right outside of here." Olaf pointed to the bedroom doors
At that moment, a loud thud was heard. Elsa was instantly on high alert. This had never happened before with her creations. For the longest time, the only person they could feel was her. How could her creations feel another person? That wasn't important for the moment. Elsa was ready to defend herself if an intruder was in their home. That wouldn't be a problem.
"Everyone, wait here. I'll go check it out. If you don't hear from me soon, look for me."
Elsa left the bedroom, leaving behind several fear-stricken snow creatures. The only one that wasn't scared was Marshmallow, which Olaf took notice of.
"Why are you so calm? When you sense trouble, you get all scary and grow spikes."
"This isn't the first time I got this feeling. And I can guess who it is."
Elsa slowly descended the stairs leading away from her bedroom until she reached the bottom. Glancing out into the foyer, a figure in a dark cloak roamed. Elsa was about ambush the figure until they started talking.
"Elsa? Are you up?" The figure pulled down her hood, revealing her face. "It's me...Anna."
For a moment, Elsa thought she was dreaming again. There was no way Anna would return here, especially after returning home. At least, that's what she thought. But this wasn't a dream. Anna was really here.
"Anna?" Elsa slowly walked onto the foyer platform.
At the mention of her name, Anna looked up to see Elsa.
"Elsa...Hi," Anna greeted and watched Elsa walk down the stairs.
"What are you doing back here? In the middle of the night? Does your family know you're here?"
"They don't. I...miiiigghht've snuck out of the castle."
"Why?"
"To see you."
To see her? No one had ever come back for her...ever. Not even her master had to bother looking for her when she escaped.
"You came all the way out here alone to see me?"
"I did say that I would come back, didn't I? What kind of friend would I be if I didn't keep my promise?"
Those words made Elsa's heart stop but in a good way. "Did you say...friend?" She asked.
"Yeah," Anna answered.
"You see me as a friend?"
"Of course. Why would you ask that?"
"Before you left, I was about to ask if we were friends…I never had a friend before. A friend that isn't made out of snow, at least. No one ever wanted to be my friend."
"Well, I'm glad to be the first to tell you this..." Anna grabbed both of Elsa's hands, holding them halfway between them. "I would love to be your friend."
"You really mean it?"
"I do. I would've come back sooner, but everyone back home was still riled up from my disappearance. I wanted to wait until things settled down. I hated waiting this long to come ba-"
Many types of emotions went through Elsa's head. It was a mixture of sad and happy. She didn't know whether to laugh or cry. Before either she or Anna knew, Elsa had suddenly wrapped her arms around the latter. It took Anna a moment to comprehend the situation. Elsa, someone who didn't like to be touched, was actually touching her. Anna didn't know whether or not to hug her back. Instinct told her to do so, and she did. Elsa did not showcase any kind of objection.
"No one's ever come back for me before," Elsa muttered, not even caring about the small tears forming in her eyes. "I didn't think you would."
"Well...I'm here now." Anna had spent the next several moments still hugging Elsa before they finally pulled away. "Soooo...what do you want to do?"
"I...I'm not sure," Elsa confessed.
This led the girls to stand in awkward silence. Elsa honestly didn't know what to do. On the other hand, Anna had several ideas going through her head until one came to her.
"Do you want to build a snowman?" Anna asked with a playful grin.
Elsa could only give a small smile. "Yes."
"Well then...do the magic."
Elsa didn't waste any time. With a twirl of her hands, she made several large snow mounds throughout the foyer. Both girls quickly went to work. Elsa rolled up a giant snowball, and Anna stacked a smaller one. Anna drooped over, lifting her foot as she added her ball to the stack, most likely from almost slipping on the ice. How she was positioned made Elsa giggle as she covered her mouth.
One more large snowball was added to the top. The pair both worked together to shape it to resemble a head. Elsa used her magic to make objects resemble sticks and eyes and placed them on the snowman. Once they had finished, they sat in front of the snowman and admired their work.
"I think we did a great job," Anna looked over the snowman.
"Yeah...we did," Elsa responded before a pause occurred. "It looks like Olaf."
Anna gave a small smile. Memories of her days building snowmen went through her head. Most were mainly with herself, but some were with her parents.
"Can I ask you something, Elsa?" The ice wielder turns to the princess. "Where did you get the name 'Olaf' from?"
"I...I really don't know," Elsa admitted. "I didn't give Olaf a name when I first made him. The first time I saw him alive, he referred to himself as that, and it just stuck on. Why do you want to know?"
"I used that name for the snowmen I built as a kid."
"Maybe Olaf is just a popular name?"
"What about me?" A new voice spoke before Anna could even respond.
Both girls looked in the direction of the voice. Olaf was walking across the foyer platform. He looked about to speak until he noticed Elsa wasn't alone.
"Anna?"
"Hi, Olaf."
"You came back!" Olaf faced the stairs. "Hey guys, Anna's here!"
A cluster of squeaks and hefty thumps quickly moving echoed through the palace. Marshmallow and The Snowgies soon entered the foyer platform. Almost immediately after seeing Anna, all The Snowgies went over to her. They dogpiled her to the point she fell down on her back.
"Easy guys! I'm happy to see you too!" Anna said happily, though she was a bit overwhelmed.
The Snowgies continued to crawl over Anna until Marshmallow let out a small roar at them. It wasn't loud but loud enough to get The Snowgies to stop crowding her. No longer in a dog pile, Anna stood up.
"Thanks, big guy." The giant snow creature smiled at the young girl. Marshmallow then lifted his large, icy finger against her cheek. Just the tip of it was as big as her own head. "It's good to see you again." Anna nuzzled her head against his finger. "It's good to see all of you."
"What are you doing here?" Olaf asked.
"Visiting you guys." Anna went over to the snowman and gave him a hug, which Olaf was happy to oblige.
"We thought we would never see you again. What were you both doing?"
"Building a snowman," Elsa answered as she showed Olaf the newly built snowman. "It was Anna's idea."
"Wow!" Olaf whispered. "He looks like me!"
"Hey, since you are all here now, what do you want to do?" Anna asked.
No one said anything. Elsa had a thoughtful look before her face suddenly brightened.
"Have you been in a snowball fight?" Elsa asked.
Anna gave a small laugh. "You're looking at Arendelle's top snowball fighter."
"That's a thing?" Olaf questioned.
"I'm a princess, so I make it a thing."
"Then I guess you won't have a problem with this."
Elsa quickly formed a snowball in her hand and threw it at Anna's head. The ice wielder chuckled as Anna wiped the snow off her face, spitting some that got in her mouth.
"Oh, it's on!" Anna declared.
More snow mounds were added throughout the foyer. Soon, the snowball fight was commerce. Two teams had been formed: Elsa & Marshmallow against Anna & Olaf, with some of The Snowiges split off to either team. For a while, both sides were throwing snowballs at each other. Excitement & laughter bounced off the walls as snowballs rained throughout the foyer.
The snowball fight died down after a while. A winner was never decided, but that didn't matter. After resting a bit, Olaf gave another idea.
"Ice skating?" Anna said.
"Yeah!"
"I think that's a good idea," Elsa agreed.
"Where, though?" Anna asked.
"We can do it here. There's enough room."
"I don't have skates."
"Don't worry." Elsa flicked her hand, and a gust of snow came out and swirled around Anna's boots. Under those boots, skates formed.
Anna gave a small gasp as she watched the skates form. "Oh, Elsa."
"You like them?"
"They're beautiful...But I'm not really much of a ska-"
"Come on! Do it!"
Elsa suddenly grabbed Anna's hand, and they both started skating around the foyer. At first, Anna struggled a bit and almost fell down. Thankfully, with the help of Olaf, Elsa managed to pull her up each time.
"It's alright. I got you," Elsa would say to Anna almost every time.
"Sorry. I never was a good skater."
"I can teach you what I know."
"Really?" Elsa nodded with a smile. "Okay. Show me what you know."
"Alright. First, you need to bend your knees..."
From there, Elsa gave Anna tips on ice skating. Olaf still skated on his own with several of The Snowgies. Elsa continued to hold on to Anna as she taught her the basics. However, Anna kept on falling.
"What did I tell ya? I'm bad at skating," Anna proclaimed.
"You'll get the hang of it," Elsa encouraged. "I know you will. You just have to keep trying and not give up. "
How Elsa had spoken to Anna sounded soft and encouraging, much like talking to a younger child when they're having trouble learning something new. It reminded Anna of when her father was teaching her to ride a bicycle as a child. She had issues keeping her balance and kept on falling off. It had come to the point where she wanted to give up. But her father was patient with her. He kept encouraging her because he believed in her. In the end, that encouragement paid off, and the next thing she knew, she was riding around in every part of the castle.
So Anna decided to heed Elsa's words. She had actually improved from that point. Not a professional skater good, but good enough to skate without Elsa's help. After a while, they stopped ice skating and sat on the foyer stairs. The past few hours had worn out Anna.
"I don't know about you, but I'm dead tired," Anna stated.
"But you're still alive…?" Elsa clearly didn't understand the meaning.
"It's another expression. It means I'm very tired."
"Oh. Is that bad?"
"No. I just had...A lot of fun tonight. I haven't had this much fun since I was a kid."
"You still are a kid."
Anna chuckled. "You're probably right about that."
"I really did have a good time," Elsa said, a small smile forming. "I can't remember the last time I've had this much fun."
"I'm glad you did."
A pause lingered in the air.
"Do you have to leave again?" A hint of glum was heard in Elsa's voice.
"Yes," Anna answered. "I enjoy spending time with you, but I have my family back home. They don't know about you."
"They don't?"
"Because I'm not sure if they would believe me if I told them." That answer was partially true as to why she never told anyone. The real reason was because Anna was afraid her parents would kill Elsa for witchcraft, but she was sure as hell she wasn't going to tell her that. She didn't want to make Elsa more scared of people than she already was. "Not many people believe in magic."
"I see…"
"Anyways, I do have to go back home. But I'll still visit."
"Visit?"
"I'll come here to see you now that I know how to get here. It'll be at night and only several times a week. I hope that won't be a problem."
"It's not. I'm just happy to have you as a friend. When will you come back?"
"How do two nights sound?" Anna answered after a moment
"I would like that." Anna smiled at Elsa. That is, until a yawn overtook the princess. "I think you should get home now."
"I probably should. Wonder how long I was gone for?" Anna pulled out the pocket watch. Her eyes widened a bit as she looked at it. "Wow. I have been away from home for quite a while. I better get going."
"Wait!" Elsa shouted as Anna started walking away. "Would you like Marshmallow to carry you back?"
"Is that alright with him?"
"He would like to. He'll take you as far as you want." Elsa looked over to Marshmallow. "Right?"
Marshmallow slowly nodded his head.
"Alright. How do I-woah!" Marshmallow picked Anna up with his hand. She was secured to ensure her comfort and security. "Okay. I guess we're doing this."
"Two nights, right?" Elsa clarified.
"Yes. I promise."
"Alright. Go on, Marshmallow."
The big snow creation nodded his head and walked towards the large doors. He opened them and walked down the icy stairs.
"He may be a little rough once he runs!" Elsa shouted from the door as they walked down the stairs.
"I'm sure I can handle it. How bad can he-" Marshmallow starts making a run down the mountain. Anna clung onto his ice fingers for dear life. "BBBEEEEE!"
Much like what Elsa said, Marshmallow was a bit rough. This was definitely different from riding on a horse or reindeer. It was still comfortable enough, so there's at least that. Marshmallow kept running through the mountain range for a good while until he reached its edge. Just down below was Arendelle.
"I can go on from here."
"You...sure?" Marshmallow asked.
"I'll be fine," Anna assured as she patted him. "See ya in two nights, big guy."
Marshmallow and Anna smiled at each other before they both parted ways. As Anna walked through the trees, she couldn't help but think back to the events at the palace. It was something she had enjoyed. One thing still stuck in her mind. The look of joy on Elsa's face had always kept popping in Anna's head. It was the same kind one would see in a child when they would have high amounts of fun. The ice wielder did say she hasn't had that much fun in years. When was the last time she had fun? Did she even experience that kind of fun before?
But there was one thing Anna did know. It won't be the last time Elsa will experience such a thing. She was her friend, and friends stuck together. No one else will know of this friendship. Not her parents. Not Kai & Gerda. Kristoff...She'll have to think about that.
A secret friendship...That sounds like something straight out of a novel her mother would read. Only this type of relationship isn't romantic or technically forbidden. Maybe secret friendship doesn't sound good with authors...?-Though forbidden friendship did have a nice ring to it. Keeping secrets also meant possibly lying. Anna would hate to further lie to those close to her, especially her parents & Kristoff. But if it had to keep Elsa safe for now, so be it. The time may come when it will no longer come to that. Until then, she may have to lie to protect Elsa.
Despite all that, she thinks about her next visit to Elsa. It made her feel happy. That thought stayed with her as she came back to the wall surrounding the town. It still didn't leave her as she went through the passage back to her room, prepping herself for bed and then falling asleep.
Elsa watched until they were out of site. Part of her was worried, but she trusted Marshmallow to take care of Anna. He and Olaf seemed to have some sort of connection with her, which Elsa still found odd.
Pushing that thought aside, Elsa retreated back into the palace. The snow mounds she had made earlier were still in the foyer. On one of them was Olaf sleeping soundly, along with The Snowgies. Elsa decided to leave them be and retreated back to her room alone.
Back in her room, Elsa closed the icy doors behind her. Instead of going to her bed, she walked to her window and looked outside. It was very quiet all around her—not the quietness of nighttime quiet. It was the loneliness type of quiet—the one Elsa had been familiar with for 10 years and the same that had stuck around after Anna first left. She was saddened that Anna had, once again, left.
"Back to life up here in my icy home. Cooped up here all alone, and I'm gazing out." Elsa pushed open her window and looked out for several moments. "True, I'm up here and far from those near. I'm safe and secure. And for sure, that's more than enough, no doubt."
A cold breeze came through, swaying strands of Elsa's hair as her eyes closed. Out in the sky, some clouds had moved, revealing the moon behind them. The moon's light shined into Elsa's room. Something in it had reflected back, which caught Elsa's eye. The light reflected off Anna's ice figurine. Just looking at it, Elsa smiled as she remembered Anna's promise. She did come back, and she still intends to continue coming back here because they were friends.
"But I have the snow in the air and a storm within 'cause something is beginning." In a heap of excitement, Elsa made a small balcony near the window and danced around. Making several small snowflakes as she did. "I got something to look forward to and a new friend who cares!"
She stopped dancing and gazed upon the mountains. Around her were the snowflakes she had just made. "Those lovely snowflakes blowing through. I'm ready to follow them, who knows where. And I'll get there, I swear, with the snow in the air."
Elsa stuck her arms out, and more snowflakes came out. She watched them as they disappeared into the mountains. Deep in her, she felt a sense of... smugness. That feeling was directed towards someone Elsa had known long ago.
"Chew on that, Fritjof." Was the last thought Elsa had before she retreated back into her room and fell asleep on her bed. For the first time in days, she slept peacefully.
Not far from North Mountain, the snowflakes that Elsa had created had still flown in the breeze in the air. They had continued to float around through the wilderness, even picking up several leaves in the gust.
After a while, they had flown near a valley that wasn't covered by winter's touch. The snowflakes and leaves floated near the top of a hill. A small hand that came from a small, rounded figure with a moss cape suddenly grabbed them. The figure unclasped the palm of his stone hand to examine his findings: three leaves surrounding a snowflake.
The figure could only give a thoughtful 'Hmm…' before rolling back into the valley.
I know this chapter probably isn't exciting. I'm not sure if I like how it turned out. But I hope you guys still like it.
At last, Anna & Elsa see each other again. And they're gonna have a forbi- I mean, secret friendship. Also, Tangled themes! Tangled themes everywhere!
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