I'll Never Forgive You (ROBLOX FORSAKEN FANFICTION)(WIP)(NOT A SHIP) Chapter 16: The Ravine, a roblox fanfic

{THE FATHER STARES AT THE MELTED CORPSE}

{IT IS HIS FAULT. HE CHOSE TO TEST IT ON HIS OWN SON.

HE TRUSTED THE CLOUDS.

TOO MUCH.

HOW COULD HE EVER TRUST THE CLOUDS?

OF COURSE.

OF COURSE HE IS RAIN.

HE WOULD HAVE GONE NOWHERE WITHOUT THE CLOUDS.

THE CLOUDS SAVED HIM.

SO MANY TIMES.

HE COULDN'T EVEN FULFILL THE CLOUDS WISH WITHOUT SCREWING UP!

IT COST HIM THE RAVINE

THE RAVINE THAT HE LOVED

THE RAVINE THAT HE HAD MADE EVAPORATED.

HE GOT NOTHING FROM IT}

(YOU GOT NOTHING FROM IT.

WHAT HAVE YOU DONE? 007N7?

Math equation…?)

…

007n7: "What…?"

"What is this shit?"

"Holy shit."

"HOLY SHIT!"

"B-"

"BLUDDUDE."

"BLUDDUDE!"

"WHAT THE FUCK!?"

[FALLS TO THE FLOOR]

[PUTS HIS HANDS ON HIS HEAD]

"Whatthefuckwhatthefuckwhatthefuckwhatthefuckwhatthefuckwhatthefuckwhatthefuckw

hatthefuck"

"NO!"

[THE RAIN LOOKS UP AND STARES AT THE RAVINE'S CORPSE ONCE AGAIN]

{THE RAVINES SKIN ARE STILL SLOWLY POURING DOWN ONTO THE GROUND}

"THIS IS FUCKING BULLSHIT! WHAT THE FUCK!"

{HE QUICKLY LAUNCHES HIMSELF FORWARD AND THEN ONTO THE GROUND AGAIN.}

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA"

FUCKER

SHIT

OH MY FUCKING GOD WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE

FUCK.

"No."

"No!"

"God did this."

"Destiny did this."

"I'm gonna fucking RESPECT IT"

"CAUSE IF I DON'T ILL RPOABABLY GET FUCKING TORN APART."

"YOU HEAR THAT?"

GOD!

"SHIT"

[HEAVY BREATHING]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

[HEAVY PANTING]

FINE!

FINE, GOD!

IM GONNA BE A FCKING MURDERER

FUCK YOU!

[HEAVY PANTING]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

{FRANTICALLY LOOKS AROUND THE ROOM}

[HEAVY PANTING]

[RUNS OVER TO THE TRASHCAN]

[PICKS IT UP AND FLIPS IT UPSIDE DOWN.]

[GLASS SHATTERS ON THE FLOOR]

[CRUMPLED UP PAPER FALLS ON THE FLOOR]

[HEAVY PANTING]

[PULLS OUT TRASHBAG]

[THROWS TRASHCAN ON FLOOR]

[BANG!]

[RUNS]

[TRIPS]

[LOOKS UP AT THE CORPSE]

[LAUNCHES HIMSELF FORWARD]

[HEAVY PANTING]

[FORCEFULLY PULLS OUT KEYS FROM HIS POCKET]

[STRUGGLES TO GET THE LOCKS OPEN]

[OPENS ONE]

[HEAVY PANTING]

[PULLS ON CHAINS]

[HEAVY PANTING]

[unlocks rest of the chains]

{CRASH!}

…

{The father looks at his son's corpse once more, his melted body on the floor with flesh all

around him. His skin is barely even skin anymore, but rather a thick substance mixed with

mercury.

The father stares at the 12-year-olds skull.

It's barely hidden beneath the "skin." blood is still slowly pouring from it in all directions,

his eyeballs are buried beneath all the "skin" and he is still melting away.

away.

away

away.}

[PANTING]

[GLANCES AT THE TRASH BAG.]

[THE FATHER BEGINS TO THROW ALL THE REMNANTS OF HIS SON IN THE

TRASHBAG.

BLOOD COVERS HIS HANDS AND SPLATTERS ALL OVER HIS FACE.]

[HEAVY PANTING]

[TIES UP TRASHBAG.]

[HE STARES AT THE EMPTY SYRINGE ON THE FLOOR.]

…

[PICKS IT UP AND THROWS IT ON THE WALL.

IT SHATTERS AND DROPS INTO THE POOL OF SHATTERED VODKA BOTTLES.]

[THE FATHER QUICKLY RUNS OUT THE ROOM AND UP THE STAIRS.]

FAILURE.

[at a ravine.]

[SWERVE!]

[STOMPS ON BRAKES.]

[HEAVY BREATHING]

…

"Bluddude…?"

…

"We used to always come here.

You liked this place.

We used to fish here a lot.

Remember when…

C00lkid fell in the water and you laughed at him?

I would have laughed too, honest!

I just..didn't wanna be mean…

…

I remember when you caught an electric eel!

You screamed so loud it felt my eardrums were going to burst!

…

Ha….

I still remember that "will" you made when you were younger.

You made it here!

You…remember…?

{Flashback}

007n7: "careful! You're gonna fall in the water!"

Bluddude: "Oh! Good idea!"

[Continues writing.]

….

"What're you writing, anyway?"

Bluddude: "A will!"

007n7: "A-A what?"

Bluddude: "And I'm gonna give my PlayStation4 to myself…and if I fall in the water and

die I'm blaming C00lkid…"

[007n7 snickers]

"You're creating a will?"

Bluddude: "Yup!"

[007n7 leans over to look at the "will"]

…

007n7: "Bluddude, you can't just give everything to yourself!"

Bluddude: "Says who?"

007n7: "Says…"

…

"Uh…"

…

Bluddude: "You're just saying that 'cause you want something!"

"No I'm not!"

Bluddude: "Yes you ArRrRRRrrRRRrrRRRee!"

"I-okay-...?"

Bluddude: "You're never getting anything!"

"O-Okay-"

Bluddude: "Haha!"

T_T…

{Present}

…

"You know…"

"I still remember…"

"You said…"

"If you were gonna die.."

"You wanted to die in an 'awesome' way…!"

"You only said it a couple times…but…"

"You wanted to go into this very ravine, swim around, and then just disappear."

"You wanted to be carried in a royal carriage, ridden by kings and queens, and the

horses would run into the ravine.

A band in the back of the carriage would be playing your favorite song… and everyone

would just be thrown into the ravine, and they would all be in some sort of "space." And

then disappear into golden flames."

"It was always nonsensical to me, but…

But you deserve it, my boy.

[crying]

"Now I [voice crack] obviously can't make that happen, but…"

…

"God.."

"I-"

"I love you, son."

…

[forcefully shoves CD into CD player.]

[Skips to 2nd track]

[Still crying]

…

Car radio: "I was happy in the haze of a drunken hour…"

[Puts the car in neutral]

[exits car and slams the car door.]

[The car slowly rolls down the grass and into the ravine.]

…

[SPARK!]

[THE CAR ERUPTS INTO GOLDEN FLAMES.]

[THE FATHER IS STARING AND CRYING AT THE FLAMES.]

…

[RUNS AWAY INTO THE FOREST]